Return to Hatena RP: the third and final chapter by GaNLey

Well as you can see, this is the third and final chapter of our grand tale. And the creature that is in this painting is indeed a Ravager.

We're still writing in third person.

Last minute rules:
1: No god modding (No controling the other "playable characters", only the non playable ones, like Charmandah, Noobs, or the Ravagers, you can control).
2: Have Fun
3: Make a sandwich

#GaNLey #RTHRP #Hatena #RP

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27 Feb, 2014, 7:36 pm
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GaNLey

27 Feb, 2014, 8:01 pm

They had just barely escaped the ravagers. Blaze looked very out of breathe carrying GaNLey, and GaNLey was still hungry for more sandwiches. But no amount of rest or food could change the scizor's mind.

"Hey Blaze, I know you just saved me by picking me up and flying away, which should be impossible for someone your size, but I need you take me back." GaNLey said with a serious tone in his voice

"They said that they had a mission, I need to know what it is, and I believe it's more complex than just making us their next meal."

Witzke

27 Feb, 2014, 8:06 pm

Peekatchu had finally arrived on the top floor, "Alright, leave GaNLey alone or I'll be forced to...." Peekatchu then noticed GaNLey and Blaze flying away, and the ravagers watching. "Oh come on." Peekatchu then tried to sneak slowly away.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

27 Feb, 2014, 8:54 pm

Blaze listened and dropped Ganley safely on the ground where the creatures werent but just in case he needed to be near them he was dropped near the ladders :p

GaNLey

27 Feb, 2014, 9:30 pm

"Thanks Blaze, now listen, you need to get Pokeguy here as soon as possible." GaNLey ordered

"I'll get Peekatchu to help me, we'll fight as many ravagers as we can, until we find the leader ravager. Try to get back before then. And if you can find anybody else, bring them too. We need an army."

GaNLey then climbed up the ladder, preparing himself for the greatest battle of his life.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

27 Feb, 2014, 9:41 pm

Blaze flew around the city looking for Pokeguy,before he flew he put some legos on the building :p just to help a bit during the fight before i go for a while :p

Witzke

27 Feb, 2014, 9:58 pm

Peekatchu was at the top floor, still trying to leave, not noticing that GaNLey was back, pathetically trying to open a door to the staircase

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

27 Feb, 2014, 10:13 pm

Blaze
i doubt PokeGuy will be here soon at all,we might as well fight them until he comes :p

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:12 am

With that being said I sat on the top of the building waiting for them to come at me knowing there were legos in front of them :p

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:16 am

they came at mah but seeing there were legos they jumped over them :p they by near caught me but nope, i flew away :O i was waiting for GaNLey,Peekatchu, and Pokeguy or at least one to come so i can safely land on it :p

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:18 am

While flying i was searching for objects to grab on so i can drop them on the creatures without being touched,but i ended up seeing nothung around,maybe if i looked closer....

GaNLey

28 Feb, 2014, 1:18 am

GaNLey climbed up the ladder in no time. When he reached the top of the building. He attracted all the attention of the ravagers.

"Heylo mates." GaNLey said with a crooked smile

Witzke

28 Feb, 2014, 1:19 am

Peekatchu is finally opens the door, "Hey uglies!" sticks tounge out.

Charmandah is being slapped by Pokeguy, "What-the-hek-man-I-am-not-Zorro-but-you-are-right-something-is-terribly-off-with-hatena!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:24 am

Blaze then saw a grey,sphere like object. it was a boulder and under it was an anvil!Blaze rushed there like Sonic on drugs and tried to carry the boulder but it ended up being to heavy... Blaze began pecking the boulder until it broke so he can carry the anvil. several mintues later the boulder broke in half and Blaze ended up carrying the anvil(wait,how does he carry an anvil but not a boulder?! whatever) slowly flying up due to its weight

GaNLey

28 Feb, 2014, 1:26 am

The ravagers began to attack. GaNLey then pulled back his claw, opened it, and thrusted his arm back out, releasing a beautiful silver energy ball from his claw. The front row of ravagers were blasted backwards.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:29 am

when reaching the top Blaze's talons were getting tired quite easily with muitiple of them coming off, he mistakenly dropped the anvil on the ground. One could hear a loud "THU.MP" sound from multiple stories away....

GaNLey

28 Feb, 2014, 1:33 am

The scizor wasn't the only one that was being attacked. Some of them were about to pounce Peekatchu. GaNLey then released his fury, if there is one thing that makes this scizor mad the most, it's seeing his friends in danger.

He dived into the army of monsters, cutting, slicing, hacking, ripping whatever was in his way.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:34 am

After tucking in my wings and head i then charged with flames covering me ,i then lifted my wings while seeing barely anything due to the amount if speed i was at, i then hit them with brutal force :p

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:40 am

Blaze then jumped on ones back and stabbed his beak aganist its throat releasing blo-this shall not be imaged :p

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 1:49 am

just in case any of us were in danger i bought 999 revieves in the PokeMart :D xD

GaNLey

28 Feb, 2014, 1:52 am

"Ohoho! look who's about to become my snack" Ryder the ravager said with streams of drool running down his chin.

The ravager was smiling, slowly walking towards GaNLey. His smile melted away when he noticed GaNLey was grinning back.

"You think I'm scared of you" Ryder roared
"I'm going to rip you to shreds Bit--

Before the ravager could finish his sentence, GaNLey reacted like lighting and sliced his head off.

"I don't like cussing." GaNLey said looking back at the decapitated body.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 2:05 am

Blaze decided to walk underneath the body hoping no one will notice a thing but one if them steped on the body revealing me, the worst part is that i was near i corner. i flew up in the air and quickly dived back down but right before i hit the ground i flew at low altitude very quickly with flames again covering me with that being said i stabbed it with force while it was stuck on my beak, because if that i slammed it aganist multi windows and finally shoved it aganist a building. while it hurt me to i flew back while trying to walk it off :/

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 2:06 am

wow,i had multiple typos in that last comment i did :p

GaNLey

28 Feb, 2014, 2:12 am

"OoC: Well I'm done RPin' for the day see ya tomorrow."

Witzke

28 Feb, 2014, 6:07 pm

Peekatchu smiled back at GaNLey, "Thanks for the help buddy!" Peekatchu then released a powerful thunderbolt, electrecuting all nearby ravagers. "Wow, I didn't know I couls do all that, LEVEL UP!

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 8:49 pm

Blaze felt lazy and stood on window where they wont even be able to catch mah unless they want to be suidc.idal l:p

GaNLey

28 Feb, 2014, 8:58 pm

Many ravagers have fallen, but there was still many more to replace them.
"That was pretty cool Peekatchu, but I don't think we can keep fighting them for much longer." GaNLey said trying to breathe again.

"What we need to do is find the Leader ravager, and force him to tell us his plan. If we do this, we can end this battle sooner. What do you say?"

Witzke

28 Feb, 2014, 9:29 pm

Peekatchu shook his head, "Ok, have any idea where the leader might be?" He asked GaNLey.

Charmandah and Pokeguy were still in hatena city, "Ok I know what you're thinking but it wasn't me." Charmandah then decided to look around, "Woah what happened to hatena, this is nothing like it used to be, this place is a wreck!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Feb, 2014, 11:21 pm

With Blaze hearing their plans he flew over trying to find the leader :p

GaNLey

01 Mar, 2014, 12:11 am

"I don't know Peekatchu, they all look alike." GaNLey said

Suddenly the terrible sirens rang again, it was like nails grinding against the chalkboard. All the ravagers then began to retreat.

"Blaze!" GaNLey shouted up at the air "Go follow them and find out where there going! Then come back immediatly!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

01 Mar, 2014, 12:42 am

Blaze followed them as they all headed for their base, in which was a cave.Blaze took a tiny peek inside and found all the Ravgers(however you spell it xD) all lined up neatly like an army with the leader sitting on a large red chair slacking off. He didnt want anyone to notice him so he instead of flying walked very slowly,Blaze then passed the Ravgers and was right behind the leader on the chair.Behind the leader was purple star,Blaze stole it and sneeked out careful without a sound being heard. Just so he can remember where he went he got a rock and rubbed it aganist the floor quietly where ever henwas going, after around 40 minutes Blaze reached back to where GaNLey and Peekatchu was :p

GaNLey

02 Mar, 2014, 12:34 am

"Ah Blaze you're back." GaNLey said to the starly
"What did you find out?"

