I wanted to make a story of Kyle Sharp's terrible, tor.tured, bloody past. Why? Because I'm sick n' twisted & I can.
Btw, there's a lot of blood and slight language. Also, if you're sensitive, then prepare to cry. >:3
( story in comments )
(Also my steampunk WWIII story chapter will be up tomorrow. I have NOT been in the writing mood lately so sorry for the delay. But it'll be EPIIIIIIIIIC! ;] )
The Colors! Gallery moderators will look at it as soon as possible.
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24 Mar, 2014, 1:14 pm
Want to know why poor Kyle is practicaly afraid of his own shadow? Well he has a good reason... And this is why.
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Kyle woke up with a yawn. He had fallen asleep while out playing with his friend. " Oops... Guess I fell asleep. I'm sure mother will understand. " He said confidently and made his way back to his parents.
He could hear his father groweling and cussing under his breath. " F-father..? Are you okay? " Kyle asked nervously.
" KYLE SHARP! " His father yelled. Kyle jumped and flattened his ears. His father never yelled at him like that before. " Y-yes father..? Where's mother? " He asked.
Kyle hadn't noticed blood dripping from the corner of his mouth. " A-are you hurt? "
His father glared at him. " Your mother is dead because of you. She went out looking for you because she thought you were lost! ... A pack of... unkind wolves didn't take mercy on her... This is your fault... " His father growled.
24 Mar, 2014, 1:21 pm
" M-me?! I-I fell asleep while playing with my friend! I didn't mean to! " Kyle said, trying to calm down.
" Yes I know... You're "friend" had the same look on his face when I found him... " His father grined.
" W-what do you mean? Is he okay? " Kyle's heart raced and he tucked his tail in fear. His father was acting very dark and it was scareing him.
" Hm hm hm... Oh, the little fur-ball is better than ever since I brought him here... Would you like to see him..? " His father asked.
" HE'S HERE!? Yes please! " Kyle said excitedly, almost forgetting what had just happened.
24 Mar, 2014, 1:29 pm
His father walked behind a tree and dragged out a small wolf, around Kyles age by the neck.
He was bloody and limp. Almost like he was... Dead.
" I sorted him out... You did want to see him didn't you? Hmm... " Kyle's father grinned evily.
" N-no... No! Why would you do this?! ... A-are you okay..? Please wake up... " Kyle stepped closer to his friend but his father slashed him across the eye.
" Ow!... F-father... Why are you doing this..? " Kyle cried. Blood dripping from the three claw marks.
" Because! " His father growled and swatted him hard across the face. " This is the last time you dissobay me! ... And if you even try to find help... Hm hm hm... I'll k!ll you... " His father chuckled.
Kyle stared, terrified into the eyes of what was once his loving father...
( End chapter! Hope you like! ;] )
24 Mar, 2014, 3:29 pm
Hmmm, you were a bit inspired by Thorn's story. Weren't you?
I really enjoyed reading the chapter, it's very well written. I can't wait reading the next chapter :)
24 Mar, 2014, 3:33 pm
Eh heh... Yeah... I admit I was. It was rly good. Hope you done mind. ^///^
24 Mar, 2014, 3:38 pm
Yeah it's okay. I need to learn to be less protective of my art and writing. I love your stories. They're all freaking epic. I can't write very good. I write on a boring way.
24 Mar, 2014, 3:43 pm
Trust me. I didn't get like this over night. I wrote stories to myself for years. And I would stay up on my DSi and picto chat with my sis and tell her stories ( mostly about dragons! ;] ) And for... five years? I kept that a daily series just between me and her. You're a good writer. Just keep at it. ;]
24 Mar, 2014, 3:43 pm
I might make a short story about Thorns childhood. But I don't really have any ideas. Most stories just randomly come in my mind. Okay again, sorry for randomly telling you that. Maybe I should shut up.
