Well I like the originality and it sure shows some integrity.

The panel number is random, but I'll work at getting it up to six. Keep in mind that most of the pages are made a few weeks beforehand. Good call, though.

I think it could use some more plot, but then again it only has a few pages so far and it seems like something real adventure-y is gonna happen soon. Otherwise you have a pretty nice comic here!

moar angst. gotta drama it up!

Seriously though, so far you've been doing a pretty bang-up job. Since the comic is still kinda in it's infancy, so it's kinda hard to make suugestions...

To be honest one of the only real critiques I have is maybe decreasing the wait time between episodes if possible (like say an episode for every half-a-week). The reason for this is possibley to help keep the momentium (spelling) going for the audience, unless of couse you go for the more panels idea....

On a more sarcastic note: This series "needs" more A-List celebrity cameos, guitar solos, a beat-boxing CGI goblin "wit lotsa SWAG dawg", more memes, lots of car chases, product placements, cross-over references to Phantom In The Summer, and pointless stingers at the end of each episode.... XD!

Honestly, this is one of my favourite comics on colors (That may seem like im just flattering you, but im serious) Mostly I like it Because its ORIGINAL and does'nt just shoehorn in popular artists for no reason (Zach spark in AC doesn't count >:D) and while I can sort of agree that more plot is needed, the comic is only taking its first steps so you cant really blame it for lack of story elements. Despite this, I think the characters all work perfectly and each one has distinct personality traits (Ambers my personal favourite) Apart from that, I cant say anymore than whats already been said, keep up the great work billy!

Oh yeah, and it needs more gangam style parodies, minecraft songs, twerking and bart simpson.

I agree, it does need more SWAGGAH!

I like the few panels, it makes it spacey and easy to look at. I don't like it when comics are all squished up.

Right now I'm finding the right balance in the panel length.

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