This is wonderful, what are you talking about? X3 I love it, those wings and her expression are perfect!

Wings: perfect Bg:CREATIVE AS FRACK Aurora Borealis (sp?): Beautiful

@Dreamkitten Yay I'm so glad you love it! :D I really did my best on this pic. The wings still bother me though, the placement of them looks weird.
@DoodleArt Thanks! :D

*Doodle Art
sorry forgot the space

Looks really awesome to me. I think the wings look good.

BTW, you misspelled "northern lights" twice. :P

Really nice! Wings are hard to draw and you nailed 'em. X)
Anyways, moving on to your story. I read the first and final chapters, (to see how you did over time) and I'd have to say that your grammar was fantastic! There were few mistakes. But, the word choise was a bit limited. Instead of saying walked, why not say meandered or strolled? Also, I would vary my sentence lengths. One might be two words long like, "I am" while the next could be thirty! Mix it up a little, is what I'm saying. But all in all, it was very nice. (I did read snippets of the other chapters to get a sense of what's going on. XD)

*Choice. XD

@Quad I know my vocabulairy ain't very big xD I've been thinking about reading a few pages from my huge Oxford dictionary just to increase my vocabulairy but I never did it xD Thanks for your tips! I'll try to use them.

@Quadruped If she wrote "meandered" or "strolled", I'd just get confused. I've never heard those words. xD

*vocabulary

WHY CAN'T I SPELL?????

What the heck is vocaluralablah? ._.

this is wonderful! how come you don't think so? ITS EEEPPIICCC!!!

Am I invisible? ._.

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!! ^_^

@PSTP you aren'r invisible, I was just so tired I went to sleep after I corrected my typo. Your vocabulary is the amount of words you know and use.

Who is bullying you i can't seem to find him. : (

Not very good?????? It's beautiful! I think the background looks pretty creative, especially with those glowing plant thingys. And Fay came out great!

@Dragonologist Oh, lol, OK.