Snowangel's Story Remastered: Chapter 4 by Dragonologist
Story, characters & art (c) me
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Sorry, boring change again. I doubt you can even see what I changed except reducing the amount of blood.
This chapter contains a little bit of violence.
Chapter:
Frost put his nose against dad’s nose, and nuzzled him gently. Frost then stared at our dead father, while crying softly. I slowly walked over to him and gently nudged him with my nose. “It’s okay Frost…we still have each other...” I said softly. We were about to nuzzle each other when we suddenly heard someone chuckle. We looked into the direction of the sound, finding Snowdevil looking at us with a huge grin on his face. His chuckle turned into an evil laugh. “Aww, that was cute or should I say funny?” Snowdevil said and burst out in laughing. “It was amusingly easy to defeat your parents! You’re parents are just weak lizards, or should I say were?” He let out a deafening evil laugh. Something broke inside me. “Take. That. Back.” Frost said on a calm but angry tone. Snowdevil looked at Frost with an unimpressed expression on his face. “I don’t take anything back…weak...little…lizard..” Snowdevil said with an evil grin on his face. “I…am...not...WEAK! AND MY PARENT’S NEITHER!” Frost roared as he grew huge. His appearance was changing too. His spikes grew bigger, his horns grew longer and sharper, and his wings became feathered. (tbc in comments)
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11 May, 2014, 2:40 pm
My parents once told me that snow dragons have the ability to grow huge when angered, and when enraged they turn into something called a super form. This was the first time I saw a snow dragon do that. Frost breathed a huge yet of white fire at Snowdevil and slashed him with his claws. Frost's big sharp claws left two deep scars on Snowdevil's muzzle. I tried to help Frost by breathing blue fire at Snowdevil, but since I was still quite young I could only breath small flames. Completely suprised by the attack, Snowdevil couldn't fight back. He roared in pain and rage. "Ugh..I feel weak now...you may have won this time...but I will find you...And when I do...I'LL DESTROY YOU!" Snowdevil growled angry at us. He then collapsed on the snow. He was unconscious. My brother shrunk to his normal size. "Come on sis, we have to get out of here before he wakes up" Frost whispered and he started to run. (tbc)
11 May, 2014, 2:51 pm
(sorry that the previous comment took me so long to type, I couldn't concentrate)
I was about to follow him but I just couldn't leave my parents like that. I still couldn't believe I lost them. My brother looked back wondering why I didn't follow him. He stopped when he saw I was still staring at our dead parents. He quickly ran back to me. He gently nudged me with his head. "Come on sis...we have to leave this place..." Frost said on a sad but determined tone. "I can't leave them Frost..." I cried softly. "I'm sorry sis...but we really have to go..." Frost started to push me away from the scene. I struggled and cried. I didn't want to leave the bodies of our parents with that monster. "I know it's hard sis...but I promised dad that I would take care of you. I can't leave you there. If I would leave you there, that huge black dragon would kill you." Frost said determined. (tbc)
11 May, 2014, 2:55 pm
I was still sad to leave my parents but I realised Frost was right. We ran as fast as we could, now and then we would stop to rest. We traveled for days and we eventually found a territory far away from Snowdevil. We lived there peacefully for a while.
(end of chapter 4, you may comment now)
11 May, 2014, 2:56 pm
ugh, I don't like this chapter. It's badly written. And I still have to fix the next chapter. Why did my writing skills suddenly leave me???
11 May, 2014, 2:59 pm
Actually, this chapter is one of my favourites so far! I love the interactions between the characters. Frost is a good brother, he and Snowangel obviously care a lot about each other.
11 May, 2014, 3:06 pm
looks like u 4got to turn on the 3D again lol. This is really good though! I just noticed it so I had to read from the 1st chapter tho
11 May, 2014, 3:10 pm
Awww i feel so sorry for Frost and Snow Angel. I wish my brother was as kind as Frost. xD anyway I think it was really well written and I don't mind what difference you make to the picture because it is always a great chapter :D
11 May, 2014, 3:12 pm
@Radiant really? Hmm, never thought this chapter would be someone's fav. I'm glad you like it so much. :D
@Savannahcat DAAAAMNIIIIIT! Why do I keep forgetting that??? And thanks, I'm glad you like it! :)
11 May, 2014, 3:16 pm
@Spook Yeah Frost and Snowangel had a very sad past. And thank you! I'm glad you like the chapter :D
11 May, 2014, 3:28 pm
i think this chapter turned out amazing! its really sad though. T_T
11 May, 2014, 8:56 pm
*notices I forgot to shade the horn on Snowangel's nose* How didn't I notice that earlier?
12 May, 2014, 9:04 pm
Snowdevil's nose has a cut. :o
12 May, 2014, 9:10 pm
Frost had a "cool" comeback.
See what I did there? Because he's a snow-dragon? q:
14 May, 2014, 3:34 am
( read chapter 3 before this )
I like both chapters!
( aww! Less blood?! D: >x3 )
I like the story. Great job!