give this all the criticism in the world! idc!

shhh, it looks really great!
your jaw pain will go away... it's unfortunate ur jaw hurts, but it'll be fine :3
Shruikan: "heh... Daros... can i eat him?" eve

i know it will. but still. i can barely eat now. and it's dinner time.
Daros: no. Cyrus wants him alive.

aw omo
eattt soouuuppp XD
Shruikan: "aw... oh wel...."

i wish i had thought about soup earlier :/
oh, and i believe you complimented this earlier, thank you
*Daros transforms back into his demon form* how long do you think it'll take for people to notice he's gone?

Shruikan: "not long. but it's already too late, heh..."

*he pokes Zack's cheek, he's laying on the floor, tied up and unconcious* what does Cyrus even want out of Elfheim? it's just a rock.

Shruikan: "it's simple. he wants to rule the universe. any rock is worth conquering. even if it's tough. besides, if we don't deal with them now, they'll be a thron in our sides later."

Daros: so decimate the population but leave enough to keep the race alive. we have the resources. i don't know why he doesn't just give the order and get it over with.

Shruikan: "i do not doubt Cyrus's orders. Syn... he is worried about that pagen god.... but we will see. If he ever does give the order, I'll carry it out completely in one day."

*Daros sneers* Syn is but a myth. thought up by adults to force children to be "good".

Shruikan: "it's better to be safe then sorry. that barrier in the center of the world certainly gives the myth some reality.... If it ever comes, I'm here to take it on."

Daros: hmph.

Shruikan: "why are you in such a mood?"

Daros: Cyrus won't stop playing these silly games with the elves. now that we have their General they're totally hopeless

Shruikan: "heh, indeed. There's not much more they can do except hope and pray for a miracle... that I'll shoot down if it ever comes."

Daros: it'll never come because it isn't real. it's just what they tell themselves. they're very foolish beings.

Shruikan: "yes... i agree... it's a fantasy, but i still am cautious none the less.."

*Daros sighs* there are no such things as "good gods". only evil ones.

Shruikan: "mm..."

Daros: by the way, what happened to your world?

Shruikan: "no one knows."

Daros: it just...died? did it have a name?

Shruikan: *sigh* "my home world... Altina Exaltium. It was.. attacked while I was away settling a treaty... communications were lost, so I had no idea until I return. I don't know or have heard of any real survivors, out side of three male siblings that are Ends like me now... no way to continue our race. Our world is uninhabitable and no way of making it liveable. I locked it away in a rift dimension. A memorium, a grave to those lost. I have no idea what happened. Everything is ash and ruins. No plants. No atmosphere. The core is dead. All signs of life are gone. Plant, animal, Altian. Even drones. Who or what ever attacked was immensly powerful to take us down. We were the most powerful race known of. And they took us down in 5-15 minutes."

^Altima Exaltium... typossssss

*Daros genuinely awed* that's... wow. that's awful.

Shruikan: "eh... yea... it does weigh on me..."

*Daros is quiet, he really doesn't know what to say about the matter*

Shruikan: "Welp, I'm off to empty out the prisons and make soldiers.."
*he walks off*
[end?]

sure