The racers kicked at the Lickity Split, mocking her glitching and tearing the fastest pedal-power west of the Whack-A-Mole to pieces. Vanellope grabbed Taffyta and yanked her backwards in a panic, causing the pink racer to glitch.
Taffyta looked at her in surprise, then disgust.
Jabbing Vanellope with every emphasized word, causing her to glitch, she growled, "You will NEVER be a racer. You're just a GLITCH... and that's ALL you'll ever BE!"
She pushed her into the mud.
#TragicRush#WiR#PariZade
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Comments
10 Mar, 2014, 2:33 pm
You captured Vanellope's dreams being smashed into little kart bits. Congratulations. You gave me feels. :o On another note I'm planning to do something like that real soon. :p
10 Mar, 2014, 11:45 pm
People are using the power of the feels against me now. *throws hands in the air* That's it. You have my votes for this category. Just...take my heart and my tears and go away.
I kid. ;P Okay, so, Vanellope's face looks very appealing. The glitch effect looks pretty cool; the 3D looks good. Nice job with Taffyta's shiny jacket. I usually shy away from coloring shiny things because I'm less experienced with it, but you did it pretty well.
Now, the writing. asdfghjkl; you made me choke a little and die inside because of how you wrote it. Only thing that really stuck out to me, having seen this movie a billion times, I think that it's "west of the Whack-A-Mole", not "east". Sorry to nitpick. Meh. That's what I get for memorizing this movie.
Anyhoo. I really want you to win with this thing.
10 Mar, 2014, 11:47 pm
By the way, me choking and dying was meant as a good thing, a compliment of sorts. I realized I wasn't very clear about that. :P
11 Mar, 2014, 1:03 am
Honestly, I'm just going for 2nd place.
You took the bestest feels, Effie.
14 Mar, 2014, 3:41 am
Robin.
Hello.
It's been a while.
You seem to be good at calming my adrenaline, mind being a dear and perhaps have a chat?
Otherwise I might hurt someone accidentally... on purpose.
This may end up including myself.
14 Mar, 2014, 9:38 pm
I have an early birthday party from 5:30 to 8 or so (Central Time). So...
15 Mar, 2014, 2:58 am
Yes.
Everything is on my mind, and I'm just really stressed.
...
Ow.
I have a headache now.
I think I'm going to sleep early...
22 Mar, 2014, 4:10 am
re: aww, i'm sorry Doo, er, I mean Pari. When I open requests, you will get top priority :]
22 Mar, 2014, 5:14 am
Sure, go ahead. I think my picture was pretty mean-spirited, but I know your concept will be great.
13 Jun, 2014, 9:44 pm
FU.CK MY HEART.