GaNLey walks slowly thru the sewage, looking for the source of the creepy echoes that whisper in the dark.

"Oh this is so much fun." GaNLey said to himself

"Why did I have to go down here alone? I could of just waited for everybody to meet me at the manhole and reveal my new plan to them, but no, I do the stupid thing and venture the sewers alone."

Suddenly a high pitched screech exploded acrossed the halls.
GaNLey's blood ran cold, his legs became as still and heavy as stone. Terror consumed his body. He couldn't move. He couldn't scream. And in the dark, something was crawling towards him.

Blaze- i think i should go,eh...

and by that i mean in the sewer xD not the RP...

( Oh ok! XD I actually thought you meant the RP.)

The creature was on all fours, slithering towards GaNLey. He is now face to face with the terrified Scizor. This slimey creature then inhales and sreams at the top of his lungs.

"Add Stars!"

So many thoughts raced in GaNLey's head. What is this thing? It looks like a human, but very very thin and sickly pale.

"What could this be?" GaNLey repeats in his head

"An alien, a gremlin, an alligator?"

GaNLey studied this creature. it paced back forth mumbling to it's self.

"Add stars, add stars, add stars."
GaNLey then knew what it was.

"NEW POKEMON ADDED! Star Begger,it begs for stars just to become more popular.they are known for their weak skills!" Blaze-DIS AINT POKEMON (nevermind,we are all based off ones,Ganley-scizor Peekatchu-pikachu Pokeguy-lucario me-Traits of a starly(before used to be 1oo percent starly) :/

The way he walked, the way talked to himself, the way he repeated the same phrase over and over again. GaNLey knows exactly what this little creature is.
He is a creator who steals other creators' flipnotes, false reports every creator he despises, and begs for stars he didn't want to earn for himself. He is a Noob.

GaNLey couldn't believe it, he thought all of them left Hatena. This Noob must of been very determined to stay for some odd reason. And from the looks of it, it's been here for a while.

(Hey Blaze I have a question, are you in the same hole as I am?)

nvm,im not.i have something planned >:D

( Ok you got something planned, cool.)

"Soooo....um, heylo my name is Ga....err... Mr.Underhill. What's yours?" GaNLey asked kindly

The Noob quickly turned his head at the scizor, hissed and went back to mumbling to himself.

Blaze later on his journey finds a pichu in a box, on the box says in bold words,"ADD 800 STARS TO ADOPT THIS" it seemed like a over priced deal until he notcied the pichu was made of card board,he figured out it was a scam. a door shut closed behind Blaze thus him being trapped, he tried to get out as multiple shadows were coming from the front of Blaze

they came closer wirh one of them holding a glossy master ball.although the ball didnt look right, it looked more like plastic than metal. the shadow which appeared to be a boy with a star on his head kept yelling"GIVE STARS OR ELSE...." i refused to give any as he and the group threatened me,the boy later pointed the ball to me head,i decided to risk it(dont try dis xD) and he pressed the button in which nothing happened,he figures out it was a fake and i (cut this out)WENT GO FRICKING JACKIE CHAN ON DEM!!!

"Hey listen here buddy I was wonderin'. Do you know how to get out of this sewer, and into Hatena?" the scizor questioned with a more serious voice

The Noob once again turned his head at him, hissed, and went back to mumbling to himself.

"Allright listen here, I've had enough of this hissing crap!"

GaNLey now has his pinchers clamped around the Noob's neck.

"You are going to show me how to get to Hatena now or I'm going to make you drink this foul liquid that flows within these sewers!"

to my head* typo xD

in front of the knocked out star beggers was light, i decid to walk to the light leading toooooooooooooooo......

decide* SO MANY TYPOS I HAVE!

outside....(yayyyy....ish)

outside i see a random fox just saying"someday...a year...." i was questioned so i followed him but it vanished away... :/

"Allright, allright I tell you what ever you want!" The Noob gasped

He slowly lifts his hand and points to the tunnel that was on his left.

"That is the way, I think, that will lead you to Hatena."
"You think?" GaNLey says
"Well I don't want to go to the wrong way and end up getting eaten by someting, so I'm just going to take you with me, just for safe measures."

i was just about to go back into the sewer until i saw another sewer next to it unopened, so i jumped in that sewer....

i then see a star begger that looked exactly like the one i faced with a scizor from behind, i decided to fly over just to figure what was going on :p

( A scizor from behind? GaNLey is dragging the Noob, not the other way around.)

i meant i was behind you two :p

"Please stop, don't take me back there!" the Noob screeched

"Why, were you lying about this tunnel?" GaNLey asked

"No, It's not the tunnel, it's Hatena, it's not the same anymore." the Noob replied
"It's alot more dangerous, most people like me have mutated, have become something monstrous. That's why I was hiding here."

