Omg!! This just made my bus journey 200% cooler!!

^she's writing it as we speak

On travelling to the next location, the team had gone from one weather extreme to the other. Peak Mountain and Ice Ridge had frozen them to the core, but now in Dry-Bone Deseert, the heat was reducing them to puddles. "Maybe travelling at night wasn't such a bad idea" Carina said to Notch "Hmm, given these conditions, you're probably right" he replied as they pressed on The sand was very fine, making it difficult to walk on. Carina decided to test the key eye of ender's sense of location. She threw it forward and as always it caught itself, but was slower this time. As it hovered, it began picking up speed. "We must be getting close" Void announced. Then, right on cue, a sandstone structure rose from the horizon. "Hey is that it?" Viper asked "Looks like it" Matt nodded "Then let's go!" Peter exclaimed.
The structure was a sandstone pyramid. Inside there were steps that led downward. The eye hovered down, followed by the team. It led them to a lower level and in it was the Ender Chest

@weirdkid
lol at least your hat can't blow away on the bus xD
@smash
it's on the way =)

Oh poop..... I've arrived at school ;-;
I'll try use the computer in tutor so I can check up on this. See ya :D

"Huh? That's it? No strange tunnels, pathways or chambers?" Void asked, surprised. "Must be our lucky day" Viper concluded as the key eye of ender lodged itself in the hollow in the chest. It clicked open and the key eye returned to Carina. "I don't know guys, it just seems to easy" she told them. "Come on they're right there! All we have to do is grab them and we're out of here" Viper replied as he walked forward. He suddenly stopped when he heard a click beneth him "A presure plate! Viper get back!" Matt exclaimed. As Viper quickly ran back, the TNT trap exploded, knocking them to the floor, Matt landed on the sandstone part of it. With several sand blocks missing, the rest caved in, bringing five of them down with it. As they looked up and Matt looked forward, they saw that the chest and eyes of ender were unharmed and were sitting on the end of a block wide bedrock bridge. On the other end stood two hooded people.

"W-who are you?" Matt asked. There was a gap between him and the bridge. "It's them! Kai and Zk!" Void exclaimed. The duo laughed then one of them spoke. "Nope, not this time. The name's Carlos" he announced, pulling back his dark hood. "And this is Stm" he added as the other person pulled back her hood too. Just like Kai and Zk, they had a glowing rim of purple light around their irises. "And now those eyes of ender belong to our master" Stm announced as she quickly took them from the chest. "No!" Carina exclaimed as she and Void hurled an aura charge at her. Stm ducked and ran back to Carlos. Matt threw one of his makeshift grenades at them but they moved and it exploded behind them. "We'd love to stay and chat but we've got stuff to do" Carlos told them, an evil grin on his face. They quickly left. "We've got to get out of here, we can't let them escape!" Notch said "I'm going after them!" Matt declared as he ran and jumped the gap. "Be careful!" Carina warned him

"Alright, i can take you up two at a time" Notch quickly explained as he took hold of Carina and Viper first and transported them to the bridge. They went on ahead and were soon followed by Notch, Peter and Void. They ran up a set of stairs that led them out of the pyramid. Before them stood Carlos and Stm. The team brought out their weapons, but a voice called out from on top of the pyramid. "Drop 'em!" it ordered. The team turned to face the person, or rather, the ender "Heh say hello to Lee" Stm told them "Drop the swords, or the kid dies!" Lee warned. She had Matt in a head lock, a sword to his throat. The team dropped them without question. "Alright we did, now let him go!" Carina demanded, but Lee refused "Heh, map and eyes of ender too, or else" she replied, pressing the blade harder against Matt's neck. "N-no! Guys don't do it!" Matt exclaimed "No, don't think for a second i won't k!ll him" Lee told them. With no choice, the five obeyed, surrendering the map and eyes of ender.

As Stm and Carlos came close to gather them, the map and key eye glowed. Everyone watched as new markings were burned into the map. Carlos quickly snatched it up before the team could see it. "So that's how you've been finding these things" he said as Stm gathered up the eyes of ender. Then using ender pearls, they teleported up to Lee. "You've all been a big help, so i'll spare your little friend, for now" Lee told them, bringing her sword down. She lifted Matt by the collar and threw him forward. He landed on the sandy floor below. "See you around!" Stm jeered as Lee took hold of them and teleported. The team rushed forward "Matt, are you ok?" Peter asked Matt nodded as a silence fell over them all. It was clear, without the map and eyes of ender, they'd lost.

-=End Of Part 16=-

Why won't my phone let me comment?? ;-;

Wowowowowow!! This is amazing!!! Can't wait for next part!!!
Turns out it was injection day today, so that sucked... How's you?

@Void
Enderon: i'm evil, deal with it
lol xD thanks! =D

@weirdkid
aww no, that sucks =/ meh i just went into town for a few hours, got a new mc poster :D and thanks! i'll try and have it up before the end of the week

Cool! I have a few posters myself :)

Holy fork! That was epic. Too bad I kinda lost motivation for Ender...

And all drawing in general...

but,they cant lose.....aaah!

@Matt
thanks, i'm sure you'll get motivated again at some stage =)
@MD
maybe they can, maybe they can't, time will tell

Wow, this is awesome! I really enjoyed all of this!
Your AWESOME!
Sorry I haven't been on much, but here I am.
Hope your break was awesome.
:D
MEGA ANGELBEAR HUGS
btw, I did give you all likes on your art I missed.

@angelbear
thank you so much! ^-^ that means a lot! your awesome too!