(OoC: Wow, today was a slow day. Might have something to do with TTP. Well lets hope there is more RPin' tomorrow then there was today.)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

02 Mar, 2014, 12:38 am

Blaze explained anything to the scizor what was in it and where they went along showing the purple star :P

Witzke

03 Mar, 2014, 4:46 pm

"Uh, hey, Zoro! I'm just gonna, go hide over here" Charmandah the cowardessly hid behind Pokeguy.

Peekatchu stared at the shinning star. "Wow a purple star......are we gonna keep it?"

GaNLey

03 Mar, 2014, 5:55 pm

"So what does this purple star have to do with the ravagers, Blaze?" GaNLey asked

"Nevermind, you can tell me later, We need to find Pokeguy first.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

04 Mar, 2014, 1:24 am

Blaze replyed to GaNLey"I really dont know,I found it behind the leaders chair." :P

Witzke

04 Mar, 2014, 2:50 am

Peekatchu cought eye of the explosion Zoro and Pokeguy made with their attacks, "Hey over there! I bet that's where Pokeguy is!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

04 Mar, 2014, 11:58 am

Blaze flew over there where Peekatchu was talking about and ended up finding Pokeguy along with Zorro :P

GaNLey

04 Mar, 2014, 3:08 pm

"Come on Peekatchu lets go" GaNLey said following Blaze

"I hope Pokeguy is okay, it seems he was havin' a battle of his own."

Witzke

04 Mar, 2014, 5:01 pm

"Alright!" Peekatchu went towards the direction Pokeguy was in

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

04 Mar, 2014, 8:47 pm

Now with Blaze reaching where PokeGuy is Blaze blindly asked for him to join us :P

GaNLey

05 Mar, 2014, 3:54 pm

By the time GaNLey reached to where Pokeguy and Blaze were, it was too late. Zorro then unleased a blazing ball of fire, straight at Blaze.
"Oh no, Blaze watch out!" GaNLey cried

Witzke

05 Mar, 2014, 5:03 pm

Peekatchu walks over with a bunch of pretzels. "Oh hey guys! Sorry I made a quick pitsto-ZORRO what te heck!?!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

05 Mar, 2014, 11:33 pm

the fire ball hit Blaze with there not being enough space to dodge it,Blaze quickly got back up standing still as a soilder :P

GaNLey

05 Mar, 2014, 11:44 pm

"I bet that felt happy." GaNLey said to Blaze sarcastically, trying to make him forget his pain

GaNLey then turns to Pokeguy.

"Who and what is this guy?" GaNLey asked

Zorro then thru another flaming ball, but this time it hit GaNLey with enough force to demolish a tank. The blast sent the scizor flying, he crashed thru several buildings before he landed harshly on the ground.

Witzke

06 Mar, 2014, 4:36 pm

"Hey, thats not nice!" Peekatchu threw one of the oreyzels at zoro. "Take that! You meanie!"

GaNLey

07 Mar, 2014, 1:13 am

GaNLey then began to climb out of the rubble he was under, there were deep cuts and gashes all over the scizor's body. Half of the red hard metal skeleton that was on his face, was almost completely destroyed . Revealing green scale like skin underneath.

"Either my ears went bad or I just heard you say redestruction of Hatena." GaNLey said with a smirk

"Tell me something, how do you RE destroy something, wouldn't something have to be destroyed once before, before you could destroy it again?" GaNLey laughed coughing up green blood

"Oh shut up!" said Zoro

Zoro immediatly threw another flaming ball at GaNLey.

GaNLey started laughing like a man who spent to much time in a insane asylum. He knew this was it, this last fire ball would snuff out his life like a candle. As anyone could tell he wasn't sad or scared, for he always knew he would end like this. He knew he would die laughing.

"Lord, I coming home!" GaNLey smiled

Witzke

07 Mar, 2014, 2:19 am

Peekatchu saw the fireball fly towards GaNLey. He knew that if he was hit by that, it would k!ll him. Peekatchu threw a pretzel at the fireball and then jumped in it's path to protect GaNLey hoping that the pretzel would take the blow full.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

07 Mar, 2014, 9:40 pm

Blaze flew away where no one could see him especially Zorro ,around a mile. When Blazey felt safe he charged,broaded his wings,and began to take off at low altitude. With the speed building up quite fast with blue flames bursting out around Blaze,with all that said Blazey hit Zorro with all that force.Zorro then stood up slowly trying to recover his pain saying something.Blaze wasnt paying attention and barely heard a word of what he said,prob the others were listening :P....

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

07 Mar, 2014, 9:43 pm

After that Blazey brought a 3 master balls so if GaNLey,Pokeguy, or Peekatchu are in trouble he can send them to nurse joy xD

GaNLey

08 Mar, 2014, 3:07 pm

Then something completely impossible happened. The fire ball vanished before it hit the pretzel Peekatchu threw. The pretzel landed on the ground, unharmed.

"We're alive!" GaNLey said throwing his arms up in the air
"Saved by the pure goodness of the pretzel!

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

08 Mar, 2014, 3:19 pm

"all hail the preztel" Blaze bowed down and shouted! xD

Witzke

08 Mar, 2014, 5:17 pm

Peekatchu is lying on the ground covering his head thinking he is dead. "...hey wait, I'm alive? But, but how!?"

GaNLey

08 Mar, 2014, 8:15 pm

"Wait guys, Zoro said that he was the master of illusions, so maybe these fireballs are fake, everything he throws at us is just an illusion!" GaNLey declared

Witzke

08 Mar, 2014, 8:43 pm

"Well that might explain the pretzel thing." Peekatchu exclamed, "But I don't wanna find out the hard way." He said cowardly as he stood up.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

08 Mar, 2014, 10:21 pm

Blaze began throwing pretzels at Zorro for some reason <xD

Witzke

09 Mar, 2014, 12:44 am

Peekatchu stood straight, "Come on, we beat the ravagers.......ok, most of them, so we can beat Zoro if we all work together!" he said sort of bravely.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

09 Mar, 2014, 2:40 am

Blaze thought of an idea as a light bulb blinked, "PokeGuy,you can use Aura Sphere,right!? and the move never misses,along with it being supah effective aganist him :P,perhaps you can use it now! Peekatchu, i want ya to distract Zorro playing tricks for him OR SOMETHING!! and GaNLey, Its best for you not make contact with Zorro as he can end up using a Flamethrower, so just...i dont know, just dont make contact. And I... ill just be flying over to see if anything goes wrong" Blaze ordered :P

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

09 Mar, 2014, 5:30 pm

"Peekatchu,distract Zorro and Pokeguy, SPAM AURA SPHERE LIKE THERES NO TOMORROW!!!!1!" Blaze yelled :P

GaNLey

10 Mar, 2014, 1:34 am

GaNLey couldn't stand it! Everybody had a job to do. Everybody had a role to play to defeat Zoro. What could he do to help? He sat down on a rock watching the others fight, distract, etc. like he was watching a movie.

Then an idea stormed his brain, an idea that might make all this end. The scizor got up and ran back towards the place where Blaze flew to follow the ravagers.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

10 Mar, 2014, 2:10 am

"Ganley,its to dangerous for you!" Blaze shouted looking back at him. But Blaze couldnt leave his spot,as he had to order both of them.

