I paused as I saw at the dark mass form into shape of a large lion with glowing red eyes
"Come closer" he beconed
I looked back at Goldenrod, fear in his eyes, "Dont do it" he pleaded
I stood there thinking for a moment, weighing my options, go back to the sad excuse of a life i lived in the celectial plain, or join this mystirious black lion and have limitless powers of darkness. I made up my mind. I took a step twards the lion, a villiones smile growing on his face with every step I took.
"Wonderful choice my child" the lion said
"No!" Goldenrod lunged at me but was stopped by a dark barrior.
I felt my wings and halo dull in color till they were as black as the lion that stood before me, I felt a surge of dark power bolt through my body and my glowing blue markings faded to mere stains on my chalky white fur. There was no going back now. To enjoy my newfound powers I looked at the nearest tree and swatted it with my paw.

my black claws left deep dark marks in the wood that spead till the whole tree was dead. I smiled.
"Injoying your new power?" The lion asked sinisterly
"Yeah" my face turned dark
"Its time I take you home" He lead me down a dark whole that appeared in the ground, and I followed.
"My name is Shade, and Fade, this is your home" he pointed to a shadowy castle in the middle of a sea of lava
"Wow" I muttered

[end of part 5]

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>x3 she's a bad wittle wolfy

hi i like your story. (:

Amazing

SUCH A CLIFFHANGER! :P