wait a second by Neckless Chickenman

Last night, in my insomnia, I came up with a comic idea to do after TCoS that would be much better than a Nuzlocke comic.
But there's one problem, of which is rather... questionable:
The main character of said comic would be Sophie and I's daughter.
//shot

uh

._.

//hides in corner of shame

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29 Jun, 2014, 3:41 pm
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Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 3:45 pm

[Chalk and Vulasaur..? .-.]
No, she'd be completely a new character.

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 5:41 pm

Sorry about randomly disappearing; I had to go somewhere and didn't get the chance to tell you I was leaving. (^^;

I've seen that tag somewhere before... :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 5:43 pm

And now I have to go again. >_>
But I'll be back soon! :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:12 pm

Honestly, I have no idea where the idea came from. I was up really late just sitting in bed. :u
I think my thought process went somewhat like this:
I came up with some scene where I was protecting you from something, and then I thought:
''What if we had a child I was also protecting them?''
And then a story just kind of evolved from that. :v

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:14 pm

//looks up Escape From the City
oh my gosh I remember this song from when I was like 7 xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:15 pm

I actually get shot on like the fourth page of the comic. :U

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:23 pm

He probably would've shown you his huge collection of spaceships he made of Legos. :v

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:24 pm

There are at least 20 of them. xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:29 pm

A few are, but the majority of them aren't especially large.
Although, one of them has a functioning cannon. :v

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:35 pm

Flash and I never followed the instructions and just kind of made enourmous structures. xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:38 pm

I can't really either... :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:42 pm

Well in every page but the prologue, she's a fully grown adult. :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:44 pm

And I imagine I probably did a lot of the parenting at the beginning, before I died.
And then Flash did the rest. xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:44 pm

Would you like a sort of premise of the story? :v

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:45 pm

You must've missed the comment where I said I get shot on like the fourth page. xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:46 pm

It's kind of the main drive for the plot... xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:47 pm

Then let me rephrase that:
I am mur.dered in the prologue. :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:48 pm

It might take a bit to write out, and is told from our daughter's view. (which, in the thought stage, is named Summer. :U )

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 6:54 pm

And now I have to leave to see HTTYD2.
My family seems to want to drag me around a lot today. :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 9:46 pm

That name sounds familiar...
//gives it a listen
Yep I've definitely heard this before; I think my mom has it on her iPod. xD

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 9:48 pm

Now to finally type that premise... :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:01 pm

''Hello, my name is Summer.
I've lived a pretty terrible life.
Fifteen years ago, when I was only three years old, a mysterious person entered my house, with no warning.
They carried a firearm, and seemed to be cloaked in shadows. They seemed to seek out my mother and I.
My father burst into the room, and pushed my mother and I out of the range of the stranger's firearm.
''Do whatever you wish to me, but don't you dare lay so much as a finger on Sophie or Summer!'' he shouted at the stranger.
''Is Daddy going to be okay?'' I asked my mother.
She looked up at him.
''I... I don't know.''
''Sophie. Take Summer and get as far away from this place as you can.''
Mother simply nodded at Father. She slung me over her shoulder, and bolted out the room.
Right as we were exiting, I heard a gunshot.
Father's blood was splattered across the room.
''DADDY!!'' I shouted, uselessly flopped over Mother's shoulder.''
[continued in next comment...]

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:06 pm

''She ran as fast as her legs could take her, shedding tears the whole way.
She took me to my uncle's house, before leaving me there.
That was the last time I saw Mother.
My uncle then raised me for the rest of my life, and I was pitiful. I wanted to be back with Mother and Father.
But I knew that could never come true. So I swore that I would the stranger that mur.dered Father, and make them pay.''

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:13 pm

You'll just have to find out.. >:3

It's still very much in the thought stage, so a lot can be changed. :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:14 pm

Father figure.
There you go. :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:19 pm

Our characters' child? :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:21 pm

This is how I expected you to initially react... :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:24 pm

You obviously didn't. :u

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:25 pm

Reading your first comment, I thought:
''Is she really okay with this? This doesn't sound like something she would be okay with.''
:U

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:27 pm

If you're really not okay with the idea, I don't have to use it... .-.

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:32 pm

I'm sorry for even proposing the idea in the first place...

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:40 pm

//goes to cower in corner of shame

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:42 pm

Extremely.

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:43 pm

Yes, I'm fine.
I just feel like I'm a complete idiot now..

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:44 pm

derp

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:50 pm

...if only we could just hug each other now...
That would make me feel better on any day. A shame we can't...

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 10:57 pm

Eh...
Who knows? Maybe the idea will grow on you...

I'd like to thank you ever so much for the thought, but it'll never be the same as feeling your true embrace...
-supposedly hugs back-

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 11:00 pm

//audibly sighs

Neckless Chickenman

29 Jun, 2014, 11:20 pm

I suppose..
Anyways, I feel a bit better now.
(Oddly after drawing a sketch of Summer, and she's what made me feel bad in the first place')

Fort Zinder-Flash

30 Jun, 2014, 4:46 pm

its your sounaus

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