Witzke

10 Mar, 2014, 3:21 pm

"Alright, got it!" (sorry about bein late XD) Peekatchu then began waving his arms near Zoro, "Hey Zoreo! Check me out!" Then he started dancing "I bet you can't do this!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

10 Mar, 2014, 8:16 pm

blaze then mouthed the words"keep going" to peekatchu :P

Witzke

11 Mar, 2014, 4:07 pm

Peekatchu stared at the trick, then continued, "Uhh, I totally saw strings. Oh, wait wait, *chuckles* Hey Zoreo, hows about a glass of milk? You are milk's favorite cookie!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

11 Mar, 2014, 9:36 pm

Blazey was amused by the stars,but shook his head sticking to the plan.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

12 Mar, 2014, 1:06 am

Blaze tracked Zoro down and right when he saw his body on the ground he struck him with a brave bird and slammed him into multiple building, after again returning to his spot he moved his body a little bit with his beak but there was no reaction.Blaze then walked away but the second he turned he heard a weird sound,he turned back and saw that the body dissapeared.While looking at the blank floor he saw a shadow move quickly across the room along with the window curtains blowing through the wind,a pot then dropped. This made Blazey in somewhat in fear,the walls suddenly were all fixed and patched like nothing happened. Blaze slowly walked towards the wall just so he can lean aganist the wall but just as he puts his back aganist it he falls over seeing that the walls were fake. As he falls he exspans his wings and flipped over his body for flight :V :P

GaNLey

12 Mar, 2014, 1:18 am

In no time the scizor reached the ravagers hideout. GaNLey hid behind the corner of the doorway secretly watching them whine, moan, and lick their wounds.

'Ok time to do something stupid, that I know for sure I'm going to regret later.' GaNLey whispered in his mind

GaNLey then revealed himself, started to wave his arms back and forth, and shouted several insults that would make any creature mad.
He got the ravagers attention for sure. Each one forgot about their pain, and began to chase the scizor. GaNLey ran faster than he has ever done before. leading them to the battle of Zoro.

Witzke

12 Mar, 2014, 1:55 am

"Get it, zoro, mixed with oreo, its like, zoreo...." Peekatchu had then noticed GaNLey had left the battlefield, "Wait, where's GaNLey? He's in no concition to be left alone..."

He then noticed something over the horrizon.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

12 Mar, 2014, 8:13 pm

"Tanks :P"(yes,no "H" xD)Blaze replied,then flew up in da air carrying Zorro with his talons...well,the awkward feet he has and just when he was going to unleash a Close Combat he saw GaNLey running from the Ravagers,Blaze dropped Zorro down to help GaNLey despite him not being in trouble :P

GaNLey

12 Mar, 2014, 10:45 pm

'Oh hey Blaze, what's up?' GaNLey asked
'Hey, you see where Zoro is right now, I need you to pick me up right before I reach him!' GaNLey commanded

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

12 Mar, 2014, 11:52 pm

"K" Blaze replied but still questioned why he lets them go and chase him,especially the fact that hes in bad condition :P

Witzke

13 Mar, 2014, 2:54 pm

Peekatchu saw the flamethrower and looked at his kast pretzel, "My stomach will miss you..." he then threw the pretzel at the flamethrower. Then, knowing of GaNLey's plan used quick attack to quickly grab Zoro, get a random seet, and strap him in a seat belt, "Safety first!" *cheesy laughtrack plays* "Mmm, maybe that wasn't the best way to hold him down..." He thought to himself.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

13 Mar, 2014, 7:57 pm

Blazey then carried GaNLey when he was close to Zorro(i think :P) however,as before due to his weight it was a pain carrying him, seemed like it felted like draging 6 tons on your feet,talons, whatever u have xP xD

Witzke

14 Mar, 2014, 1:33 am

Pedkatchu then got out of the way.

GaNLey

14 Mar, 2014, 1:34 am

GaNLey was lifted in the air. But the ravagers still continued their stampede. Zoro was completely caught off guard. No time to move or speak. He just gasped and screamed like a little girl.

He was crushed, stomped, pounded, and body slammed by the entire gang of ravagers. Nothing could possibley survive this horror. Suddenly Zoro unleashed a dark force of energy that blasted all the ravagers off him, sending the hairy beasts flying into the air.
He got up, brushing the dirt of his shoulders.

'Is that all you could think of to stop me? How pathetic!'

GaNLey then forced his way out of Blaze's claws. He fell straight down, landing on Zoro. Pointing his opened claw at him.

'If you make one move, I'll keep using Flash Cannon on you until, there's nothing left to clean up!'

Darkness started to cover the entire city. Zoro began to laugh. He flipped the scizor off him, stood up, and said-

'I am Zoro, master of illusions, I can't be stopped by mere weaklings like you.'

Witzke

14 Mar, 2014, 1:37 am

"Uh, guys, the ravagers!" Peekatchu exclaimed.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

14 Mar, 2014, 8:26 pm

"Your right Zorro,you will win.." Blaze said to Zorro trying to prank him.He flew away slowly trying,Zorro then followed him but without looking he tripped over a pebble and fell(lolwut). Blaze then commanded the others to jump him together quickly before he got up :P

GaNLey

15 Mar, 2014, 1:47 am

GaNLey didn't want to disobey Blaze, but if he did try to attack, the ravagers were sure to retaliate.
'Only a fool would try to attack him with a bunch monsters there to protect him!' GaNLey said avoiding eye contact with Blaze

'But then again, I've always been a fool.

GaNLey then jumped up in the air and fell like a stone on Zoro's back.

'Come on guys, what are you waiting for ?' GaNLey asked with a laugh

Witzke

15 Mar, 2014, 8:34 pm

Peekatchu shrugged then jumped on Zoro, "Oh well, might as well." He said to himdelf. He then started tickling Zoro, "Try concentrating now!"

Le ravagers watchered

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

16 Mar, 2014, 12:57 am

Blaze then remembered about the purple star he had found.He held high to the sunlight,the purple star shined like a brand new golden trophy.The ravangers stared,it seemed like a dog and a bone.Blaze noticed that they were so interested into it Blaze shouted"If you want this purple star,go gang up on Zorro then!" The chicken like beasts attacked Zorro,when it looked like a moutain made of Ravageners a light shined through them, letting out a white explosion."Ya think you can defeat me like this!?" Zorro yelled,"Who knows," Blaze said softly with a crowd of larger like Ravangers behind Blaze.

Zorro swallowed in fear, then turned the place pitch black"you realize we can still see your eyes?! a bit...." Blaze said.Blaze let out a small blue flame on the ground for light"How the heII do you do that,you are a starly after all..." Zorro question
"part starly,named Blaze after all(ba dum,tisss xP)" with the ravangers being able to see Zorro now they were playing around with him,literally.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

16 Mar, 2014, 12:58 am

They chewed on him,pulled him,throw him around,etc

GaNLey

17 Mar, 2014, 3:32 am

What was once Zoro, was now a bloody pulp. There was barely anything left of him. GaNLey tried to hold back his sick. Luckily he was successful.
After the ravagers were thru. They all brought their attention at Blaze, they wanted the star. Each one drooling staring at the small starly and his star.
' Well Blaze, you are going to have to do some fast thinking and talking to get us out of this one. ' GaNLey said with worry in his voice

GaNLey

17 Mar, 2014, 3:35 am

(Ooc: Hey guy sorry about not being on the RP for a while, life became very busy again.)

Witzke

17 Mar, 2014, 2:59 pm

(OoC: Its ok G xD)
Peekatchu looked really wporied, "Uh, guys, hes alive still right? I mean, that couldn't have ki.lled him.........I'm gonna face this way now." Then Peelatchu was hatching a plan

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

17 Mar, 2014, 7:50 pm

Blaze whispered to Peekatchu,Pokeguy,and GaNLey "I have a plan..." Blaze threw the star in the center of the pack so they can get out safely while they fight over it :P

GaNLey

17 Mar, 2014, 11:33 pm

' Ok I get it, you want us to run, right?' GaNLey asked sarcastically
' Don't worry, you don't have to tell me twice. '

GaNLey then darted away, heading towards the wall that circled Hatena.

' Come on guys, follow me, I got the perfect escape plan! ' GaNLey said with surprising enthusiasm

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

17 Mar, 2014, 11:40 pm

Blaze rushed to where GaNLey was "Now what?" Blaze said questioned...

Witzke

18 Mar, 2014, 12:37 am

Peekatchu catches up, "Wait, I thought we would, you know, go back to our rooms or something? I mean, wasn't that the point of coming?"

