Ayyyyyyyyy by NorthernBird

Edit: HOW THE HELL DOES THIS GET MORE LIKES THAN THINGS I ACTUALLY WORK ON HOOOOOWWWWWWWW?!

So I'm bored. And I wanna tell you guys a story... but do you want me to? If I get enough yeses, I'll tell 5 of them... hehehe... I need your feedback because I'm making secret gifts for secret people... >:D

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27 Jul, 2014, 5:08 am
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happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 5:09 am

YES >:D

Catcrazy

27 Jul, 2014, 5:12 am

yusss

Lillie-Senpai

27 Jul, 2014, 5:13 am

Yes! But I'm kind of already drifting to sleep...

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 5:15 am

im NOCTURNAL *rawr* and i perwaded flicca to let me be a queen w u x3

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:22 am

Okay, I'll get everything straight then I'll get back to y'all x3

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 5:28 am

i havent drawn her yet xD but its echobreeze

Lillie-Senpai

27 Jul, 2014, 5:29 am

Good night peeps! zzzzzzzz

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:31 am

Okie, here I gooooooo!

There was once a little village,
upon a hill of green,
it lived a rather fertile age,
and on a good meat- lean.

Until a fearsome creature came,
to pillage and ravage,
and forsake the village's name,
for it would scavange.

Burning it into ashes,
ashes to cinders,
to skulls it bashes,
to flesh as tinder.

The great beast left,
leaving only a girl in it's wake,
but she was only in death,
and all she heard was the lake.

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:33 am

(the girl was deaf, but she was scared so she ran and fell into the lake, hence, death. ^^)

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 5:33 am

did you come up with that? if you did your soooo ligit dood :o

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:37 am

I KNOW I AM. OK NEXT ONE. XD

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 5:39 am

once there was a girl,
none to smart you see,
she went for a walk
but went right into a tree.

She waved it off,
stumbling away,
and she shuffled tword a old lady,
being a deranged pschopath she is (not just) today.

She begged and hugged,
telling storys of how idiotic she was,
as the old lady looked like #bleckkk,
saying how insane she t'was.

The girl scrabled away,
telling tales of doughn.uts,
screaching in that creepy way,
and along the path influting cuts.

She screeched and hollared,
finnaly giving way,
for she laughed,
insanely that day.

She lived happly ever after for the next twenty minutes before colapsing on the ground de.ad.

THE END! :D
i came up with it just now. do ya like it?

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:44 am

Oh sweet release,
take me in your grasp,
no matter my brow crease,
no matter how I gasp,
hold me tightly,
for you are one I trust,
for the light is slowly dimming,
now you leave me to rust.

In the golden age,
of my lethal prison,
the waters were of sage,
pure and clean- just like a prisim.

Now they are unholy,
filled with bones and rot,
with metal creatures rolling,
waste for my blood to clot.

O, dear ocean blue,
why can't I be like you?

Still and unmoving,
dead as a shilling.

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:45 am

YES I LOVED IT ENCOOORE :DDDDD

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:52 am

OMG SUN MODELS BY ODEZA IS ON PANDORA INSTAPERATION! XD

There were once two girls,
who believed in anything,
for one was a cot of squirrels,
and one a sound of ping.

So they dressed quite fine,
poured themselves rum,
danced in a low line,
twirling into the sun.

For they had forgotten,
of the old flaming pot,
one they had gotten,
but now they sit and rot.

For they forgot the whiskey and rye,
and that a belief harbors a lie.

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 5:52 am

*whispers* NORTHEY IS A SHEIL SILVERSTEIN2!

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:54 am

I'm a... what?

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 5:58 am

Oh and the summary for the 2nd one was that a dood was sad that his waifu drowned so he jumped into the water and his waifu spirit wanted him to live so she tried to take him back but his will was too strong so she could just keep him alive down there. then hoomans polluted everything and he wanted to die for realzies but never did xD

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 6:00 am

o xD and hes a famous poem guy thingy

happybrick

27 Jul, 2014, 6:07 am

famous poet XDXDXD

FliccaFang_Abandoned

27 Jul, 2014, 6:13 am

Nice poems! I am ok at poems but not right off the bat.

ReverendForks

27 Jul, 2014, 3:26 pm

NO NB!YOU MAST MAKE MOAR POEMS!THEY'RE VERRI INTRESTING!SXDS

ReverendForks

27 Jul, 2014, 3:41 pm

It a quiet day
for a girl like me
to approchly say
with pride and glee

"Oh how the grass
how it rolls and flows
by the wind lass
but stops and grows."

"The water was fine
at a point,d.angerous
but is it true at a time
or am I being...Outrageous?

The fire glows bright
in in a fiercen red
Enough to raze a city right
or am I...already dead?

The earth can't bad
It's not so quick
but when awoke it can k!ll a lad
Now that's sick!

The air is calm now,
It's very clear,
Its strong winds strikes!Ow!
and my poem ends here...

Do you like it? :D

ReverendForks

27 Jul, 2014, 4:40 pm

^ *can't be bad* XD

NorthernBird

27 Jul, 2014, 10:12 pm

yeeee IT WAS SO PERF KNK OMG xD it was aCTUALLY RLLY COOOOOL X3

mutated-monster-cat

28 Jul, 2014, 5:03 am

there was a crooked man he walk a crooked mile

he found a crooked sixpence apon a crooked stile

he bought a crooked cat which caught a crooked mouse

and they all lived together in a little crooked house

stole from the game "crooked man" cause i can!

NorthernBird

28 Jul, 2014, 10:16 pm

@mmc: omg even dat last line doe xD

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