Woah, I wasn't expecting this! That lineart looks completely perfect to me. It's so smooth, and I like how the lines are thicker/thinner in some places (I know you did that with some other drawings). I also love all the tiny details like the scarred dorsal fin and the damaged tail-fin. I really can't see anything that needs improvement, it looks amazing! It's obvious that you put a LOT of time and effort into the lineart. I can't wait to see it coloured and finished. :)

I wasn't expecting such a long comment from you. xD But I really appreciate it! : ) Thanks very much! :D It made me happy.

I don't normally write long comments like that. XD But I didn't want to write a short cra.ppy comment after you spent so long working on this.

I appreciate that! I wish more people wrote long comments like that... It's kinda annoying when I work on a pic for hours, and the only thing people say is "Cool!". I mean seriously, is that all I get for working so long on a pic? :/

I hate those kinds of comments. But I suppose it's better than getting no comments at all.

Yeah.

OMG OMG OMG THAT LINE ART IS F**KING EPIC! MY MIND CAN'T HANDLE SO MUCH EPICNESS! RJVJGKYHRWFIGJLHJMFVHJKLKMNRGUHNRNIHRNDWUYKJHRBFFGH7UJG *explodes*
(will make proper comment soon or later)

Lol thanks.

Aw dam.n, I just noticed I forgot one of the thingies on his head... xD

now the proper comment.
I really love this pic! The pic looks dynamic, I love how the head thingy is so curvy. I also love how the line art is so freaking smooth. This pic is just perfect! I also love all the details you added, you can really see you put really much effort in it. And WOW 9 hours! I wouldn't have the patience to spent so much time on a painting. This is epic dude, I can't wait to see it finished.

Thank you very much! But is there anything you think needs improvement?

Also, why haven't you liked it? Just wondering.

Never mind, I saw you dud now. xD

I just liked it. I just forgot to like it earlier xD And hmmm I can't really think of something you could improve. Sorry :/

*did

And it's okay.

cool!!>∀<

Wow, seriously? Only 3 likes and I uploaded this 4 hours ago... C'mon guys! I worked 9 hours on this. -_-

Sadly, I don't think anyone bothers to click on black-and-white things. This deserves a lot more attention.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry dats a lot of ! .... Anyway... this so far is just amazing!! I love it so dam.n much! Its just so fricking epic! The lineart is so perfect. The detail is just so perfect! You deserve thousands of likes for this! And for 9 hours!? You clearly put lots of time and effort into this.

By the way I remember this from miiverse :D

Thank you very much Spook!

great work!

Thanks Azu!

The lineart is so... thick and rich. (Can rich even be used to describe lines; I am not certain, but it seems fitting). I love this style of lineart. Overall, this is a smooth painting and it flows nicely.

your request is up! ^w^