"Well that sounds happy, now lets stop talking and keep on heading to Hatena." GaNLey said

"Did you not hear what I just said?" the Noob squealed

"Oh I heard you, I just didn't care." GaNLey answered with a smile

Wirh Blaze hearing the noob he decided to fly over to the end of the tunnel to see if it was true (Y U SO GULLIABLE BLAZE!?)

with* another typo i have -_-

(I'm too tired, I'll continue tomorrow)

k,bye :/

Meanwhile, Peekatchu is walking around dum.bfounded until he comes around a sewer cap.

"Hay GaNLey I found one!"

-no response-

"Heh, I'll just go in myself!"

Peekatchu then entered the manhole, unaware of what dangers could be ahead of him.

Blaze was just near the end of the tunnel when he suddenly heard someone come down, he quickly flew to where he heard the noise and to his suprise he saw PeeKatChu...

Peekatchu climbs down the ladder.
"Good greif this place is out of shape"
He notices Blaze fly toward him.
"Gaaah!! Oh, wait, it's just you Blaze, I thought you were a flying aligator or something"

"Are we there yet?" GaNLey sighs

"Almost, just a couple more yards." the Noob answered

"So do you have a name, or do you just go by Noob all the time?" GaNLey asked with a grin

"Yeah I have a name, it's...Feist." he said lowering his head

"Wow that's a strange name!" GaNLey said trying to hold back a laugh

"Yes I know, I had cruel parents." Feist moaned

(OoC: For all who don't know this, Feist used to mean "a silent f.art".)

What was minutes, seemed like hours. It was dark, smelly, and little to no sounds were made or heard as the scizor and noob traveled deeper into the sewers.

"Why do you want to go back to Hatena so badly?" Feist asked with a hiss

"I have my own reasons, and I'd rather not reveal them to you" GaNLey retorted

"Hey look a ladder!" GaNLey shouted
"Will this take me to Hatena?"

Feist nodded.

GaNLey was filled with excitement and joy. He couldn't believe he was going to see his old home again. Happy memories of him sharing his flipnotes to the world swam thru his mind.
He immediatly let go of Feist, and began to climb the ladder. the higher up he went, the more light he saw.
"I'm almost home." GaNLey said with a happiness that could not be described with words.

Blaze sees its just peekatchu and returns to the enterance of hatena i fly over there seeing Ganley climbing a ladder

Meanwhile, Peekatchu had started trecking down another sewer, and had come across an intersection with three different paths.

"This doesn't seem right. Hmm, I'm gonna go right, Blaze you can go left or forward."

Peekatchu then walked into the dark right path, slowly fading into the dark.

When in the left side i saw light gleaming,i follow the loght and i then visit hatena, so nostalgic...

while on my way to my room i see that all the rooms are locked. i then bump into my locked room,i try to cut it with my wings,try to burn it(friggin fire proof) but it appeared to be invisiable.... only if there was a key....

inviscable? invinceble? idk

while searching for the key i see a factory of keys.each one had the pixelated frog on the top,that when i notcied its the key to the doors.all the keys were being burned and i had to save my key. BRB cuz i need to eat

Peekatchu comes upon a large room, which appears to be empty.

"Huh, this is weird. I wonder uf anyone is here...Hello?"

GaNLey gazed at his old home and couldn't believe what he saw. The world around him was simply amazing. Buildings with giant screens on them, all over the place, covered with trees, plants, and flowers. Birds that can only be seen in your imagination flying in beautiful blue sky. Green and orange frogs hopping every where you look. Animals were all over the city. Lions, tigers, bears, wolves, deer, and many other animals, are all roaming the streets of this incredible city. The place has become a fusion of a forest and a city.

lions and tigers!? GET MAH OUT OF HURR(jk)
i later got the key and opened my room.i then looked at my computer looking at the all my favourite creators flipnotes! it seemed just like heaven...i then turned on the flat screen TV to see all my flipnotes.i soon remembered about my friends, i then fly over to their rooms to see what was there but no one,not one of my friends were in their rooms. i decide to walk back to my room when i passed a sign saying in bold red leyters"HATENA SHUTDOWN ON MAY,31"

letters*

Peekatchu alone in the dark room, finds a ladder up to the surface.

