Muffin sat, surrounded by the others, around a fire.
"I'm gonna KILL that little..." muttered Muffin.
"Sorry?" said E. Muffin jumped and replied: "Nothing, nothing." She threw another log onto the fire. Endie walked in carrying a stack of sticks.
"Got them," he panted. Boom followed, balancing sticks on his head.
"Me too! Now can I have the bagel?" he asked.
"Yes, Boom, you can have the bagel." laughed Muffin, tossing it to him.
"Finally!" cried Boom, chowing down.

Suddenly, the room went dark. An icy wind blew around the room.
"Herobrine," breathed Muffin. As she sat there, blindly, she heard E scream. When the lights came back on, the others were gone. A window was smashed. Muffin suddenly felt blood trickle down her ear. She felt an odd sensation, like something was being unlocked, and tried to heal it. She couldn't. Bit there were bigger things to worry about! Like finding her friends! She stood up and set off, straight to Herobrine's Castle.

Muffin stood outside the great, black, forbidding castle and gulped. It was just as dark and scary as she remembered it.
"Let me in!" she yelled. The great gates slowly opened with an ominous creak. It was quiet. Too quiet. Only the cawing of a bird broke the icy silence. Muffin stepped inside...

The hall loomed, the ceiling towering way above Muffin's head. She gulped. Black pillars lined the sides of the corridor, with rooms either side. Herobrine sat at the end of the hallway. As Muffin stood there, the front doors slammed shut.
"Well, well, well. Muffin."

Muffin looked at Herobrine.
"You." she said angrily. Herobrine smiled.
"We have a full house in the dungeon today, Muffin. Thought you might like to see." Herobrine gestured behind his throne. Chained to the back wall were Carina, E, Endie and Boom - and next to them, looking weak and old, Notch.
"What the..."
"Fight, and they might be freed."
"Fine."

Herobrine teleported to behind Muffin, who wheeled round and put her fists up. Darting around, Muffin landed a blow on Herobrine, who suddenly froze her. Clicking his fingers, he grabbed a sword out of thin air. Muffin's eyes widened.
"No," she breathed. Carina, E, Endie and Boom strained to escape the obsidian chains, but to no avail. Muffin fell to the floor. Herobrine stood above her, sword poised, when suddenly Notch was next to him. Notch knocked the blade out of Herobrine's hands. The knife clattered across the floor.
"You shouldn't be here, brother." Notch said quietly. Herobrine just laughed.
"Why not? Too scared to face me - or my creation?" Notch clenched his fists.
"You don't have a creation, brother. You only influenced mobs demise to evil. I won't let you hurt Muffin." Herobrine started laughing even harder.
"Why would I hurt my own creation? Remember Minion? Well, this isn't her. This is another creation. A special child with potent evil powers. Muffin."

Now it was Notch's turn to laugh.
"Muffin? She's not evil. She's positively an angel!" Muffin glowed. Notch thought highly of her!
"But you don't get it, do you, brother? Muffin is your creation, but she is MY creature. All I need to do is start the evil power I inflicted with that cut on her face. That's why it cannot be healed - evil. All I need to do is..." Herobrine finished speaking. He brought up his blade, ready to strike, but only cut along the scar he had created when he kidnapped Carina, E, Endie and Boom. Shadows began to surround Muffin. She closed her eyes, crying out in pain, as darkness engulfed her. When the black left, she opened her eyes. They were as cold and white as his.
"Yes! I have succeeded! Now Muffin is mine. She is, in essence... my daughter!"

~end of chapter~

Okay, I'm done. Never writing again.

Okay, jk, I'll finish the series. Just for you guys.

cool

i don't want to sound mean or anything, but that whole thing with Muffin's cut on her face and that it can't be healed and all, that's kinda copying my first story...

Really? Oh. Um... I didn't take your advice to read ROH before ROE so... y'know... sorry. I didn't know. I can change it?

nah it's ok, but could you maybe give "Herobrne" a read?

Okay! Sounds good!