OC/Chara Critiquing by Raptorfeathers

I've noticed some people straying towards the mary-sue side of charas, but trying to disguise it. I'm here to help clean up some faults and give my opinion on YOUR chara.

This will ALWAYS be open.

Just tell me your OC (preferably with tag link) and what kind of critique you want. I'll critique on that image/whatever image you want me to.

I WILL NOT critique-
-Fursonas of any kind
-Human charas
-Anthro charas
-Homestuck charas
or anything similar

COMMENT AWAY

#PashCritiques

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22 Apr, 2014, 1:59 am
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hallowolf

22 Apr, 2014, 2:07 am

Nanuk my chimera o.c please! BRUTAL or firm #Hallowolfoc

hallowolf

22 Apr, 2014, 2:07 am

oops my bad #Hallowolfref

Pikachu Girl

22 Apr, 2014, 2:13 am

Uhm.. If you wanna #DarethewolfOC I think thats the tag. Idk if i took it down, but i mighta..

psych-resonance

22 Apr, 2014, 2:22 am

Um, I know you've told me that #CrestWolf is fine, but I'm still uncertain. Would you critique her? I know I haven't quite told you her full story.

Pikachu Girl

22 Apr, 2014, 2:25 am

Ooooops.. Wrong tag. #Darethewolf is my Tag

Pikachu Girl

22 Apr, 2014, 2:25 am

and Firm plz... yknow if u dont mind...

Near-Miss

22 Apr, 2014, 2:36 am

Hello thar :3
If you could critique this little beasty #Hithedoll i'd be veeeery happy.
And be firm please uvu

hallowolf

22 Apr, 2014, 2:36 am

Thanks,and yes the gem does have an impotant role. I still have to but up her bio , I might put it up soon. Also with the hair -we I have kinda had problems drawing her that way but I don't know how to modify it correctly. I really like the curls under the ears though.

hallowolf

22 Apr, 2014, 2:38 am

I can't thank you enough passion >w<

Yoshi Ringo

22 Apr, 2014, 3:32 am

This guy. XD
http://courageous-of-light.deviantart.com

By far one of the most Mary Sue alicorns out there, even admitted once that he's better than a lot out there and wants his OC and twilight love to be canon

TowerWolf

22 Apr, 2014, 3:53 am

Could you firm critique #Jay? Please. Thanks. I like this idea a lot :D

RainWolf

22 Apr, 2014, 5:34 am

Just use a pallet? But Some: #RainRef

WinchesterFox

22 Apr, 2014, 7:33 am

Can u critique #MileyRef & #TiffRef (Shes not my sona)

DreamKitten

22 Apr, 2014, 5:57 pm

Could you critique #Phasma? I guess I want a firm critique... :o

psych-resonance

23 Apr, 2014, 3:06 am

Re: (just saw your critique, sorry for late response!) Alright. I consider her a fursona now, so her bangs are alright??? Don't worry, not all of my OCs have fur like that.

Erin Inkwolf

25 Apr, 2014, 9:23 am

What's Your brutally honest opinion of #Tazzo, She's really my only signature O.C besides #Murkreon, but I rarely use her. :3

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