GaNLey

18 Mar, 2014, 1:16 am

' Yeah I know Peekatchu, but if we stay here, we're lunch! ' GaNLey replied

'Now this is a pretty simple plan, Blaze you are going to carry us over that wall!' GaNLey smiled

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

18 Mar, 2014, 1:20 am

"yes,because im THAT strong D:" Blaze replied saracasticly. Blaze began with Peekatchu due to him being lighter and dropped him quickly on the other side.Then dropped GaNLey on the other side.Now all thereisleft is Pokeguy

Witzke

18 Mar, 2014, 2:22 am

"Wow that went better than expected!" Peekatchu thought to himself, "Wait, how did I not get hurt by that drop?"

GaNLey

18 Mar, 2014, 10:46 am

Then suddenly GaNLey fell on Peekatchu.
'Ugh that felt good, thanks Peekatchu for cushioning my fall, here let me help you up' GaNLey laughed

'So....um... How was your vist to Hatena?

Witzke

18 Mar, 2014, 2:47 pm

"Yeah, your welcome." GaNLey then helped Peekatchu up. "My visit?" Peekatchu said while brushing himself off, "Well, if almost dying three or four times counts as fun, then yes it was! Al though, besides the near death parts, it was nice to see hatena one last time, but boy has it gone downhill."

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

18 Mar, 2014, 7:46 pm

"Ehh,wait a sec! wheres Pokeguy and Charamandah?!" Blaze shouted

Witzke

18 Mar, 2014, 9:20 pm

Charmandah os at le creator's room place. "Lets see, ah, here it is!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

18 Mar, 2014, 10:24 pm

"Peekatchu,shouldnt we get them out before the ravangers get them?!"
Blaze stated.

GaNLey

19 Mar, 2014, 12:36 am

'Yeah, we should Blaze!' GaNLey agreed
'If you want to Blaze, you can carry Peekatchu back over that wall to help you get the others, I'm going to go back to the sewers, I got another plan again.'

GaNLey then ran to the nearest manhole, lifted the lid, saluted his friends, and jumped into the sewers.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

19 Mar, 2014, 12:53 am

"Ugh" Blaze moaned.Blaze threw Peekatchu over the wall instead of safely dropping him

Witzke

19 Mar, 2014, 2:22 am

"GAAAH WHAT THE HAY!" Lands, "Ow." Peekatchu snuck past the ravagers and started scavenging.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

19 Mar, 2014, 10:58 am

Blaze flew above flapping his wings lightly so no one can hear him :P :/

Witzke

20 Mar, 2014, 12:10 am

Charmandah called Pokeguy, "Hey Pokeguy, I found your door! I think I have a plan to get in!"

Peekatchu had heard Charmandah and ran toward that dirrection, "There he is!" As he ran toward the creator room appartment he was thinking about Zoro. "There's NO way Zoro would let himself be defeated that easily, he MUST be tricking us."

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

20 Mar, 2014, 12:47 am

"Peekatchu,he is,there is no denying" Blaze said.
"i might think i want to stay here..despite it being closed, it feels like..home.Only if FS3D came here earlier."
He (Blaze) put the key in the door forgetting about what he was supposed to do,laying down on the bright red sofa and watching flipnotes on his flat tv..
"But yet,there isnt a food service is there..." Blaze moaned.
"If there is an another service that is simliar to hatena but IS open,like where i can paint or something and see my friends there and be remembered by some,i will go there.."
Blaze while laying down pulled up his Flipnote Galaxy S14 (samsung xP) and figured out where his friends were all along recently...
"Colors gallery..." Blaze thought to him self.
"THATS WHERE IM GOING!!!" Blaze shouted
he ran out bursting out of the door and took off!

Witzke

20 Mar, 2014, 11:58 pm

"Hey, if it wasn't an illussion it could've been one of his minions semt to distract us while he did something unspeakably evil." Peekatchu said forgetting of why he's in here, "Hey wait we gotta get out of here! They don't even have food!"

GaNLey

21 Mar, 2014, 1:02 am

'I have it!' Upchuck roared

'It's all mine! Da purple star is mine! And you know what dat means, dat means I have da right to become da new leader of da ravagers.'

The ravagers stared blankly at Upchuck. They knew he was right. But they also knew that he was leaving something out. That one of the ravagers could challenge him for the throne. Suddenly the old leader appeared out of the mass of mutants. And he asked-

'Aren't you forgeting somethin' Upchuck? Or did you not want to reveal to us dat we had da right to challenge you.?

'No I haven't forgot.' Upchuck replied

'Good.'
Without saying another word they began to attack each other like wild wolves. Fighting over the rulership of the pack. Clawing, biting, kicking, and cutting. This fight to the death, will decide who will be the new ruler of the ravagers.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

21 Mar, 2014, 8:27 pm

Blaze from abive just remembered what he was supposed to do,he quickly flew back down to do his job :P

Witzke

22 Mar, 2014, 2:52 pm

"Well they did it before, in that other r--------peanut." Then they came up to the creators, room appartment. "Hey look, we haven't been here in awhile! Lets get Charmandah and get out of this dump!"

GaNLey

22 Mar, 2014, 7:34 pm

The battle was fierce, bloody, and gruesome. The Leader and Upchuck, these two ravagers, fought like they have never fought before. They had a good reason to do so too. Having the right to rule an army is definitly worth fighting for.

'If you succede in this battle to the death, what will hope to gain, other than being ruler?' the leader ravager questioned while slamming Upchuck's head into the ground

Upchuck kicked the leader off his back and replied--

'I hope to end this plan, we don't need to do this, there's no point! What could you possibly hope to gain by completing the mission?'

'What would I possibly hope to gain?! I will make us no longer scavengers of Hatena! I will cause us to rise and become gods of not just this city, but the entire world!' He answered

The leader then slammed himself into Upchuck, causing the young ravager to fall into the abyss that was behind him.

Witzke

24 Mar, 2014, 4:10 pm

Peekatchu smiled, "Don't worry Pokeguy, we can just bust the door down!" Charmandah was across the room, also unable to open the door like Pokeguy, "Stu.pid door, just open!"

Witzke

24 Mar, 2014, 4:11 pm

(OoC: my door to be exact xD)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

25 Mar, 2014, 12:01 am

Blaze came flying out of nowhere flying near ground at blazing speed(pun entirely intended) and slammed into the door that Peekatchu,Pokeguy,and Charamandah were trying to open with beak first.The door broke into pieces bit by bit.
"Sorry :P" Blaze said with a grin :P.

GaNLey

26 Mar, 2014, 2:05 am

Upchuck woke up. The ravager was surrounded by darkness, nothing was seen or heard. The pitch-blackness seemed to drown out all sounds. Upchuck gazed up, he could see light trying to force it's way into the abyss he was in.

He tried standing, and failed, he must of hurt his leg on the way down. He began to examine his injury. He flinched when his paw came in contact with the injury.
'Yep it's broken.' he said painfully to himself

Upchuck sat in the dark for hours, he tried standing multiple times, but each time brought more pain to his leg. Suddenly, when he began to think things couldn't possibly get worse, a light started to creep it's way out of a nearby tunnel. And what followed after the light, came something he hoped he would never see again.

Witzke

27 Mar, 2014, 9:46 pm

Peekatchu tryed to make things look better, "Hey, look at the bright side......even if there is none! Uhh, that chair is still there, and that rock!" Peekatchu realized his method wasn't working, "Sigh....wait a second."

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Mar, 2014, 11:26 pm

Blaze stood back on his feet and saw PokeGuy $(r @ m i n g loudly.
"Uhh,who knows! Maybe someone would replace Hatena with something else,and if there isnt there is... FS3D in which we have to wait 14 years later..." Blaze trying to help Pokeguy.
"But yet,what happened to the Hatena plus... the service i had to pay to add more creators, so basically i wasted money.." Blaze moaned.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

28 Mar, 2014, 11:27 pm

apparently s.c.r.e.a.m.i.n.g is foul langugage xDDD

Witzke

29 Mar, 2014, 5:00 pm

"Force field?" Peekatchu added, "Oh, the anti hac.k, you need your dsi..." Peekatchu then realized the ravagers had stopped fighting, "Wait, you guys hear that........thats the sound of nothing. The ravagers must have stopped fighting! THEY'RE GONNA FIND US!!!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

30 Mar, 2014, 2:35 am

"Its the end of the world as we know it is" Blaze sings due to nothing to say :P

GaNLey

31 Mar, 2014, 12:15 am

'How dare you show yourself to me after what you've done!' Upchuck growled at the figure standing in the shadow.

