I like this drawing. You have a good eye for shapes and curves. Also the way you design the hair at the ends is cool and give alot of charcter to this person. I would suggest pushing the highlights and shadowing more inorder to get a better depth in the face. Regardless this is a good first drawing. :]

Thank you so much! It was hard to understand the layering process at first and how i was going to go about it. I got it now, haha :D. Anyway Im glad you enjoyed it and maybe next time Ill impress you more.