Braveclaw by Purplecat
My own cat I made up personaly my favorite cat. Sorry the words are so thick so im gonna just put it right here. She's loving gentle wise loyal never gives up and she's very pretty. She's a warrior her apprentice is Snowpaw. Her clan is Thunder clan. Her leader is Firestar. She's deputy.Sorry the painting is so bad. Its been a long time sense I have got on. But anyways enjoy:D
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30 Apr, 2015, 11:48 pm
dude you've gotta add some flaws to your character, or else it'll seem like a mary sue. It's fine to have good personality traits, but not giving it any personality flaws or weaknesses makes your character a mary sue. just a suggestion though.
15 Apr, 2017, 5:56 pm
You are totally correct! I made this character when I was super young so I thought it had to be perfect. Recently I made her backstory be that she was abandoned by her mother because she is the runt. Her mother refused to name Braveclaw so the leader did. Thank you so much for commenting!