The ravager tackled it and began to sink his teeth into it's shoulder. Suddenly Upchuck was blasted away by a silver ball of light.

The ravager crashed painfully on the hard, cold, ground, staring angrily at the red insect that revealed himself from the shadows.

'Well what are you waiting for? Finish me off, finish me like you did Ryder!' Upchuck roared

The scizor pulled back his arm and stabbed into the ground right next to the ravager's head.

'No! I won't do it, I'm not the heartless monster you are.' GaNLey answered

GaNLey

04 Apr, 2014, 2:50 pm

The ravagers surrounded the chewed up corpse of Zoro. Each one bowed down in respect for him. But none of them were sad, in fact some of them were grinning, as if they knew something the rest of Hatena didn't.
Suddenly the the image of Zoro's mawled body faded away, revealing an unharmed master of illusion.

Zoro stood up and began to
speak.

'It is time. We can no longer wait. These outsiders have prolonged our plan for far too long. It's time we end this now.

Zoro pointed at the ravager leader.

'You, tell your fellow ravagers to rip, to crush, to demolish everything they see.'
Zoro commanded
'And when we're done destroying this city, we will move on to whatever lies beyond these walls.'

'And what about us, You did promise that once were done helping you, you would let us use the purple star to make the people of the world into ravagers.'

'Oh yes about that, I lied.' Zoro smiled

Witzke

04 Apr, 2014, 7:36 pm

Peekatchu was panicing, "Guys, could we, uuh, go now, because, WE NEED TO GO!" Charmandah grabbed Peekatchu and was shaking him, "Peekatchu calm down!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

04 Apr, 2014, 7:52 pm

"Where?!" Blaze asked Peekatchu confused

GaNLey

05 Apr, 2014, 3:00 am

The ravagers flooded the streets of Hatena. Breaking and bashing everything, living or non, that got in their way. In no time they will reach the small group of creators who are trying to get inside their old creator rooms. And end their lives slowly.

Meanwhile GaNLey sat in the dark with Upchuck having a quiet conversation with him, at the same time thousands of Noobs were crawling behind them, full of curiosity and fear, for which they never been this close to a ravager and lived.

'So, why are all these...uh...noobs following you scizor?' Upchuck grunted

'It must be my likable personality.' GaNLey replied
'I don't like sarcasm, so could you please give me a straight answer!?' Upchuck ordered

'Fine, you want the truth well here it is, these noobs, these lying, theiving, beggars. Are my new army that I will use against the rest of your pack.' GaNLey said

'How did you make them all listen to you? How did you become in charge of them?' Upchuck asked with amazment

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

05 Apr, 2014, 2:10 pm

Seeing a huge storm and a flood of Ravangers Blaze up in the air waiting for it to end :O :P

Witzke

05 Apr, 2014, 4:29 pm

"Blaze where are you going!?" Peekatchu then gazed out the window, "HOLY CALIFRADJALISTIC! Pokeguy we gotta go NOW!"

GaNLey

07 Apr, 2014, 2:05 am

'Fear, I use fear to control them.' GaNLey answered

'Why would they fear someone like you?' Upchuck asked trying to hold back a roar of laughter

'Well you see, I got a rep of being a sadistic psycho monster. A noob by the name Feist, told the rest of the noobs a exaggerated version of the incident we had in these sewers. Now I'm known to these guys as the scarlet insect of death.' GaNLey said with a crooked grin

Both the scizor and ravager began to laugh. When suddenly a noob came running from the tunnels that led to the city above. He was gasping for air. The noob tried to speak, but only blood filled gurgles came out. He then fell face first into the ground.

Witzke

07 Apr, 2014, 6:52 pm

Peekatchu then grabbed Pokeguy in desperation, "Pokeguy come on! You can't get into your creator's room, hatena's de.ad, and the ravagers are coming to k!ll us, we CAN'T stay here, we'll di.e for sure!!!" Charmandah then noted, "You remember Flynn has the move earthquake righ-" Peekatchu interupted, "I KNOW that but hows that gonna help, it's a pokemon move it's not like it causes a real earthquake........right?"

Witzke

08 Apr, 2014, 2:03 am

"The SECOND?!" Peekatchu replied in shock, "Does that mean that this has a chance of k!illing us!?"

GaNLey

08 Apr, 2014, 3:29 am

The scizor and ravager examined the noobs body, the entire back of his body was ripped off spine and all.

'They're finally doing it, scizor you don't have a chance of survival, once a ravager pack begins to stampede, nothing can stop them or slow down their destruction.' Upchuck said with fear shivering up hid spine

'Well I can't just sit back and hide in here while my friends are being ripped apart by a bunch of monsters!' GaNLey cried

GaNLey then stood on a large rock, and coughed to clear his throat to get his army's attention.

'I know you are afraid, I am too. But we can't sit here and pretend nothing's happening. There's a war going on, and it's time we fight it. Noobs, liars, thieves, it's time to redeem yourselves. I promise after this battle I will no longer be in control of you.'
'And what if we choose not to fight? what then?' a random noob asked hidden amongst the crowd

'Then I will personaly tie you up and feed you to Upchuck over here.' GaNLey responded

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

08 Apr, 2014, 7:58 pm

"Im just flying up here due to the storm" Blaze said to Peekatchu.
"And cuz of the earthquake...But anyways i am able to carry you two from the earthquake... i think...maybe :/"

Witzke

09 Apr, 2014, 2:34 pm

"Blaze, you have to carry us over the wall like last time!" Peekatchu yelled to Blaze.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

11 Apr, 2014, 12:29 am

Blaze-But you will experience the earthquake Peekatchu!Thats why im saying i can carry you guys up,though maybe Pokeguy can ride on Flynn while i carry you so its less weight :D

GaNLey

11 Apr, 2014, 12:48 am

The ravagers were getting closer. Though some were smashed by Flynn's draco meteor, it wasn't enough to stop them. They surrounded the small group of pokemon. And without hesitation the front row of ravagers leaped to attack.

Witzke

12 Apr, 2014, 8:08 pm

"Zoro's alive!? I knew it!" Peekatchu said unaware of Zoro's intentions.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

13 Apr, 2014, 12:27 am

Blaze swallowed in fear of the ravangers and Zorro.
"You still alive Zorro?!" Blaze asked shocked!
"Yuss,im the masturrr of illusionz"
"U DONT SAY" Blaze replied.

GaNLey

14 Apr, 2014, 2:53 am

Suddenly something small bounced off of Zoro's head and landed at Pokeguy's feet.
'Who dares hit the master of illusion?' Zoro barked

'Me, and I'm sure many other's do too, but they don't want to admit it in front of your face.' GaNLey said revealing himself
'Grrrr.... Once I finish ripping the flesh off of Pokeguy and your friends, I will make sure your punishment will be much more severe than what you can imagine.' Zoro growled

'Uh yeah, I really don't care right now. Hey Pokeguy could you do me a favor and use that stone I just hit Zoro with? GaNLey asked
'I would love to see his face, after seeing you mega evolve.'

Witzke

14 Apr, 2014, 4:03 pm

"GaNLey!" Peekatchu said with his face sweliing with joy, "You made it!"

Charmandah noticed the stone, "Lucarionite..." He said to himself quietly.

Witzke

18 Apr, 2014, 2:03 pm

"Come on Pokeguy, show him what you're made of!!" Peekatchu shouted with excitement, "GaNLey, I'm trying to come up with a plan, I need some help"

(OoC: ^ ooh, good one XD *aplauds*)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

18 Apr, 2014, 3:15 pm

"We have 2 potential mega evolutions being GaNLey and Pokeguy,this could possibly be enough to take down Zorro" Blaze whispered to himself.

