Darkness... by Hontea

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
08 Apr, 2014, 1:10 pm
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Hontea

08 Apr, 2014, 1:15 pm

Darkness surrounds us.
It's in the air we breathe.
It makes children fuss.
It makes humans seethe.
It makes angels cry,
and mothers hide their young.
It makes sad men sigh,
when Darkness....has won.
The world will disappear,
as it takes our souls.
There will be no "here,"
as cities fall in holes.
Holes of darkest black,
they devour all they get.
They will destroy every single shack,
every person, thing and pet.
As darkness has no mercy,
it gets your children too.
From Europe, Asia, to New Jersey,
created by all bad things we do.

Hontea

08 Apr, 2014, 1:17 pm

I apologize for bad quality, I only took half an hour making it in a noisy advisory.

petetownshends

08 Apr, 2014, 8:07 pm

What a beautiful poem, Tea!

Hontea

09 Apr, 2014, 12:53 pm

I had to read it in front of my class. Everyone elses was about the beach, love, or happiness. They gaped at me, and I had simply laughed.

Hontea

10 Apr, 2014, 4:07 pm

My internal dilemma would be described much differently.

Kays-Kandygrams

12 Apr, 2014, 9:35 am

this is a very descriptive writting. i do the same thing when im depressed or just calm and still, but instead of poems i write stories or draw. you should do more of these. i would love to read more of your work

Hontea

14 Apr, 2014, 12:11 pm

I guess it's kind of like one if those "dark side of humanity" pieces.

Hontea

14 Apr, 2014, 12:11 pm

Of*

sugar-chan

30 Jun, 2014, 11:20 pm

y u unactiveeeee!

Eevaporeon

04 Jul, 2014, 3:35 pm

y was I INACTIVE

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