jeff by Jennifer D. Woods

eh... trying out my new art style... any comments on how i may improve it? #jeff #creepypasta #blood #story #smile #whitehoodie #pale #burnt #bloody #gotosleep

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
18 May, 2014, 6:29 am
01:13

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NoPeachesForMe

18 May, 2014, 6:36 am

Try using photos of real blo-d dripping and soaking clothes! It's not like water at all, being much thicker; its almost like chocolate syrup when it drips!
Also the hair looks weird where it's blurred with the skin, because the mouth is so sharp in contrast! Consistancy is important!

NoPeachesForMe

18 May, 2014, 6:40 am

It's really pretty, otherwise! It's nice to see someone actually make the "smile" look like peeled-back skin rather than just a stupidly-wide mouth! More "Jeff fans" should see the original image and stop woobi-fying it!

Jennifer D. Woods

18 May, 2014, 1:13 pm

thank you for your advice ill try to improve on what you told me!

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