i can understand. high school was a living h.ell to me. i wasn't accepted by anyone, i was cast out. so i pushed others away because of it. but trust me, time heals wounds.
this poem is very touching andni can relate to that since i been threw it myself manyntimes but also this poem gives me an idea to use with your charecter and mine if you allow me
..i kinda hate it when people just 'say' they know the feeling that go's up insaid there hearts just so they can have pity its week. people cant understand the feeling of loseing someone...ah well there free 2 say whatever...really nice poem i would never know that type of feeling :P hope ya make lots more art!
Love, Pain, it's all the same. Happyness, Lonelyness, who's to blame?? Cry, Laugh, what'll it be, Life, Death, it's up to thee.... I do not know whom wrote this polm, but I have never forgotten it, & it has saved me many, many times! Pass it on....
i am in that dark place right now. its because what school has done to me, my friends and family. it feels like you cant do any thing. i have a dream that i want to for fill in the future, and that is the only thing keeping me going. i would have k,illed my self years ago if i had not had that dream. i feel exactly like you do, and you are not the only one who feels like this. but you just have to keep on fighting, just keep on going, and do what ever you have to do.
out streched hand in the dark grabbing hold. leading the way to set you free. holding fast, running wild, light rises.ever dim but getting bright.wipe tears with warm rays of sun. alone no more forever free....
same here been rhere done that at my old school I was bullied even to the point of su-ic-id-e it's how life is cold and cruel we are like sheep for the slaughter but if we have faith in god we can make it
I can't quite tell if it's God or true love, or something else that you are hoping for. I know that God is available, I believe that true love will come when IT is ready to, and there is more of everything else than we will ever likely need. Good luck. :)
I've been there myself and though I'm now stronger, I'm still never quite the same. There's a dark streak hidden in me now that even I sometimes fear and certainly don't understand, but if not for the development of that I may never have survived. C'est La Vie.
Comments
06 Jun, 2012, 4:43 am
Touching and Poectic.
06 Jun, 2012, 4:44 am
[Its Ur Bro Nate]Arent U With Corey
06 Jun, 2012, 4:48 am
I think he's mad at me
06 Jun, 2012, 4:48 am
Thank you Jpex
06 Jun, 2012, 4:56 am
l.o.l. it stands 4 lots of love ifeel sorry 4 u wish i could help but these r only words ^-' nice poem too!
06 Jun, 2012, 5:05 am
Ive been too that dark place...I kinda am still there. I always push people away.
06 Jun, 2012, 5:11 am
Im always in that dark place. I Gotten used to that lonely feeling that now I Like to be alone instead of being around people
06 Jun, 2012, 5:59 am
Intresting poem...
07 Jun, 2012, 5:13 am
STILL YOU NEED A FLASH LIGHT deleting my comment cant believe you *murmur* mutter*
07 Jun, 2012, 7:18 am
wish i could help...i dont know what to say, im bad at this kind of stuff, i listen though
08 Jun, 2012, 5:22 am
i can understand. high school was a living h.ell to me. i wasn't accepted by anyone, i was cast out. so i pushed others away because of it. but trust me, time heals wounds.
08 Jun, 2012, 7:42 am
this poem is very touching andni can relate to that since i been threw it myself manyntimes but also this poem gives me an idea to use with your charecter and mine if you allow me
08 Jun, 2012, 3:36 pm
Touching poem.
08 Jun, 2012, 10:43 pm
*shiny knight arrives late* huff... huff... so many... huff... hurdles.. *passes out in a heat stroke*
13 Jun, 2012, 2:45 am
lol hay its roman the funny part is i am darkness >:)
13 Jun, 2012, 4:55 am
..i kinda hate it when people just 'say' they know the feeling that go's up insaid there hearts just so they can have pity its week. people cant understand the feeling of loseing someone...ah well there free 2 say whatever...really nice poem i would never know that type of feeling :P hope ya make lots more art!
13 Jun, 2012, 8:53 pm
hrm...
17 Jun, 2012, 6:08 am
You should be more happier since ppl here draw you so many times on here..
17 Jun, 2012, 11:35 pm
Wow... So epic... So... Sad... So heartfelt! I luv this poem. :')
19 Jun, 2012, 3:22 am
what a joke... Corey, grow up.
19 Jun, 2012, 3:40 am
Corey....go..back 2 Maire.....plz......I've fallin 4 Matt...I'm sorry
19 Jun, 2012, 3:45 am
Corey...i'm 28....way 2 old 4 u!!
19 Jun, 2012, 3:48 am
Sorry, chum. ;o)
19 Jun, 2012, 8:47 am
i feel the same way
19 Jun, 2012, 8:50 am
shut up jerk
26 Jun, 2012, 8:18 am
I have new gallery
06 Jul, 2012, 4:58 am
i am DARK.0
10 Jul, 2012, 2:18 am
This darkness is common, as are the methods of disengaging it. I wish you luck.
10 Jul, 2012, 9:06 pm
*grabs hands and pulls into a friendship hug.* Michelle!
I won't leave you alone in the darkness.
Friendship is a bright beacon in a dark world.
19 Jul, 2012, 4:29 pm
Love, Pain, it's all the
same. Happyness, Lonelyness, who's to blame?? Cry, Laugh, what'll it be, Life, Death,
it's up to thee....
I do not know whom wrote this polm, but I
have never forgotten it,
& it has saved me many,
many times! Pass it
on....
26 Jul, 2012, 9:24 pm
Awesome, I like it...we all have been there, some time in our lives ^-^.
31 Jul, 2012, 10:02 am
you are a poet with a big heart. keep that chin up, the light will shine through the darkness
09 Aug, 2012, 2:20 am
i am in that dark place right now. its because what school has done to me, my friends and family. it feels like you cant do any thing. i have a dream that i want to for fill in the future, and that is the only thing keeping me going. i would have k,illed my self years ago if i had not had that dream. i feel exactly like you do, and you are not the only one who feels like this. but you just have to keep on fighting, just keep on going, and do what ever you have to do.
11 Aug, 2012, 7:25 am
out streched hand in the dark grabbing hold. leading the way to set you free. holding fast, running wild, light rises.ever dim but getting bright.wipe tears with warm rays of sun. alone no more forever free....
13 Aug, 2012, 8:19 pm
GOD
10 Sep, 2012, 7:07 am
lovely
16 Sep, 2012, 12:45 am
:/..
23 Nov, 2012, 9:40 am
same here been rhere done that at my old school I was bullied even to the point of su-ic-id-e it's how life is cold and cruel we are like sheep for the slaughter but if we have faith in god we can make it
25 Nov, 2012, 4:58 am
this is too poetic TnT
13 Dec, 2012, 12:53 pm
I can't quite tell if it's God or true love, or something else that you are hoping for. I know that God is available, I believe that true love will come when IT is ready to, and there is more of everything else than we will ever likely need. Good luck. :)
05 May, 2013, 1:36 pm
I've been there myself and though I'm now stronger, I'm still never quite the same. There's a dark streak hidden in me now that even I sometimes fear and certainly don't understand, but if not for the development of that I may never have survived. C'est La Vie.