"Fade!? did you hear me?!" Orian said getting angry after I didnt answer him. but i didnt answer because behind him I saw Goldenrod, fury burning on his face.
"I- Uh-" Terror melting into my face as I slowly was backing away
"Fade" Orian looked hurt now, "Is it really that bad that I like you" the sparkle faded from his eyes.
"No, it's-" I pointed my white paw behind him
"wha-" he thought I was pointing at him then I turned his head to face behind him "Oh . . ."
"Oh is right, now go home Orian" Goldenrod growled
"But" Orian wimpered "I wont let you hurt her" he went in front of me, blocking Goldenrod's sight
"LEAVE!!" Goldenrod barked loudly and shoved Orian away
I couldnt handle seeing him in pain "Orian, just leave, save yourself, I'll be fine"
". . . You promise?"
"yes, just leave . . . I'll see you later"
and with that Orian left leaving a trail of blood.
"What have you done" Goldenrod growled at me
"I got bored of bowing down at your paws, I needed adventure in my life"

"I protected you, I saved you, you should thank me" he glowered at me
"Protection!? You saved me?! I'd hardly it that! You locked me away, you gave me a fate worse than death"
"No . . . I saw your destiony, I saw that the first time you go down to earth you would be claimed for darkness"
"Well I'm sick of the light if that's what you mean! maybe if you let me do more than chores I'd stay in the light"
" . . . it seems as though the path I took to avoid your destiony only made it come true"
And after he said that a dark cloud rolled into the scene, "If you join me, you will have your freedom to rule the world" the darkness invited

[end of part 4]

hmm, no comments, 5 likes, not the best

0 comments, you know guys that doesnt really make me want to finish this :(

comment... and do finish, we just don't know what to say

go on I want more parts!

yes these storys are real cliffhangers! ^^

interesting...I likey!