GaNLey

19 Apr, 2014, 2:59 am

GaNLey caught the scizorite, and began to go thru the same changes that Pokeguy went thru.
'Woah, this feels good!' GaNLey laughed nervously
'And to be honest guys, I really don't know what I'm capable of. This is a first for me. So Zoro prepare for the shock of both of our lives!'

GaNLey then postioned his extra large claws for battle.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

19 Apr, 2014, 4:27 pm

"Well,if they are prepared for battle why not we?"
Blaze asked Peekatchu and Charamandah.This also reminded Blaze,he had a thunderstone with him throughout his journey here.He tossed it to Peekatchu
"Use it" Blaze whispered.
He also tossed rare candies at Charmandah for him to evolve also.
Blaze tucked his wings and spread his talons slightly apart from each other standing still looking up with his shining beak ready for battle.

Witzke

19 Apr, 2014, 11:31 pm

The thunderstone hit Peekatchu's head then landed in his hand, "Woah what the, why'd you throw that at m?" He then began to glow, "Woah, cool, what's going on?" Charmandah caught the candies, "Wait, Mega evolution and normal evolution are very different, you can't go back." He stated.

Witzke

19 Apr, 2014, 11:33 pm

Charmadah, then realizing the desparity of the situation, nodded, "A:right, desperat times cal, for desperate measures I guess."

GaNLey

20 Apr, 2014, 12:35 am

'Oh don't worry about that Peekatchu. If we defeat Zoro, I'll turn your body back the way it was with this.' GaNLey said showing a small blue shell shaped object with holes in it.
The power of time seemed to radiate off this musical device.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

20 Apr, 2014, 8:27 pm

"Well,if that is so.. i guess i should evolve too."
After 22 rare candies Blaze felt a glow.A large bright purple ball as bright as the sun surrounded him. He felt an awkward feeling that he never felt before. The evolution let out a blast with force. Blaze took a step forward as it didnt feel right, especially with the large comb on his head."Well,its only for now" Blaze whispered to himself.
He stood tall with his broad wings moving his hair out of the way #HairStyle so he can get a better view.

Witzke

21 Apr, 2014, 6:04 pm

Charmandah, now Charizard, looked at both options, "X." He said confidently. Peekatchu was still marveling at himself, "Being Riechu is so cool. So, who's going to take care of the ravagers?"

GaNLey

21 Apr, 2014, 7:43 pm

'Me!' GaNLey grinned
'And my army! Noobs attack!

Suddenly little pale humans sprang forth from manholes in the ground, each one wielding a crudely made sword and sheild made out of scrap-iron. Upchuck was the last to jump out from the sewers. His body was completely armored by scrap-iron. His mind full of rage, his heart full of fury. He was ready for war.
All at once, they let out a war cry, and raced their way towards the ravager pack.

GaNLey

21 Apr, 2014, 7:49 pm

(Ooc: Hey guys, I know this sounds kinda stupid, but where are we at in this story? On a building or on the ground? Because the last thing you guys were doing, was trying to get into a creator's room.)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

21 Apr, 2014, 7:53 pm

@OoC
i actually dont know either xD 2 seconds ago Blazey was flying and now on the ground/building xD

Witzke

22 Apr, 2014, 2:39 pm

(OoC: Well, we were in the building but now we're on the ground so, maybe the building partially collapsed or something idk xD)

Witzke

22 Apr, 2014, 2:40 pm

"Woah, where'd you get them!?" Peekatchu asked GaNLey.

Witzke

24 Apr, 2014, 12:12 am

"Woah hey no fair Zoro!" Charmandah said angerly, "I was really itching to try this out."

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

24 Apr, 2014, 2:03 am

Blaze noticed the amount of ravangers,it seemed to much to handle.
"We need to do something to control them." Blaze said looking down at them.
"Chiarezard and Flynn,can you find one green/red/blue/purple star? When you do throw it somewhere far so they cant get us for quite some time.While you two do that ill take some of them on."Blaze said.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

24 Apr, 2014, 2:08 am

Blaze carried multiple ravangers high up into the air with his talons and beak. He let them go watching them scream for help and falling onto other ravangers. :P

GaNLey

24 Apr, 2014, 1:18 pm

One by one, a ravager was blasted by GaNLey's flash cannon or slashed by his metal claw. His mega evolution gave him a new found strength. Never has the scizor felt such power run thru his body before. He felt invincible.

Meanwhile Upchuck plowed his way thru the ravager pack. Looking for only one ravager. The one ravager he challenged before and shall challenge again. The leader.

Witzke

24 Apr, 2014, 3:57 pm

Chahrizahd grabbed a red star and flew up grabbing some ravagers attention and threw it across the city. Riechu was using his electricty attacks to shock ravagers and quick attack for evasion.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

24 Apr, 2014, 10:15 pm

Blaze charged a hyper beam from the sky,little red charges can be seen around him,he after charging let out a huge red beam coming out of his wings.The hyper beam pounded the ground hard making an earthquake like rumble while making a large dent everything it touches,
it seemed kiII about half of the ravangers leaving a large gash on the ground and holes through multiple buildings.Blaze then saw a red star fly across the sky making the ravangers run cross the city at the speed of light going crazy for the it. Blaze flying back noticed Pokeguy wasnt there.
"Does he know how to teleport or something?" He questioned.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

24 Apr, 2014, 10:17 pm

to kiII* TYPOZ >:U

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

24 Apr, 2014, 10:18 pm

for it* another typo :/

Witzke

25 Apr, 2014, 12:21 am

"Yeah, where is Pokeguy anyways.....Zoro!" Riechu thought, "Come on Pokeguy I know you can beat him!" Meanwhile the red star had landed, and the ravagers started greedily piling on it, completely ignoring the fight they were in and thinking only of themselves. "They we go, all together in one spot." Chahrizahd said.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

27 Apr, 2014, 1:17 am

"Well,what do we do then!?" Blae asked.

Witzke

28 Apr, 2014, 7:22 pm

"What else?" Chahrizahd told Blaze, "They are leaving themselves completely vulnerable to any attack, so that's just what we'll do!"

GaNLey

29 Apr, 2014, 2:16 pm

'No wait we should help Pokeguy, my army should be able to take care of the ravagers by themselves.' GaNLey said

Meanwhile the Leader ravager was hopelessly trying to get the rest of his pack's attention. His actions were in vain. Suddenly a cruel cold chill shivered up his spine. He knew someone was behind him. He turned around, fear was the only emotion he showed on his face. For what he saw was a raging Upchuck galloping his way towards him.

But the leader's fear quickly turned into fury, and he braced himself for a brutal rematch.

Witzke

29 Apr, 2014, 7:10 pm

"GaNLey's right, we should help Pokeguy." Chahhrizahd said, "But how are we gonna break the sheild?"

"Attack it!" Riechu said, "If or wait three turns.....Nah, might as well attack it. I suggest using non-phsyical attacks, crashing into it will lead only to wearing ourselves out."

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

30 Apr, 2014, 5:51 pm

Blaze throws potatos at the sheild :P

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

30 Apr, 2014, 10:57 pm

Blaze thought of an idea! If we cannot break the shelid "IF" we can always use these teleporters i made to teleport us to where other people are :O though they only have one use,nothing more! Blaze threw 4 of the teleporters on the ground for Flynn,Chariezard,GaNLey, and Peekatchu to take.
"But a have a extra teleporter,lets test it!" Blaze wrapped a teleporter on the potato and lauched it to Pokeguy.
"Does it work Pokeguy!?" Blaze shouted.

GaNLey

01 May, 2014, 2:16 am

As they waited for Pokeyguy's reply, Upchuck and the leader ravager battled like raging waters. They clawed, they kicked, they sank they're teeth into each other's skin. Anything that would cause a wound that could be their demise.

