EDIT: Story up! ^-^
#CwHaley Disclaimer: Haley is basically based off of me [yea rl name is Haley] except for the siblings/parents n their role, the color core n sword, the war, the world, and some other stuff.
I'll start in the comments, and PLEASE DONT COMMENT UNTILL IM DONE! I'd like it to not be broken up. Oh n no chatting here k? I dun need the pushing in tne comments..XD
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23 Aug, 2014, 10:16 pm
PS: Broken up by Age!! .:Starting at 9 y/o:.
AGE:NINE YEAR: 2KIO/2KII
Haley was just a normal kid in Crystalia; carefree, independent, and creative. She excelled in school like her twin sister, Crystal, and her older sis, Annabelle. Her parents werent rich nor poor, but at times did financially struggle. In June, her bday month, she was with some school friends when she got some dreadful news: a fire burnt down her home and k!lled her family, meaning she is the only survivor from her home. In grieving, she refused to live with her aunt and live on the streets, since she believed that it will make her tougher, confident, and vocal. She even ditched her old clothes for a white/sky blue hoodie, the same as the town's symbol colors.
--Age nine complete--
23 Aug, 2014, 10:23 pm
AGE: TEN YEAR: 2KII/ 2KI2
Every weekend Haley would visit her aunt for dinner and for some casual chats. Haley's aunt would even lend her some money for food! One weekend however changed her life. After her aunt told her that around her age the start to get flickers of their color core, Haley's started to appear. Sparks of sky blue started to fizzle from her hand, making Haley quite shocked. In awe, her aunt called the current resident in the Crystalia Castle, saying that her color core started to flicker Sky Blue. SKY BLUE. Haley, remembering a lesson school came to realize that it meant she's next in line to rule the whole country/town of Crystalia. As a Ten year old, it was really surprising, and in mere minutes, people had came to take her away for further examination.
--AGE TEN COMPLETE--
23 Aug, 2014, 10:27 pm
AGE: ELEVEN YEAR 2KI2/ 2KI3
By now Haley was now in training to master this rare color core, and took speacil lessons on what to use it for. She was treated like a royal princess, which she HATED. The hoodie became a sky blue t-shirt, and the bandage became unwrapped since the hidden scar healed. Haley also lost her little Gem barrette in training making it break in to pieces. As a trainee, she was used as a secret weapon in wars, cause her power was too strong and can become uncontrolable at a young age.
--AGE ELEVEN COMPLETE--
23 Aug, 2014, 10:35 pm
AGE: TWELVE YEAR: 2KI3/2KI4
Haley became more able to control her new powers, as the time slowly came for her to become the next Crystalian Ruler. While walking in one of the many Gem caves, Haley came across a stone with a Topaz sword in it. Next to the rock laid a message:
"Whoever can pull the sword free from its prison shall be granted with a mythical skill that the Greatest Crystalian Warrior can only learn."
She had read many legends bout this Sword, which many failed its test. Determined as Haley is, she went to try it. She put her hands on the hilt, and it smoothly came out. Her wrists began to glow, and the sign of the Greatest Warrior appear. It may sound silly, but it was two sky blue wrist bands, one on each wrist. As she exited, every crouded her in awe and jealousy, as she quickly made it back to the castle to show her teacher. The teacher, amazed, had to call in the swordmaster, as she began to master the skill of sword fights too.
--AGE TWELVE COMPLETE--
23 Aug, 2014, 10:44 pm
PPS: Crap, forgot years are school years sorry! XD
AGE: THIRTEEN [Current] YEAR: 2KI3/2KI34 [Current]
The time had come: Haley has mastered swordfighting and the use of the color core, making her ready to rule Crystalia. As everyone went to the ceremony, Haley slowly walked out of the back door into the courtyard, the castle aids helped her into the ceremonial throne. Everyone watched has the Cyan crown was placed on her head, and suddenly a sky blue glow consumed Haley's body. It blinded everyone there for a few minutes, untill it dimmed down. When it disappeared, Haley's sky blue t-shirt has been replaced with the cyan/sky blue plaid shirt w/ a sky blue under shirt. The wristbands stayed. Across the chest however laid a silver sash that took role as a sword holder, as now her Topaz sword was neatly on her back. Everyone bowed and then got up, cheering loudly. Haley's "new" life as the ruler officially started.
--BACK STORY ENDED--
23 Aug, 2014, 10:50 pm
PPPPS: CRAP AGAIN! Messed up on the years!! Act like there was NO YEARS WRITTEN, k? XD
23 Aug, 2014, 10:52 pm
Oh my god! OoO
23 Aug, 2014, 10:53 pm
Cool!
24 Aug, 2014, 5:02 am
This art cool! ^^
24 Aug, 2014, 8:41 pm
Wow! That was an amazing back story, Haley! 8 )
I understand the mistakes that were mentioned. I make quite a few when I write stories, too. ; )