A character for a story I'm working on to put NeoMan in my own universe. Making him not a fancharacter if you're confused. As always, please like and comment. and none of those "cool/one-word-compliments, now check out my gallery!" people. I worked hard on this, I just want some real feedback
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03 Jun, 2012, 5:05 pm
1: yeah, but it's not a refrence to him. He's gamma because he's the third and final prototype in the RST series. There are two more, RST1(Alpha), RST2(Beta). They are named after the first three greek letters. 2: I liked galaxy/astro man's eyes. I think it could be used as a screan in some cases(thats why the eye area is rather large)3: Robot in Scientific Testing. He's an advancement in ai that is able to feel emotions. Robots before the RST series can think on a human level, but cannot feel happiness, sadness...etc. Just a thought, Wouldn't RUST series be better? just change the word in to the word under? Anyway, Alpha goes rogue, Beta is badly damaged in his escape and Gamma helps her find the repair and repurposing center in north city before shutting down to thier injuries. This all happens 50 years before the start of the main story. Tony(NeoMan) finds beta 42 years after her shutdown. At that time, Tony's father runs the center and repaires her. She becomes sort of a mother figure towards tony who is only 9 at the time. However, on tony's 11th birthday, beta is attacked and killed by a group of people who oppose robots(also known as: they were jumped in an alley). On this day Tony makes a promise that he'll fix her someday and that he'd be the hero he couldn't be that day. Jump ahead 8 years and Tony works along side his dad at the center. He helps a girl repair her prosthetic arm. No name for her finalized, but for now, it's Mim. Anyway, prosthetics are frowned upon just like robots by the majority of Neo North city. Just like tony 8 years prior, she is attacked in an alley. However this time, tony is nearby and quickly jumps into action, taking out the thugs and fixing her arm again. The two become friends after this and Mim helps him out at the center from time to time. One day they stumble upon a back room in the center, finding the badly damaged gamma. Once repaired, Gamma recounts his talewhere beta couldn't due to accidental memory coruotion from the repairs. About a month later, Alpha makes his move. He stes fire to Mim's apartment building. Again, Tony jumps at the call to action. He dons a red Motorcycle helmet(to protect his eyes) and runs past the fire crew rescuing as many people as he can. Due to his aid, there were no casualties and only a few injuries. The papers nickname him Red Rescue. Some time later, Alpha plans a small robot revolt. In response to this, Tony builds the Neo armor and heads to battle.
03 Jun, 2012, 10:47 pm
You don't seem to understand my goal with this. I want to un-fancharacterize NM. The story is set in my own universe and has nothing to do with megaman other than there are robots.
04 Jun, 2012, 2:53 am
:3 Creative! i like the design.