Witzke

01 May, 2014, 4:37 pm

"Teleporters, hey where did you get all this stuff anyways?" Peekatchu asked. "Eh, Oh well." Then he picked up the teleporter

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

03 May, 2014, 3:39 pm

Blaze heard Zorro yell.
"It works!"
Blaze teleported himselfand landed behind Zorro.
Blaze took this opportunity to charge a giga impact at Zorro.

Witzke

03 May, 2014, 9:08 pm

(OoC: ground as in ground or bottom of the field)

"Oh sweet the teleporter works, but just to make suuure.." Peekatchu saud. Chahrizahd slapped Peekatchu, "Focus." Peekatchu pouted, "Fine fine. Prepare for a whooping now Zoro!" Peekatchu teleported then to Zoro with an attack already to use.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

04 May, 2014, 3:24 am

Blaze fully charging the giga impact came at high speeds bashing his head into Zoro's.Right after Zoro fell to the ground Blaze picked him up with his talons and threw him up and attacked him in the air.
He slapped him with his broad large wings,stabbed him with his talons,etc. Finally when he felt he did enough he dropped him and blended in with the force field making Zoro confused where he was. :P

GaNLey

05 May, 2014, 12:02 pm

(Ooc: Sorry for not being on so long, I'm having a very busy week, first I had to draw your birthday present Witzke, then I had to draw my anniversary announcement, soon I have to make a birthday present for Kitsuna(KitHasArt)on Deviant Art, and I still have to wright stuff for my series and comic strip ideas. But I promise I will try to RP with you guys tonight.)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

06 May, 2014, 12:46 am

"Well..its just us five... Unless this revive works on Pokeguy.."Blaze said looking down. Something struck Blaze remembering he had loads of rare candy.
Blaze ate as much has he could now being level 98.He saved the rest for the others.He after felt something on his back,he took it off and it was a choice band.
Blaze put it on his forehead and felt much more powerful than before.

GaNLey

06 May, 2014, 1:09 am

GaNLey couldn't believe what he was seeing. So much death and pain, he looked to his left and saw the leader ravager and his new friend Upchuck fighting to the death, and the leader was winning. The scizor then looked to his right, and saw Pokeguy lying motionless on the ground. Suddenly a ravager tackled him, dug it's teeth into his shoulder, and ripped out a large chunk of meat and metal from his body. GaNLey screamed in pain as his body devolved back into a scizor. Dark blood was oozing out of his shoulder. GaNLey knew it was too late to save himself and his friends.

Witzke

06 May, 2014, 1:23 am

Peekatchu zapped the ravager, paralysing it, and ran to Ganley's aid, "Ganley! Hold on, we'll get you help!" He lifted Ganley up on his shoulder. "We should've never come back, if only we had known how badly things have gotten." Peekatchu thought to himself. "Charmandah, go find Pokeguy, Flynn, and Blaze (Peekatchu not knowing what literally just happened) we need to leave this place now!" Charmandah then went over to Blaze and Pokeguy.

GaNLey

06 May, 2014, 1:48 am

GaNLey tried to speak, he tried to say something to Peekatchu that would end all this carnage, but the only words that came out were "o..ba...n...time". Everything was becoming blurry. His entire life began to flash before his eyes like a movie. and when it ended, what was once Ganley the scizor, was now an empty shell. His lifeless arm fell on the cold ground beneath him, his claw opened and inside was a blue shell with holes punctured all thru it.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

06 May, 2014, 8:00 pm

Blaze ignored Peekatchu, he was itching to have revenge.
Blaze then remembered the time capsule GaNLey had, he grabbed it out of his claw and pressed the button in the center with his beak.It flashed blue for a split second and returned us to when Zoro was in the shield with Pokeguy.Blaze remembering how Pokeguy died teleported himself in back of Zoro and threw up into the black shield with his talons,little black pieces came falling down after.
"Hopefully its not one of his illusions again" Blaze said worried

GaNLey

07 May, 2014, 1:15 am

(OoC: I can't believe it Blaze, You out of all people should of known what the "time capsule" was. I gave obvious hints, it has holes, it's a musical item, it brings you back in time, and it's blue!)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

07 May, 2014, 2:19 am

(OoC:Though none of them commented so im not sure xD :U)

Witzke

07 May, 2014, 5:52 pm

(OoC: OH, I get it xD where do we get all of this stuff anyways?)

Witzke

07 May, 2014, 7:02 pm

Doo doooo, do doo doooo, do do do doo, doo, do do do, doo do do doooo, Le Song of Time was played, unless you were hinting at the song healing, then that was.

GaNLey

08 May, 2014, 2:34 am

"I'm alive! Ganley said vigorously "Peekatchu hand that orcarnia.
Ganley swiped the musical instrument from the him.

" I have a plan, how about we all go back in time before any of this happened? We will still have the same memories that we have now, but we'll be in the past. And we'll have the advantage of knowing what will happen next, what do you say mates? "

Witzke

08 May, 2014, 6:39 pm

"Perfect, but you might wanna make that quick before we get ambushed!" Peekatchu stated.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

08 May, 2014, 8:10 pm

Blaze argeed to GaNLey shaking his head :P

GaNLey

10 May, 2014, 1:16 am

Ganley then played the melody that made the sands of time flow in reverse. The world around them went backwards like a tape being rewound. And When it stopped Pokeguy, Blaze, Peekatchu, and Ganley were all standing in front of the walls of Hatena once again.

"So what should we do now?" GaNLey questioned

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

10 May, 2014, 3:32 pm

Blaze was returned infront of Hatena,he looked down and notcied he shrunk down a lot by size and his talons now looked like orange curved right triangles.
He could however see easily without his comb in the way.

Blaze didnt know what to do,he flew over the large black gate looking straight at where the battle began.

Witzke

10 May, 2014, 4:19 pm

"Wait wait wait," Peekatchu started confusedly, "Are we BACK at when we all first got here?!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

10 May, 2014, 5:16 pm

"i guess" Blaze told Peekatchu

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

13 May, 2014, 1:44 am

Blaze started to sleep on the ground because everything else seemed frozen,he woke up once he heard a sound :P

GaNLey

13 May, 2014, 3:00 pm

The sound Blaze heard was Ganley releasing wind.
"Sorry, but I needed you to wake up" he said muffling a laugh with his claw

He then stood up on a large stone next to the wall.

"Listen up everyone, we have to make a decision, we can go back in here and relive all those events again or we can go back home and forget what has happened here all together. Which is it?

(ooc: Sorry guys, I've been real busy with this weekend; mother's day, church, teaching Vera how to ride a bike, and make a garden.

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

14 May, 2014, 12:46 am

Blaze:I dunno,I still feel like getting payback at Zoro... :P

O>o

Witzke

14 May, 2014, 4:20 pm

"Huh, Charmandah hasn't gotten here yet. Well, we could go back in, to try to stop them from doing there plan, but that could mess things up. Hmm..." *Jeperoady think music starts playing*

(OoC: It's fine Ganley, those are great reasons to not be on ^ ^ and I haven't had as much time lately either xD)

GaNLey

17 May, 2014, 3:08 am

"I don't know what to decide, how about you Pokeguy?" GaNLey questioned

Witzke

20 May, 2014, 4:50 pm

Peekatchu moaned, "Oh, but I don't wanna go back in. Mrmmmf, fine."

GaNLey

20 May, 2014, 8:41 pm

"I think we already know what he wants Pokeguy, the question is how the heck do we stop him?! I mean we hit him with everything we got and he still gets back up ready for more!" Ganley growled

Ganley began to pace back and forth working himself into a tantrum.

"We can't do this alone, we need more help then just a bunch of theives, liars, and star beggars!"

Suddenly the scizor's fury melted from his face and a smile formed to replace it.

"If we can't over power Zoro and his army of ravagers, then maybe we should try out smarting them instead.
Blaze take us forward in time, right before the battle began, before we all evolved! Take us to the time I was about to bounce that stone off Zoro's head!" GaNLey said with excitement

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

22 May, 2014, 12:14 pm

Blaze listened to GaNLey and pressed the capsule :P

Witzke

24 May, 2014, 3:03 pm

(OoC: Spoilers yay XD)

Peekatchu stood there for a second, "Yeah, yeah I remember now! But wait, what if by going back, Zorro never HAD an evil plan!?"

