lmao thats it? XD

HAPPY CAPS LOCK DAY!!! IS WEIRD/SAD I FIND THIS PICTURE REALLY FUNNY? XD

im on chapter 7! im getting better and more understanding with the story to! XD

lololol! xDDDDDDDDDDDDD omg!!!! YES! IMMA PUT IT ON FB!!! YES! ITS BEAUTIFUL!! <### xD *DIES LAUGHING* thank youuuuu! <33 ;v;

well its simple read books thats how you get better. Have chapters to tell the reader what story is story from beginning middle to end. How it all starts and what happends as time passes. here an Example, right now for me Mark, his brother and sister are about to escape to earth. To get away from the war on Luminous. But on the way they have to take beat every Sukuloid they face or be kiIIed. So with that the main point of the chapter is about. Just get to the main point with chapters and make it understandable for the reader. Dont give a lot
of information and detail in the chapters make that kinda go last. But have your title and the name of your first chapter. its going to help you know were the action takes place. But my story going smothly because its making sence and my cousen is telling me how to put it all out. That first chapter was from after i talked to him. It came out better then the rest. So just get a book and look how the chapters are layed out. Same if its a comic X

i'll show you my introduction so far it might suck but it could help you with yours. And i'll show you one more chapter and thats it! i dont wanna mess up the whole story for you. even though you pretty much already know it. But ima make A LOT of changes to make it sound better. so just 1 more until im done with it. lol

Coolio! The people translating Fairy Tail messed up.. Like episode 71 it goes full blown japanese. I have no idea how to translate it.. XD

Really nice job, nice clean lines. Also very funny.

I watch the animie, But my friend and I need to find a better translator YouTube channel now, Because the episodes we were watching weren't in english after awhile.

I don't really enjoy watching it in english, but I couldn't find subtitles, So yeah.. I'll just go to that animiefreak website & stuff.. Lol

how i immagined her sound like. i wish i paied more attion to her though...i just wanted to put god first so i did. and was flying in my dream! to bad i lost my lucid and went back under its control. xD

lol yea light vs dark/shadows ice vs fire moon vs Sun water vs rock,ect

lol yea xD

nahh she older then him. he only 17. lol

he will be forever alone until Season 3! :D

she 21 shes an adult! lmao!

no...she is a wind Master Alpha...she was sent by her father Spiral to go get Mark...bring him home for chating/training. She just saved him on her way to go get him right in time... lol

if you re-read it and think about it then you wont get confused! XD

yea i was trying to get something like this. lol

bark! >:O

0-0 Senpai?

im thinking of changing Marks skin tone...i might make him darker...idk but i think it would look more Original... xD

at school- Its just that because in anime i hardly see ANY dark anime characters or main characters. This could really be something i could jump on and make him more original...

Plus when he transforms he is completely white. so maybe it would be better making him darker so its easier to see his transformation when Lacarma is taking over his body. if he's light like he is now its harder to see the change come onto his body. like in Naruto because he was light and Ninetails was dark red. it was easy to see the change from when he was changing. So it probably would be a good idea to make him darker. i was thinking of making his mom dark to...but if i do THEY HAVE to be a little dark also...Marks brother can be dark, his sister can be mixed. he can be to. im just thinking about Original stuff though. its nothing personal. Just what looks better for dramatic effect and what HASN'T been done. or somthing new...you know?

sigh...your right...its just not working....i tried to get use to it...BUT IT JUST WASN'T FEELING RIGHT! TT-TT

yea...but i've been slow on my book...i wanna finesh chapter 6...but i dont wanna...but i need to....all i wanna do is draw...but need to type chapter 6... TT-TT

