I couldn't wait! I think this is my favorite story already! MUST! WRITE! MOOOOOORE! ...
Warning, blood, vi.olence, slight language.
Enjoy!
... I hope Aurora doesn't mind me making a story about her... EH! I'll be fine!
-Garson
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19 Apr, 2014, 1:50 pm
The rest of the team arrived and after an hour of getting things set up, they were finally ready.
"Alright team. The monitors work, I can see everything you see through your cameras. Me and Sakio will stay here and keep an eye on them. Everyone split up into three teams and investigate each floor." Crowley said. Skio chuckled "No one try to scream like a little girl please. It's not very proffesional. "
Garson laughed and grabbed a camera. "Well. Lets go." He said.
19 Apr, 2014, 2:00 pm
Rhrea, Garson, Scratch, Sombra, and Tiff took the first floor. They reached the staircase and walked past it but Garson stopped. "What on earth..." He whispered and knelt down, looking at the first and second stair steps. "what is it?" Rhrea asked, shining her flashlight in his dirrection. A shiver went down his spine. Tiff stared like she was about to get hit by a car. "Is this... Blood?" Garson ran a paw through the smeared red liquid on the steps.
"H-how did that evdn g-get there..?" Tiff asked, shaking.
"Eh. Probably nothing. Let's keep moving." Scratch said, ignoreing it. Garson rubbed his paw on the carpet to get the blood off and followed the others through the complex halls of the first floor. Mostly bathrooms, two kitchens, sevral closets, a dineing area and a large living room. "Shall we split up?" Tiff asked. "Sure. No harm done." Scratch said and they left in different directions. (BIG MISTAKE! XD)
19 Apr, 2014, 2:03 pm
(That's a huge mistake xD. MUST. READ. MOOOOREEEEE! *keeps refreshing the page*)
19 Apr, 2014, 2:09 pm
( PS, it's Rhea, sorry for the typo )
Scratch walked into one of the kitchens and turned on his walkytalky. "You alright there Scratch... You look a little nervous." Crowley chuckled as he watched his monitor. He was slow and the only light was from his flashlight. "I am not scared!... Just cautious..." He said.
"Yeah, poor Tiff said the same thing earlier I heard... To a squirel." Sakio laughed. Scratch rolled his eyes and turned the thing off. He held his camera and brought out a recorder.
"Is anyone in here..? ... ... Who lived in this house?" He asked. He waited a moment and hit the replay button. (I watch a lot of paranormal investigation shows... Don't judge)
He heard his voice the first time... Nithing but white noise. The second question played... -Who lived in this house? ... ... ...- "WHAT?!" He shivered and pressed the replay button. -Who lived in this house?- He heard himself again. -... those who die here...- An eerie voice said. He heard it clearly this time.
19 Apr, 2014, 2:15 pm
Sombra and Tiff were in the living room together. Tiff held a camera and recorded Sombra who held a recorder. She closed her eyes and asked sevral questions. "Did you die here? ... ... ... What is your name? ... ... ... Who owned this mansion?" Tiff grined and yelled "SOMBRA BEHIND YOU!" Sombra jumped out of her fur and got off the couch and spun around.
Tiff nearly keeled over in laughter. "Tiff you little bi-..." Sombra was cut off by Scratches voice before she could finish. He was calling from across the hall. "Tiiiiiff! You should come hear this!" He yelled. "Go..." Sombra waved an annoyed paw and pressed the replay button on her recorder. Tiff took the camera and went to join Scratch.
19 Apr, 2014, 2:23 pm
Sombra sat on the old couch again, faceing the fireplace. She replayed the recording three times to make sure she didn't miss anything. After the third question, she did hear something. -Do-... Beh-... Y-...- She heard. "Huh? Hold on... What have we here..?" She replayed it once more but on a higher volume. -Don't...Look...Behind you...- She heard a disturbing voice say. A shiver went down her spine. Was this an inteligent spirit trying to scare her?
She knew spirits couldn't harm her unless truly evil. And that took a lot of energy. Their equipment would have been effected if it was really demonic.
"Yeah... Sure. I bet you're right behind me." Sombra said mockingly.
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"Yeah Scratch?" Tiff asked as she walked into the kitchen. "Listen to this..." He replayed his recording and Tiff held it to her ear. The voice was soft. Female. And eerily calm.
"What's it saying?" Tiff asked. "Those who die here... I sent it to Crowley and Sakio. They'll have it enhaced later." Scratch said.
19 Apr, 2014, 2:33 pm
There was a eerie silence and a scream broke through a moment later. Tiff and Scratch looked at eachother. "SOMBRA!" They said together and ran through the hall. Rhea was already there. Scratch and Tiff burst in, their hearts pounding. "Where's Sombra?" Scratch asked.
"I thought she was with you..." Rhea said, shaking now. "I left her in here..." Tiff said. Scratch looked around the room and his gaxe fell on an old couch. He turned on his flashlight. "Look at this..." He said quietly. Rhea and Tiff came over. "This was where she was..." Tiff said and covered her mouth with her paw. Claw marks were on the wooden table in front of it and sevral more tore out the stuffing from the cusions. Three of them with blood stains on them.