"Light, looks like I found the way out!"

Peekatchu then climbs up the ladder to find out he was in a McDonalds kitchen.

"Dan.git, wait why is there a sewer in mcdonalds...figures. I wish my fruends were here."

Peekatchu goes back to looking for another exit.

LOL xD^ peekatchu buy e a burger,nothing in it asides the buns and the patty xD

"Wow, this is truly amazing" GaNLey gasped

The Scizor began to explore this old yet new world. Everything he knew about the city of Hatena was wrong. The entire place was rearranged, roads that use to lead to one place led to another. A once mighty metropolis, has become a land of confusion. And now to make matters worse, he became lost.

Peekatchu had finally found an exit out of the sewer that led to hatena city, but not as bright as evryone elses, Peekatchu had come up to where all the noobs would stay, and it looked worse than ever.

when inside my room i notcied a fox that looked excatly the same from before.he was this time replacing the sign saying"SudoFox" i decide to try to get him when i see my door shut closed(Blaze forgot that the door only opens from outside :p) he began attacking to door until he gave up. the poor starly felt light headed and fell....(HES NOT DEA-FAINTED xD)

"Ok GaNLey, don't be scared. You have been lost before. Just remember your motto, If all else fails make a sandwich." He said to himself looking for a tree that grew loaves of bread.
Wasn't very successful obviously. He then decided to find his old creator room. He knows he has an entire fridge full of sandwiches there. They might be a little old, but GaNLey's not picky.

sometime later Blaze got back up and ready,everything looked dull,less population,less motivation,nearly all the people had rushed flipnotes,and all the flipnotes from the building were about to fall,the town was greyish,overall the city looked quite bad...

when Blaze took a glance at the window a sign in purple letters says"SudoFox is taking over" "THIS,this is what he meant a year later...." Blaze yelled...

"Hello?" Peekatchu yelled in the alley. No response was given. "No one must be here." Or at least that is what he had thought. *random noises*

Believe it or not, GaNLey found his creator room in no time. He was as giddy as a school boy. He hopped up and down as if he drank too much coffee. He than began to consume as many stale sandwiches his stomach could handle.

Time seemed to fly quickly, it was allready night. And in the middle of eating his thirty third sandwich, a terrible loud siren boomed across Hatena.

"Oh gosh that is loud! I should probablly get out of here and regroup with my friends." Peekatchu then tried to lift up the sewer cap, but it would hardly budge. "Dan.git!"

GaNLey nearly choked on his sandwich, the siren sounded like a cross between a howler monkey and a banshee. For about an hour it roared, then it just stopped. Silence filled the city

"What the heck was that?" he asked himself, breaking the silence

He immediatly ran out of his creators room, ran down the stairs, and shoved his way out the door of the building he was in.

"I must find my friends!" GaNLey said with fear in his voice

"HEELP!!" Peekatchu yelled trying to lift up the mahole. "It's no use." Then all of a sudden Peekatchu heard a Screech. "GAAH! Who's there!?"

I gtg now, good night everyone who is here! .u.

A rumbling sound that resembled thunder, now replaced the city's silence. GaNLey was running as fast as his feet could carry him. He yelled out as loud as he could, the names of his companions, but the thundering noises drowned out his voice.

GaNLey looked up and noticed shadows racing on the roof tops of the buildings and then jumping off from them onto the streets. Once they landed, the shadows became very still.

(OoC:Goodnight everyone, I'll continue tomorrow)

Blaze now flies out the window like jackie chan and finds Ganley :/

The shadow then began to circle the scared scizor.
"I'm not afraid of you!" GaNLey lied blatantly

"Get back all of you!" He shouted at them

"I mean it, these claws are used for more than just making sandwiches." GaNley declared

The shadows didn't listen, some of them you could swore were laughing. They were getting closer now, revealing themselves from the dark. Quite hideous creatures they were. They looked like a rat, ape, and a wolf all mixed together.
They started barking and growling, not only at GaNLey, but at each other too. Fighting over who will be the first to slowly eat this newcomer.

"Want a sandwich?" GaNLey asked with a forced smile

Closer and closer they circled towards GaNLey. And stopped, giving a small space between them and the red insect. All was silent. The only sound that could be heard was the sound of wings flapping.

(OoC:Hey guys, I have church today, so I won't be on here until later like six hours later, that is all I have to say, bye.)