24 Mar, 2014, 3:46 pm
I make up stories in my head.. Mostly se.xual ones tho x'D
24 Mar, 2014, 3:48 pm
I will keep writing. Hmm, I think I have been writing ("long") stories for...5 months? idk I think I'll check later. I drew comics before though. Short comics about my dog, and one long comic of Darkpaw's story which was very frustating to make and it looks crappy as hell xD I can't believe I once was proud of it xD okay I should really shut up now...
24 Mar, 2014, 3:50 pm
Nah, ur fine. I like talking to you...
@Tiff
.... Dito...
24 Mar, 2014, 3:50 pm
The most reason one is Melissa & May getting into a bit of fun at a hotel..
24 Mar, 2014, 3:52 pm
Hey, thank you for following!
24 Mar, 2014, 3:53 pm
I just checked I have been writing for 6 months. Lol I am actually better at writing in english than in dutch xD When I have to write an essay for english, I write it in an hour and I get a good note. If I have to write an essay for dutch, I just stare at the word document, write very slow, and I get a very bad note xD Is that weird? xD
24 Mar, 2014, 3:53 pm
... Like me and Wolfey...
OKAAAAY I GOTTA! GO PLAY ZELDA NOW! YEAH! SEE YOU IN A LITTLE BIT! K BYE! 0////////0
24 Mar, 2014, 3:55 pm
@Elena
LOL! Well you're smarter than me!
@PSTP
No proplem! I'm happy to follow a friend of Elena's... Kinda feel derpy for not doing it sooner tbh! "xD
24 Mar, 2014, 3:56 pm
Deeeeeeeerp
24 Mar, 2014, 3:59 pm
That's me! XD Omg, I love ur random collabs. They're so derpy. XDDDDDD
24 Mar, 2014, 3:59 pm
" USE THE FOURS! "
24 Mar, 2014, 4:02 pm
I like his backstory! His father is very cruel though. And it seems like everyone was inspired by Thorn's story. XD
24 Mar, 2014, 4:06 pm
Garson, when your depressed, do this...Draw a four on paper, cut it out, hold it above your head and yell...USE THE FOURS!
24 Mar, 2014, 4:07 pm
(Dragonologist) XD
24 Mar, 2014, 4:07 pm
Make an army of fours, to fight your depression. It will always help. DEPRESSION CAN'T DEFEAT THE FOURS!
24 Mar, 2014, 4:09 pm
Deeerp seems like I'm in a random mood at the moment. MOOD SWINGS FTW
24 Mar, 2014, 4:09 pm
Use the fours Garson. Use the fours
24 Mar, 2014, 4:11 pm
OMG! YOU FREAKIN' WHAT! I'M GOING TO DO THAT! XDDDDDDD
USE THE FOURS!
24 Mar, 2014, 4:12 pm
I litarally went to look at that pic just to get a laugh. Omg... ( moodswings FTW! )
24 Mar, 2014, 4:12 pm
@Crowley
Yeah, Thorns story was awesome.
24 Mar, 2014, 4:14 pm
I'M A FLIPPIN MASTER OF RANDOM DRAWINGS! Garson, you must now cut down the mightiest depression in your mind...with...A HERRING! *dramatic music* OR ELSE I'LL SAY NI TO YOU!
I'll give you a cookie if you know from what movie that is.
24 Mar, 2014, 4:20 pm
Rgh... I don't and I'm kicking myself for it. Gosh dang it! What movie?
24 Mar, 2014, 4:21 pm
Oh nvm you already know it. You liked and commented on my painting of that quote.
MONTY PYTHON FOR THE WIN
WE'RE KNIGHTS OF THE ROUND TABLE
WE DANCE WHENE'ER WE'RE ABLE
WE DO ROUTINES AND CHORUS SCENES la la la la..i don't remind the lyrics...WE EAT HERE WELL AT CAMELOT, WE EAT HAM AND JAM AND SPAM A LOOOOOOT!
da da da da dada da dada da dada da
okay sorry for that, it's just my fav song from that movie xD
24 Mar, 2014, 4:22 pm
Oh nvm you didn't know...whoopsie xD My timing is fabulous. You can find the answer at my coconut and herring painting
24 Mar, 2014, 4:23 pm
You should make a chatroom, before we push the story offscreen again xD
24 Mar, 2014, 4:25 pm
I think the missing line is "with footwork inpacable"
Sorry for spamming your comments xD
24 Mar, 2014, 4:26 pm
OOOOOOH! Okay. Ima derp. I remember that now. Yes.
