-Early the next morning- Tiff was fell asleep at her lab desk, snoreing. The door to the lab opened at someone walked up dehind her. She heard the pawsteps and barely opened an eye, pretending to be asleep. She silently grabbed a clipboard,got up and snug at the intruder. "OW! What the hell Tiff!?" Dawn yelled as she whacked it out of her paw. "Woops. My bad." Tiff said, trying not to laugh. Dawn covered her mouth with her paw. "Shh... There's been a break in..."Dawn said, one paw placed on her gu.n holster. Tiff realized the power was out now that she was fully awake. "What's going on?" Tiff asked. "I don't know... Be quiet... We're going to the chief's office..." Dawn whispered. They walked down the hallway quietly. There was an evacutaion alert and most workers and agents left already. The door was slightly open. "Stay behind me..." Dawn said and peeked inside.
Phire was nowhere to be seen. "Chief Natalie. There's been a breach in security on this floor. We neef to lea-" "Leave now?... Why? And miss the fun agen Dawn." May turned the chair around to face them. "MAY!"Dawn quickly pulled out her wea.pon and focused on May. "Where is the chief!?" "Oh... She's safe... As well as the stupid dragon..." May grinned widely. "Why are you smileing..." Dawn didn't the the look on her face. There was a loud bang and before she could realize what happened, Dawn was laying on the floor,blood coiming out from her shoulder. "This agency is mine now..." May said. Dawn blacked out. Tiff who was still hidden in the hall ran outside and emidiatly called someone. ...
"Wolfey woke up and streached her paws. Since their meeting in the allyway Wolfey still didn't trust Garson.She had stayed in a hotel the next morning. "Wake up." She said to Garson, who was laying on the floor with his paws cuffed to a dresser drawer. "Meh?... Huh... *yawns* ... This is not the most comfortable sleeping arangement you know..." Garson huffed. Well it was either this or a bullet to your- ... One second" Wolfey's phone rang. "Yes... C-calm down, what happened?... The chief?... I'm on my way!" Wolfey hung up and turned around to see Garson standing up with her gu.n in his paws. "How did you..?" Garson waved a paw and grined. "Long claws... You learn to pick locks and handcuffs over time." "Then why didn't you escape earlier?" Wolfey asked, confused now. "Because... I didn't know how you planned on useing them." Garson chuckled. Wolfey rolled her eyes and grabbed the spare gu.n Garson had when they met the other day. They both froze when they heard a knock at the door.
[Who is that] Garson mouthed. "I don't know..." Wolfey wispered. "Open up." A stern voice said. "Get under the covers." Wolfey huffed. "Why?!" Garson shot back,staying quiet. "Just get under the covers!" Wolfey ordered. Garson growled and jumped under the bed covers. Wolfey opened the door, holding the gu.n behind her back. "Hellooooo... Is something wrong?" She asked innocently. Two dark gray wolves were at the door. "You're coming with us..." One of them said. Garson heard a click and he knew she was taking the safty off on her gu.n. Both of the gray wolves heard it too and quickly drew up their wea.pons. Wolfey ducked as they fired above her head. Garson sprang out to help but there were to more bangs and both wolves were laying on the floor. Wolfey stared smugly at Garson. "So... We have a flight to catch." (End Chapter)
Hm..that reminds me, I need to post the first part of my book soon. So far only the prologue's up. Btw, you guys want me to fit some of your characters in? I'd be glad to if you want. :)
Again an epic chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! Uhm..I'm just asking..But could one of my OCs appear in your story? It's okay if that ain't possible. I was just wondering.
Idk... I want you to be in it... ( I'm probably going to make a sequal so if not this one, the next one for sure ) But I'll need to find a place for yo-... YOU'RE IN! IDEA! Yes! Ur in!
cool. I'll figure out something for him, and let you know tomorrow. Here's a bit of info about the book itself: -doesn't follow a single hero, each part has a different main character -set in a dangerous post-apocalipse desert world -characters are different 'stages' of anthro (some use two legs, some four, etc.) -there is some magic, but it's very rare and powerful
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01 Mar, 2014, 11:37 pm
-Early the next morning-
Tiff was fell asleep at her lab desk, snoreing. The door to the lab opened at someone walked up dehind her. She heard the pawsteps and barely opened an eye, pretending to be asleep. She silently grabbed a clipboard,got up and snug at the intruder.
"OW! What the hell Tiff!?" Dawn yelled as she whacked it out of her paw. "Woops. My bad." Tiff said, trying not to laugh.
Dawn covered her mouth with her paw. "Shh... There's been a break in..."Dawn said, one paw placed on her gu.n holster.
Tiff realized the power was out now that she was fully awake.
"What's going on?" Tiff asked.
"I don't know... Be quiet... We're going to the chief's office..." Dawn whispered.
They walked down the hallway quietly. There was an evacutaion alert and most workers and agents left already.
The door was slightly open.
"Stay behind me..." Dawn said and peeked inside.
01 Mar, 2014, 11:46 pm
Phire was nowhere to be seen.
"Chief Natalie. There's been a breach in security on this floor. We neef to lea-"
"Leave now?... Why? And miss the fun agen Dawn." May turned the chair around to face them.
"MAY!"Dawn quickly pulled out her wea.pon and focused on May.
"Where is the chief!?"
"Oh... She's safe... As well as the stupid dragon..." May grinned widely.
"Why are you smileing..." Dawn didn't the the look on her face.
