whoa this is great and i love the fix to the face you did to this one,
you made it smaller and thinner and it brought her out more to the size of her body,

also remember with shadows always remember where the source of your light is coming from and if possible add a few highlights to the skin as well,

you have her anatomy great and a little blush will bring her expression out, however her fingers look a little small. If you can work in front of a mirror or take a pic of your hands in that same position so you can see how long the fingers go,

hope it helps and keep it up and if you got questions please feel free and ask me and great work