Velenka part 1 by Forever Warrior Cats

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Chapter *
Velenka walked around a terribly bright room. A voice called to her.
"Coming!" she shouted. She was an experament made by herobrine. Her name was exp. ******. There was many others before her. Herobrine called her 69078. She obeyed everything her master told her.Though she was only thirteen, she was put through work unimaginable.
"Master, I would like to know why you made me."
"Well," Herobrine started. "It's a long story..." Velenka pulled up a chair. "I wanted a daughter."

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
19 Apr, 2014, 1:00 pm
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TFmel

19 Apr, 2014, 9:50 pm

hmm very good start to the story =) nice job, keep it uo

Forever Warrior Cats

21 Apr, 2014, 12:37 am

"What?" Velenka asked, startled.
"you heard me right." Herobrine said. That night, all she could think about was her fate and destiny. Was it her destiny to follow Herobrine's footsteps, or something else. Her thoughts were interuppted by the zombies groaning outside her window.Soon, she was fast asleep.The next dawn wasn't what she had been expecting. There was chaos everywhere. She gasped as a fiery piece of iron bars fell right in front of her. Then, she saw what was causing all the destruction to the laboratory. Notch. She screamed as he came right at her.
"Calm down, child. I'm not going to hurt you." he said.
"But what about the lab?" she asked.
"well, my brother, Herobrine, created this place to hold his most dangerous experiments." he replied. She stared at him.
"well,if Herobrine was holding dangerous experiments here, shouldn't you be dead?" she asked, her arms folded. This question made Notch feel uncomfertable. He decided not to answer.

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