The man turned and he recognised it imediately. "What are you doing here @ghostlord?" The more important question is, what are you doing here?" He replies. Santos quickly hides the rose behind his back. "Nothing important. Just checking on Bobby." He says. "Heh, somehow she convinced me to hang out with her. Theres a silence and suddenly its broken with a glass breaking shrill. "What the f****?!" Santos says. @Ghostlord reacts fast and kicks the door 3 times before it knocks down. He runs in and Santos follows. They head towards the bedroom were the scream came from. Stay still! This is the only way to give you the curse! (theres an adult themed scene. If your a child, i would advise to stop reading this series.) "F****!" santos says and @Ghostlord grabs the man by the hair on the back of his head. The man elbows him in the stomache, jumping out the window. "You go after him, ill take care of bobby!" Santos says. " (cont)

very interesting so far...
you nailed it with my character, swearing included xD

re: don't worry, I get your point xD

I fell asleep while typing. On with the story! @Ghostlord stood still for a moment, one hand on his knee and the other around his stomache. He pushed himself up, and with a shine in his eyes, he jumped out the window. Santos shifted nervously, and decided to grab a blanket and cover Bobby up. Suddenly he noticed the rose he once held, sitting on the ground, lonely. No, not a good time. He thought to himself. He saw her clothes sprawled across the floor and blushed scarlet, gathering the clothes and putting it on the bed. "What the hell did he mean by curse?" He said. Bobbys hand slid slowly to a scetchbook on her windowsill. she slid it over to herself, flipping to a page she showed Santos. It read in sloppy handwriting "I cant speak, it feels like a bullet got shot strait through my head, and when i do, stange things happen." A few teardrops were visable on the page and she turned it, sliding a note out. The note read in neat cursive (cont.)

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l HEy im heading . l
lLas vegas, so . l
l Pursue on with your.l
l MagnificEnt life. l
l love-mama l
l P.S Pen15-brother. l
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She grabbed a shading pencil, scribbling quickly on her notebook. She showed it to him. "At first i thought it was a joke, but i think shes serious." It read. She curled her legs up to her chest, forming into a ball, weeping silently. What do i do? Santos thought. Suddenly @ghostlord jumped through the window, panting like a dog. "He got away..." He said. "He said its too late. What does that mean!?" He exclaimed. They all had no clue what was going on, including that this was only the beggining.

Poor Santos! I'm root'n for ya buddy, you'll find the right time for them roses. 0.0 yea that's right GhostLord is a romantic softy so what? Wanna fight about it? lol Wish you would draw it again.You have the time and there is a faster button. Great story so far....O.o I'm goin to ch.3 now...but so help me if I GhostLord fights with Santos over that girl ima be ticked!