Cloudeye is a rouge who left the clan due to her dull sense's, she has cataracts in her left eye (Hence the name clouded eye). She lived as a rouge for quite sometime before finding a dea.d she cat with her four kits near a thunderpath.Cloudedeye began to leave she until she heard a faint mew.One of the kits was still alive.She managed to get help from a loner named Layla who currently had kittens. She has raised Pinesong by the warrior code and loves her dearly. #Hallowolfref #Hallowolf
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07 Aug, 2014, 3:29 pm
Thanks :3
08 Aug, 2014, 12:49 am
They're definitely safe from being bad, or not original, but Pinesong's kinda bland. /:U I don't mean that's bad, but they're sorta both the nice people that just are nicey nice. /:I While Cloudedeye has a definite physical weakness and a mental weakness, Pinesong doesn't really have a mental weakness. What I mean by mental weakness is something she's afraid of internally, something that's caused by HERSELF, not by another force, things she cannot help (such as cats leaving her, and no cat can stop water). She's sorta the nice person character in which they don't have real flaws, which makes a character compelling. No one is perfect. /:l No one lacks a weakness. She is gullible, but that's not really a flaw, and rather naivety. /:U Maybe she's scared she'll fail Cloudedeye? Or maybe she's scared she's going to fail something?.. A true mental flaw shows. a compelling character /:> I hoped this didn't sound too mean, I don't want it to sound mean.. But I hoped I helped. /:D