Andrew´s story by Brisa!450
Hello! :D
So I´ll writte Andrew´s story! nwn
I´ll start in the comments. :)
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20 Aug, 2014, 3:04 pm
aw so adorable! >w< soooo awaii and cute! <(owo)>
20 Aug, 2014, 3:11 pm
"When he was a child,Andrew used to live in an orphanate.But he wasn´t very happy there.There was three boys that always bullied him.One day,this kids was going to bullied him again,when,another kid moved in front Andrew.He said: -Stop! Why you always bullye him? -Then,that boy punched one of the bulliers and they ran away.-T-Thanks...-said Andrew.-You´re welcome.-said the boy.His name was Shizen.Shizen and Andrew were best friends.They had a lot of fun! But some years later,
Shizen wanted to escape from the orphante.But Andrew was very afraid and he said that he didn´t want to.Shizen said ungry: -But you said that we were brothers.Come on! Live here is bored I want to see the world! -I said that I don´t want to.-Shizen looks Andrew very ungry- You´re a stupid lyer. -Then,Shizen escaped throught a window.
The next years Andrew felt a little bit lonely.But he met new friends and he started to felt good.And,one day,a man wanted to adopted him.
(continue in another comment!)
20 Aug, 2014, 3:20 pm
The day before been adopted,Andrew was in his bedroom when...Shizen looked Andrew throught the window.
-Oh Andrew congrats. -Shizen?!
-Hello "brother". -I-I can´t believe it! -Andrew,why you abandoned me? Your only friend that protected you? -...I wanted to live here.Because I wanted a family,and know,I have one. -Shizen giggled -You will always act like a little kid. -No Shizen...you can´t understant...
-Bye. -Shizen ran away,Andrew could see a police man following his "brother".
The next day,Andrew saw his new father.He smiled and he hugged him. (hugged or huged?)
Then,Andrew discovered his passion for the videogames.
And,he met Laty and Ashly,but that is another story..."
The end! :D
Maybe the narration is bad sorry. xC English isn´t my native language.
20 Aug, 2014, 3:21 pm
I´m so glad you like it! nwn
I´ll draw Shizen soon!
20 Aug, 2014, 3:41 pm
Brisa, your art is so cute! I love looking through your gallery! ^-^
20 Aug, 2014, 6:18 pm
This was a little sad in the beginning, but it turn out okay at the end. I can't wait to see how his friend look like
20 Aug, 2014, 6:50 pm
another happy ending :>
20 Aug, 2014, 7:23 pm
I wonder who his parents are.
20 Aug, 2014, 7:27 pm
wow! awesome ^u^
20 Aug, 2014, 9:11 pm
awwwwww how sweet!!
re:
andrew: hello other andrew :D
21 Aug, 2014, 2:31 am
Great story! ^u^ -b
21 Aug, 2014, 9:13 am
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