There was a loud bang and before she could realize what happened, Dawn was laying on the floor,blood coiming out from her shoulder.
"This agency is mine now..." May said.
Dawn blacked out. Tiff who was still hidden in the hall ran outside and emidiatly called someone.
...
01 Mar, 2014, 11:56 pm
-Canada. Back Allies-
"Wolfey woke up and streached her paws. Since their meeting in the allyway Wolfey still didn't trust Garson.She had stayed in a hotel the next morning.
"Wake up." She said to Garson, who was laying on the floor with his paws cuffed to a dresser drawer. "Meh?... Huh... *yawns* ... This is not the most comfortable sleeping arangement you know..." Garson huffed.
Well it was either this or a bullet to your- ... One second" Wolfey's phone rang. "Yes... C-calm down, what happened?... The chief?... I'm on my way!" Wolfey hung up and turned around to see Garson standing up with her gu.n in his paws.
"How did you..?"
Garson waved a paw and grined. "Long claws... You learn to pick locks and handcuffs over time."
"Then why didn't you escape earlier?" Wolfey asked, confused now.
"Because... I didn't know how you planned on useing them." Garson chuckled. Wolfey rolled her eyes and grabbed the spare gu.n Garson had when they met the other day. They both froze when they heard a knock at the door.
01 Mar, 2014, 11:59 pm
(sorry to interrupt but omg Garson why u so awesome?!)
02 Mar, 2014, 12:03 am
[Who is that] Garson mouthed. "I don't know..." Wolfey wispered.
"Open up." A stern voice said.
"Get under the covers." Wolfey huffed. "Why?!" Garson shot back,staying quiet.
"Just get under the covers!" Wolfey ordered. Garson growled and jumped under the bed covers. Wolfey opened the door, holding the gu.n behind her back.
"Hellooooo... Is something wrong?" She asked innocently.
Two dark gray wolves were at the door.
"You're coming with us..." One of them said.
Garson heard a click and he knew she was taking the safty off on her gu.n.
Both of the gray wolves heard it too and quickly drew up their wea.pons. Wolfey ducked as they fired above her head.
Garson sprang out to help but there were to more bangs and both wolves were laying on the floor. Wolfey stared smugly at Garson.
"So... We have a flight to catch."
(End Chapter)
02 Mar, 2014, 12:04 am
XDDD LOL! Thank you Pheonix! ^^
02 Mar, 2014, 12:05 am
woo! great job! You're an amazing writer.
02 Mar, 2014, 12:05 am
( P.S. Sry for a few typos. I get mixed up sometimes. )
02 Mar, 2014, 12:05 am
you're welcome.
02 Mar, 2014, 12:06 am
nah, it's good. not many typos, at least not enough to cause any problems. :)
02 Mar, 2014, 12:08 am
Hm..that reminds me, I need to post the first part of my book soon. So far only the prologue's up. Btw, you guys want me to fit some of your characters in? I'd be glad to if you want. :)
02 Mar, 2014, 12:10 am
Rly?! That'd be awesome! Thanks Pheonix! ^^
02 Mar, 2014, 12:10 am
Again an epic chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! Uhm..I'm just asking..But could one of my OCs appear in your story? It's okay if that ain't possible. I was just wondering.
02 Mar, 2014, 12:12 am
Ihdk Phire! "xD
I wonder the same thing myself!
02 Mar, 2014, 12:13 am
Yeah, of course I'll fit them in! :) If you have a moment, I'd like to just get some overall personality info. It makes writing easier. ^^
02 Mar, 2014, 12:14 am
Idk... I want you to be in it... ( I'm probably going to make a sequal so if not this one, the next one for sure ) But I'll need to find a place for yo-... YOU'RE IN! IDEA! Yes! Ur in!
02 Mar, 2014, 12:16 am
@Garson Thanks Garson!
02 Mar, 2014, 12:18 am
@Pheonix
You can use my fursona. I use him for everything. ( it's okay if you ki.ll him off somehow. I don't mind. XD )
02 Mar, 2014, 12:18 am
cool. I'll figure out something for him, and let you know tomorrow. Here's a bit of info about the book itself:
-doesn't follow a single hero, each part has a different main character
-set in a dangerous post-apocalipse desert world
-characters are different 'stages' of anthro (some use two legs, some four, etc.)
-there is some magic, but it's very rare and powerful
02 Mar, 2014, 12:20 am
@Garson: I probably won't need to. ;) I k.ill off over half of my characters anyways. >:D
02 Mar, 2014, 12:23 am
um...a question for you guys: I need to choose a title for the first part. what sounds better, "From the ashes" or " 'Till Dea.th peace brings" ?
02 Mar, 2014, 12:31 am
talking to my self again...
g'night everyone, gotta go... See ya tomorrow! <3
02 Mar, 2014, 1:16 am
Sry about that Pheonix. Yeah, From the ashes sounds really cool.
02 Mar, 2014, 1:56 am
I plan uploading Chapter 6 today if it'll let me. If not then it may have to wait until tomorrow.
02 Mar, 2014, 2:04 am
Ooh... Sry about that. >.<*
02 Mar, 2014, 2:07 am
I've gone missing :D XD
02 Mar, 2014, 2:08 am
^That was @Wolfen I forget to log into my other acount XD
02 Mar, 2014, 6:34 am
Omfg Garson!! This is amazing
02 Mar, 2014, 6:39 am
Thanks Tiff! ^^ That means a lot