I don't blame you, that iceing is to goooooooood!!!! XD

nahhh i had no idea i dont watch Bleach that much...i just did this because of Mark he didn't believe she was his mother. So she had to be from another race. Best would be Sukuloid since he already hates them. His best friend is a Sukuloid to. But he meets his mother first. She tries to tell him but he doesn't believe her. So she has to sacrifice herself to show him she was. He doesn't see his dad until the last season. Watch though he is going to fight is mother trying to get her to back off, its going to be awesome! But his brother and sister are mixed. now i need to work on the Dreigen and Sukuloid race forms. this is just there ordinary form.

no no his dad IS DEAD. his mom didn't die just his father. She escaped the war. His dad gave up his will to live so Mark wouldn't die when he was a baby. But Mark dies in the last season. Thats how he is going to see his dad when he's dead. But im still working on the race forms, i think i got the one for the Dreigens. its better then the old one. Now Sukuloid. xD

well the Humans looks different from them in there human/like form away way. But the races adapted to the planet to try and blind in with the humans, so if they were ever found they would just look like normal people to them. lol

how do we know theres not aliens here? you never know! lmao! see how i get the idea? XD

Don't worry. Anytime you find a flaw in my art I just delete the thing so it doesn't bother you. That make you feel better? Good. Glad we're all happy. G'day.

only on here. The book will have pictures dont worry! XD

nahh its not your fault. There just pi,ssed there skills are so good but you found somthing wrong with there drawing. Before you tell whats wrong with there drawings you should say it sarcasticly, or like in a way you dont really care. Because for some people who have that much followers and see there self so good get there feeling hurt a little bit. Its just how you say it. Show a smile, maybe a cough could help and some wispers. Give them tips so they dont feel like your doing it ti bother them. ESSPSHLY IF YOU RIGHT! XDD

how about you make a sorry drawing to her to show her you didn't mean to say what you said. and try to get some of her followers to see it and tell her about it. Then you say what you were trying to explain to her. Good luck buddy if you really wanna make peace with a person like that. you should reread what you said to her though and just think about it. Maybe you said what you were trying to say in the wrong way. She did say that it was making you sad (in a way) maybe you were saying it to harmful. But for me i dont care what drawings look like. if i like it i just say its good. But if i do find something that's very obvious then i add pay closer attention to what the drawing looks like before you start coloring. lol

some might have a cowboy do-rage over there mouth to protect there identity a little better, it could hage down over that area to. Some like Driton and Spiral will have capes also. some might have necklases.

haha, Yeah, shes a bit too mature and revealing for pokemon. everyone in pokemon looks 10

is it bad that I think Professor oak is the only adult there? o-o

Thanks :D, although there is a white background, i couldn't cover it because i reached the limit, but i kept it because the white makes it look like he's breaking through the darkness successfully. And to specify, He's fighting his inner demons, accumulated negative feelings and intentions, and a trauma, manifested into a entity, but it's not fully shown, you're just seeing my character trying to break free of it. And for the white background. apparently I went over the drawing limit, So i couldn't add any more or I'll risk making a permanent mistake. so i thought up a a way for the white to play a role in the picture as "The light".

Maybe after i finish this book im trying to finish and after i make acople drawings then yea. lol

because they live in different villages. Erisa was born in the Rock Formazoid village. Duna was born in the Lightning village. Duna Thunder and Erisa Ground. Koyo,Samsen,Mark and Slasher are the same way. Koyo is born in the Tyrant Fire village, Samsen is born in the Alkasist Sination Village, Slasher is born in the Sukuloid Shadow village, Mark was born in the Dreigen Light village. the villages are on there home planets though. The Guadiens have The Masters of the villages help protect them. There is one Master of all the elements for all the different villages. after the Guardien dies one of the Masters take there place. :P

So before you have a chance of becoming the Guardien you have to be a Master first. lol, the ranks are Basic,Elite,Alpha,Master then Guardien. Only way to rank up is to Train and Study though. XD

the thing on his face is a rag. Dorag. cowboys have them tied around there face some times.

well its a wepon, Its actually a jetpack but he can put his guns on it to so yea...