Scratch looked at Tiff holdind his camera. He looked at the screen and froze. "T-tiff..." whispered. Everyone froze. Crowley could see it too. "What the hell is that..?" He leaned in closer.
Scratch stared at the camera screen... "Wh-what..?" Tiff asked.
19 Apr, 2014, 2:36 pm
"Tiff... D-don't... look behind you... ..." Scratch said, his voice cracking. On the monitor, he could just barely make out a figure hunched over on four legs standing in the doorway, blood dripping from it's teeth and red eyes.
It suddenly vanished and Tiff turned around out of curiousity. "Wh-what?" She asked.
No one could see it with the naked eye... But on camera... It looked all too real... And that grin... ... ... That unforgetable grin...
19 Apr, 2014, 2:36 pm
-End Chapter-
19 Apr, 2014, 2:40 pm
OMFG OMFG OMFG THIS IS THE MOST EPIC STORY EVER! MY MIND CAN'T HANDLE SO MUCH EPICNESS AND SUSPENSION! GGVRGCDGUUGDFFXAFHIIKOFHUJBUIJBDH8IBDECCAIKM *explodes* YOU'RE SO FLIPPING GOOD AT WRITING!
19 Apr, 2014, 2:42 pm
YOU'RE KILLING ME WITH SUSPENSION DUDE! THIS IS JUST...IDK I CAN'T FIND WORDS TO DESCRIBE WHAT THIS IS! I WANT TO READ MORE SO FLIPPING BADLY! D:
19 Apr, 2014, 2:43 pm
XDDD Thank you! ^^ I hope we can GC. I'm gonna be rly busy but I'll try to make time.
19 Apr, 2014, 2:43 pm
XDDD Is it that good!? THANK YOOOOOU!
19 Apr, 2014, 2:44 pm
YUUUS GCING! SO I CAN CREEP THE HELL OUT OF YOU WITH AURORA! >:D
xD It's so much fun to creep you out xD
19 Apr, 2014, 2:45 pm
Oh! Uh... Oakfur... Would you like to swap FC's?
19 Apr, 2014, 2:46 pm
XD
19 Apr, 2014, 2:53 pm
@Oakfur would you mind if I also added you? Here's my FC if you want to add me. #DragonologistFC
19 Apr, 2014, 2:55 pm
...omfg...
Garson...you'll never believe what I just found...I heard something falling of my desk...and I just looked what it was...it's..my stylus...
I'm creeped out now...I'm even shaking a bit...
19 Apr, 2014, 3:14 pm
Here's my FC #Garsonfc
19 Apr, 2014, 3:15 pm
I still can't believe I just found my stylus...It just came out of nowhere...Seems like Aurora likes your story...
19 Apr, 2014, 3:24 pm
Heh... ... Well... I'd rather her be happy than mad.
19 Apr, 2014, 3:35 pm
Hey wanna GC now? (if you can)
19 Apr, 2014, 3:36 pm
In a half hour.
19 Apr, 2014, 3:38 pm
Okay. You know I'm feeling much better now than yesterday...I guess she really loved your story...Be careful not to neglect this one..
19 Apr, 2014, 3:38 pm
WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF!!!???
19 Apr, 2014, 3:40 pm
I'M WATCHING A NEW EPISODE OF POKEMON AND IT TAKES PLACE IN A OLD ABANDONED MANSION! IN A FOREST! THAT'S HAUNTED! WHAT THE FUDGE!!??
19 Apr, 2014, 3:42 pm
I'M NOT GRIGGIN JOKEING!!! I SWEAR ON MY LIFE! WHAT IN THE FRIGGIN NAME OF HYRULE!!??
19 Apr, 2014, 3:43 pm
...OKAY I'M FU.CKING CREEPED OUT NOW! THIS CAN'T BE A F**KING COINCIDENCE! OKAY AURORA! I BELIEVE IN YOU! I KNOW YOU'RE REAL! NOW STOP SCARING THE HELL OUT OF US!
19 Apr, 2014, 3:44 pm
I'm so f**king scared!
19 Apr, 2014, 3:47 pm
WHAT THE F!? I'm so freaking freaked out!
19 Apr, 2014, 3:48 pm
What happened now?..
19 Apr, 2014, 3:49 pm
Nothing... But uh... I can jenuinly say I think I believe in Aurora now tho...
19 Apr, 2014, 3:51 pm
I'm really creeped out now...I have never been so creeped out as now....This just can't be happening...
I wonder where this will go...
19 Apr, 2014, 3:51 pm
(off-topic) We're pushing the story off screen
19 Apr, 2014, 3:52 pm
Ok. I'll let you know if I can GC.
19 Apr, 2014, 3:54 pm
ok
19 Apr, 2014, 4:45 pm
Its amazing!
19 Apr, 2014, 5:29 pm
That cliffhanger tho o.o
19 Apr, 2014, 10:44 pm
Omggg Cannt wait
20 Apr, 2014, 4:41 am
WHAAAAAAAAT! o-o This is turning into a scary-but-totally-thriller story! Such a cliffhanger! *Claps* BRAVO! :D