When You Shine Like the Stars by Kodiak
-NOTE: 3D is clearer, literally. XD-
Alright guys, this is for the DoW Couple Contest. RapidRaven is my entry, and I need your help, yes YOURS! -has Uncle Sam costume on- I need you guys to critique the description of these two. Tell me how I can improve it, how to make so you understand the relationship. It'll be in the comments.
#RapidstreakSS #SonicStar #BestOfSonic #Fireflies #Ravenpaw #Rapidpaw #RapidRaven #Raven #Feather #Night #Sky #Starry #Stars #Moon #Romantic #Cats
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01 Aug, 2014, 5:10 pm
amazing work! :D
01 Aug, 2014, 5:17 pm
Here's the description of the couple. It's supposed to have sone history, so tell me how I can improve it!
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The story of these two CloudClan cats is beyond what anyone would have expected. Rapidpaw is an outsider, always avoiding his Clanmates at all costs, while Ravenpaw is a happy-go-lucky she-cat with a warm heart. These two met on what seemed like an average day. They spent some time together, mainly on teaching the young tom how to hunt. The bond of the two grew by the moment as the time passed on. Rapidpaw was growing out of his cold self and was laughing, joking around, letting loose for the first time. Ravenpaw accepted Rapidpaw for who he was, and one of the only cats trying to become even closer. But things took a turn, a turn of love. They both began to grow feelings for eachother. Although these two apprentice's have already conf.essed their feelings for eachother, it'll be soon until they'll both be in each other's hearts.
01 Aug, 2014, 5:23 pm
Awwwww, too cute! To improve would be impossible. XP
01 Aug, 2014, 5:26 pm
Maaaaybe make the black kitty less black so we can see her smile? Idunnoitsperfect.
01 Aug, 2014, 6:05 pm
Cute
01 Aug, 2014, 6:17 pm
Its perfect!
01 Aug, 2014, 9:14 pm
Omg howcute, your style is so cute omfg.
02 Aug, 2014, 1:38 am
Nice 3d!:D And i LOVE the effects :3