GaNLey

28 May, 2014, 2:10 am

"Ughhhh!!...I can't believe it! How did we go into the wrong timeline! Why can't anything go right! I had the perfect plan!" Gan Lee screamed

(Omigosh!! I'm so sorry, I've been so busy making comics and doing requests, I never had enough time to play. But I promise after one more comic, I'll start RPing more often.)

Witzke

28 May, 2014, 1:47 pm

"Well, back we go!" Peekatchu was about to play the ocarina or capsule or whatever it is.

(OoC: No prob Ganley)

Witzke

29 May, 2014, 7:24 pm

Peekatchu handed it to Pokeguy, assuming he had a plan.

Witzke

30 May, 2014, 11:38 pm

"POKEGUY WHY!? What is someone were to di.e again!?" Peekatchu said in shock.

GaNLey

31 May, 2014, 2:58 am

"Dude! What defog did you do that for!? How are we going to get back. Arrghh! I feel like I'm living inside The Butterfly Effect movie" Gan Lee cried
He sat down and tried to decide wether or not he should cry or laugh.

(ooc: Yes my scizor self is called Gan Lee, I decided that a couple months ago.
But I'll still be called Ganley until further notice. 'Nuff Said!)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

01 Jun, 2014, 12:32 pm

"Flynn,just why cant we use time travel? If one were to get kiIIed again theres no way to bring them back" Blaze said with an attitude :P

Witzke

03 Jun, 2014, 2:47 am

(OoC: Btw they are back in front of hatena again where they all started)

Witzke

03 Jun, 2014, 2:47 am

(OoC: I beleive)

Witzke

05 Jun, 2014, 5:38 pm

"Hmm, I guess he's kind of right." Peekatchu replied, "The least we've messed up at this rate is the fact I've never had breakfast..........I'm hungry. So what are we gonna do? (*sarcasticly*) Stop Zoro before he gets here, or even, take the purple star before the ravagers/Zoro can use it and throw it in a volcano or something?"

GaNLey

08 Jun, 2014, 2:13 am

"Wait guys I might have an idea, what time are we in?" Gan Lee asked
(ooc: Allright guys, I'm going to be on here alot now because I'm thinking of taking a break from posting art online for a while. It'll give me more time to finish some stuff. Like this RP for example.)

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

08 Jun, 2014, 5:17 pm

Blaze has no clue whats going on so he stands still breathing :P

Witzke

15 Jun, 2014, 12:57 am

(OoC: Ok, good, now we know where we are XD)

Peekatchu listened to Gan Lee.

GaNLey

21 Jun, 2014, 10:38 pm

(ooc: Sorry guys for not being on for so long, life became sucky. I hope you guys are still intrested at finishing this, If want to retire, that's ok, I'll understand.)

Witzke

24 Jun, 2014, 1:20 am

(OoC: Nah it's cool, I find this rping very fun ^ ^)

Peekatchu replied, "Well, we kinda had to Pokeguy, both you and Gan Lee would've been de.ad, and the rest of us wouldn't have been very far behind. Alright, I understand, no more timetraveling, but what really matters now is that we find a way to stop Zoro and end this."

Witzke

28 Jun, 2014, 9:15 pm

Peekatchu stopped Pokeguy, "Pokeguy wait, we need you, you've been enemies with Zoro for a long time, and now YOU gotta end this! You are a hero, and you'd never back out from a fight like this. Come on Pokeguy, we need you if we're gonna finish this!"

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

30 Jun, 2014, 2:54 am

(OoC:Sorry,I completely forgot about this >_>)

GaNLey

01 Jul, 2014, 5:24 pm

Gan quickly got up and ran into the pathway of the discouraged lucario.
"Wait, wait, wait don't leave! We need you! Yes it is true, you're not a hero, none of us are. We didn't purposely get ourselves into this war. We just stumbled into this mess like a group drunkereds.
But since we caused this, we need to work together to fix it.
I know we're just a group of entertainer's, but if you or me or anyone else quits, it could jeopardise our chances of preventing Zoro or the Ravagers from succeding in completing their plans!"
Gan pleaded while trying to catch his breath

GaNLey

02 Jul, 2014, 12:19 am

"Wait this could work to our advantage! We could tell 'em wot's gunna happen next before it happens, so that way they'd become more prepared for wot they are soon to face! Or maybe even work togetha, there is strength in numba's." Gan Lee whispered to Pokeguy

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

02 Jul, 2014, 12:51 am

I dont even know how to respond lol

GaNLey

02 Jul, 2014, 1:05 am

(ooc: I know the feeling. XD)

Witzke

02 Jul, 2014, 3:22 pm

"Is this good or bad?" Peekatchu tried to decide.Then something probably happened where they were all behind a conveniently placed bush xD

GaNLey

04 Jul, 2014, 12:12 pm

Gan Lee then f.arted behind the bush where the rest of the gang was hiding at.

"Sorry." Gan said trying all his might not to laugh, hoping that if he stayed quiet, the past versions of themselves might think what they heard was a duck or something.

But it was too late, they knew what they heard, and began to walk cautiously towards the bush.

GaNLey

07 Jul, 2014, 10:47 pm

Gan gave Pokeguy an evil look.

"You're trying ta make this more difficult dan it has ta be, aren't you?" Gan growled

Witzke

08 Jul, 2014, 4:35 pm

Peekatchu was extremely confused, "Shouldn't we just go back to the timeline we were supposed to be in, because this doesn't make any sense to me."

GaNLey

10 Jul, 2014, 12:56 pm

"We can't, Pokeguy the timecop over there threw da blasted thing the river!" Gan shouted

Gan Lee then sat down trying to get rid of stress. He took a couple breaths hummed a song, nothing was helping. He then looked up, hopinging to see if the answer to all their problems was going to fall down from the sky on top of them. What he saw though was not any answer, but it was something falling.
"Everybody get out of the way!" Gan cried

GaNLey

12 Jul, 2014, 10:53 pm

Gan stood in between past and present Pokeguy.

"Heylo, sorry for interupting this pleasant conversation. But didn't I just get done scr.eaming outloud something large is about to fall on us!"

Just then a rather large boulder landed on Gan Lee crushing his left leg.

Witzke

18 Jul, 2014, 10:44 pm

(OoC: I'm gonna call Past Peekatchu P.Peekatchu)

"Oh my gosh Gan are you ok?!" Peekatchu yelled. P.Peekatchu just looked up in the sky staring, "Where'd that come from?"

By now was the time Chahmandah had showed up, "What in the world is going on here!?" He said, seeing doubles of everyone.

GaNLey

19 Jul, 2014, 1:39 am

"Ugh....I'm fine just in a little pain that's all" Gan said struggling to stand

He looks up to see if any more boulders would appear out of nowhere. But instead he found something even more dreadful than the boulder.

"Uh... guys, new problem." Gan muttered pointing at a very large hole that's on the top of the wall.

Witzke

26 Jul, 2014, 6:40 pm

As they were running, Peekatch asked Pokeguy, "Hey uh, Pokeguy, is any of this related to us time travelling?!" Charmandah (OoC: the past one because Present one isn't there) asked them, "Time travelling, wait is that even possible!?"

GaNLey

01 Aug, 2014, 12:12 pm

"Guys wait! I can't walk!" Gan cried

The ravager above then leaped down. Landing directly in front of the abandoned Scizor. Without the slightest hesitation, the Ravager picked up Gan Lee and sprang himself back up to the city.

Witzke

01 Aug, 2014, 5:23 pm

"Gan NO!" Peekatchu yelled! "Wow I can't believe we didn't see that coming." P.Peekatchu stated bluntly.

Witzke

09 Aug, 2014, 4:25 pm

"Now what are we supposed to do!?" Peekatchu asked. "I suggest we keep running!" Charmandah stated!

Blaze FlipnoteHatena

20 Aug, 2014, 12:13 am

Blaze stood there while everything else seemed frozen in time
(OoC:Just making a little joke about how fast we are commenting to each other :P)

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