Hee hee. Movie quote! What movie!?
"Is someone there? No... Well what's wrong? Nobody... What is wrong then?! No body, that's what. Mr.Body's body! It's gone! " One of my fave movies. xp
24 Mar, 2014, 4:27 pm
It's okay. I will later. I reached max posts for a while. :/ Dumb timer.
24 Mar, 2014, 4:29 pm
Uuuuuhmmmmm....Idk from which movie that quote is. And I also hate that limit. It's very annoying.
24 Mar, 2014, 4:32 pm
Yeah. It rly is... Oh! The quote. It's from Clue. Omg, so funny.
I'll make a chat room later for all our crazy cooky randomness.
24 Mar, 2014, 4:35 pm
Aaaand then my chat room will get abandoned, again. :/
24 Mar, 2014, 4:36 pm
Okayzorz
24 Mar, 2014, 4:36 pm
...
24 Mar, 2014, 4:39 pm
I'm not even gonna say anything..I will just ruin everything again...
24 Mar, 2014, 4:40 pm
Please dont think like that... You dont ruin anything...
24 Mar, 2014, 4:40 pm
OH! You have a chat room PSTP!? I'll go there. Iz no prop!
24 Mar, 2014, 4:41 pm
Please, talk to me dragon..
24 Mar, 2014, 4:42 pm
Yeah, talk to him/her... Don't talk to me. I'll just make you feel worse anyway. :/
24 Mar, 2014, 4:43 pm
Yes I do Garson.
Sorry, I didn't see your comment at first.
24 Mar, 2014, 4:43 pm
It's just..I don't want to talk about it, I'm afraid that I and pstp will get upset and both leave..I'll just go to pstp's chatroom now..probably won't stay long...I want to try to draw something again...Bye..
24 Mar, 2014, 4:49 pm
ok... bye... and pstp, you need to trust yourself to say the right things. You guys are obiously close friends, so do your job and be there for her.
24 Mar, 2014, 5:01 pm
And if you ever do want to talk, dont hesitate.
25 Mar, 2014, 4:01 am
Hey, I'm at my chat room now.
25 Mar, 2014, 8:55 am
Bro.. I had a horrible dream last night.. About u..
25 Mar, 2014, 4:16 pm
Its.. Horrible.. -shaking-
25 Mar, 2014, 4:18 pm
It's okay. It's okay... It was just a dream...Tell me what happened...
25 Mar, 2014, 4:19 pm
U.. Can I post a pic.. I did it this morning.. It explains.. U died.. U tried suic.ide and stabbed ur heart.. u died.. In my arms..
25 Mar, 2014, 4:20 pm
*gulps*... Sure...
25 Mar, 2014, 4:22 pm
It was horrible.. I don't want u dead.. It was my fault.. I got mad and told u to fuc.k off.. n wen i left ur house, u stabbed urself n was rushed to hospital.. N died.. </3... I posted it
25 Mar, 2014, 4:26 pm
S-Sorry..
25 Mar, 2014, 8:38 pm
Deleted chat as ITS online.. Sorry I Had To
25 Mar, 2014, 8:49 pm
Garsooon
26 Mar, 2014, 5:05 am
Sorry, he was talking to me.
26 Mar, 2014, 8:21 am
Watch the playback gars
26 Mar, 2014, 8:34 am
Good luck... *salutes* No artist left behind.
26 Mar, 2014, 11:58 am
I think ive failed.. Shit
26 Mar, 2014, 3:43 pm
G-Garson.. I need to talk to u.. I Can't lie to her.. Pretending ur dead to hurt her is wrong.. It'd kill her.. Just leave her n be done.. She knows..