Beach day by Anne Chovy

Practicing Jarik, due to the fact I sometimes get the anatomy a little off with him.

I am really looking for critiques on the accuracy and overall appeal of my anatomy.
Anyone is welcome to do so, let me know what I did wrong and what I did right. Hopefully this will help me draw correctly when he's fully clothed as well.

I may do more pics like this (studying some point I specifically want to work on.)

#jarik #oc #anime #manga #ocean #beach #anatomy #practice #favoritethings

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
13 Apr, 2014, 8:54 pm
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aninarutonerd13

13 Apr, 2014, 9:30 pm

I think you do pretty well on your anatomy ^w^ But I would tell you I notice sometimes you can make their necks too thin for their head/bodies or the wrist as well but for their hands/arms. Usually, if I'm unsure. I'll look at my own as I'm drawing in that pose and compare (It helps <3) But I found getting a good book on manga anatomy helps greatly! Mine is "How to Draw Manga: Bodies & Anatomy" By: "The Society for the study of Manga Techniques". It's great to see something besides a little wooden figure for help ^w^

Anne Chovy

14 Apr, 2014, 1:37 am

Thank you. That is helpful. I will probably still struggle with that, but it gives me an area to work on. At least its a start. :)

Tom Ato

15 Apr, 2014, 11:19 pm

I like his hair, its really different

Anne Chovy

16 Apr, 2014, 3:17 am

Tom: Yeah, It's wet so it looks different.

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