Crystalstar licked Redstar's ear and said "I'm going to hunt I'll be back soon." Redstar smiled and said "Stay safe my love." Crystalstar headed over to the entrance and saw the morning border patrol come in, It was made up of Jaggedfang a shecat and her apprentice Blackpaw a young tom and Whitefang an elderly tom with his last apprentise Bramblepaw, a young tom. "Good morning." Bramblepaw greated as Crystalstar aproached, "Good morning are you ready to become warriors?" Crystalstar asked, both apprentises eagerly nodded and then Whitefang said "They are definantly ready just as I'm ready for the elders den." Crystalstar smiled and said "You have served long and hard." After saying goodbye Crystalstar headed into the forest. (continued)

Once Crystalstar reached the forest she began hunting, she caught a plump squirrel and then headed back to the den. When Crystalstar entered she saw the whole clan gathered below High Stone and Redstar speaking to them. "Oh, they are having the Warrior Cerimony." Crystalstar said as she headed over to High Stone. [More soon]

Hope this comment isn't cutting your story. It's interesting none the less ^-^ Anyway, thanks for your comment. I'd like to see this story continued.

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