Blaze sees ganley trapped by mysterious creatures, Blaze watches Ganley and the creatures :p

The entire situation seemed pretty hopeless, nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. GaNLey looked up at the sky looking for the source of the flapping sound. And what he saw gave him some type of hope. He saw a small starly flying in the air.

"Blaze." GaNLey whispered to himself

GaNLey then began to scratch large letters into the cement using his sharp metal claws. The monsters didn't know what to think. They didn't understand what the scizor was doing. After all they couldn't read. So they just stood and watched.

In a matter of minutes, two words were engraved in the cement. Two words that could only be read from above. Two words that said--

Get Help

Blaze decided to act like a tw.at and stands there and do nothing :p xD jk Blaze goes freaking Jackie Cha-enough with that, he brings out a gun- i mean a lego and puts it behind the people so when they step they.... yeah :p xD

Blaze later was finding Pokeguy,Peekatchu,OR SOMETHIN to help ganley cuz he was just to lazy :p

Peekatchu, still trapped in the alley, sitting there, doing nothing. "Sigh, you know, this looks a bit like the alley I was in during the end of hatena (TEOH), wait, then that would mean-" Peekatchu the looked up, noticing Blaze overhead. "HEY, done here!"

If Pokeguy still wants to play, Charmandah walks by Pokeguy, "Hey Pokeguy, what are you doing?"

Silence. That's all that could be heard. The creatures did not attack, did not growl or bark, did not try to bite or scratch. They just stood and stared at the two big words that were carved in the ground by the scizor. They were quite interested in his writing, wanted to see more of it.
One of the creatures emerged from the crowd, and walked slowly towards GaNLey. Then did something that was completely unexpected. It spoke!

"More!" it growled

"Uh... ma..more...more what?" GaNLey asked nervously

It slammed it's fist into the ground where the words were at, causing the desperate message to be destroyed.

"More!" It roared louder

GaNLey had to think clearly, it wanted more, more what, writing?
GaNLey then began to cut random words into the ground. Cat, bird, Nintendo, deer, tree Xbox, Playstaion, sandwiches, GaNLey wrote these and many more words into the road.

"It seems to be keeping them entertained for now. Well I rather be entertaining them, then to become their lunch." GaNLey said in his mind

"I just wish Blaze would hurry up and get help."

Blaze begin Peekatchu just to hurry up so he can help Ganley,but he sees he is trapped.Blaze then tied a rope between Peekatchu's arm and his talon so Peekatchu knew where to go with Blaze leading the way :p

i mean "Blaze begins to peck Peekatchu" i skiped that whole part in the beginning of the sentence :p

Peekatchu and Blaze then rushed to GaNLey's aid.

Meanwhile outside the city, Charmandah was ver worried, "Well if your ok, I need your help to find Peekatchu. He said he was going to look at something quickly with GaNLey but he hasn't come back. I'm afraid he's in trouble."

The monsters started to get pretty bored of seeing GaNLey write random words on the cement. Some of them started grumble and mumble to themselves about why they were even interested in this in the first place.
GaNLey was getting very nervous, he needed to find a way to stall them long enough for Blaze and the others to get here.

"So, can you say anything else besides More?" GaNLey asked trying to start a conversation

They stared at him with puzzled looks on their faces.

"Ok listen, I have a question for you and I want you to answer truthfully, got it?" GaNLey said trying not to show fear in his voice

It took him a while but he thought of a question that he knew for sure would keep them busy for awhile--

"So what's your all your names?" GaNLey asked hopping for each one to fight over who gets to share their name first

"The Ravagers" they said simotaneously

"Wow that was a quick answer!" GaNLey laughed nervously

"Oh great what do I ask now?" GaNLey thought to himself

"Oh I know I'll ask them a riddle, and I know just the perfect one they will never solve."
"Hey Ravagers, I have one last question for you, why is a raven like a writing desk? GaNLey asked proudly

The Ravagers were not happy at all, they could not think of an answer for this question. The beat their hands to the ground, stomped their feet. They even pulled the the brown hair off their bodies. Eventually one of them couldn't take this much thought and said--

"No More!"
This one seemed to be the leader of the pack.
"Can't you see he's distracting us from completing our mission?" the leader ravager roared

"Mission what mission?" GaNLey asked

Blaze got tired of dragging Peekatchu and took a small nap :p

"Well it's uh...um.. hey wait a minute, I know what you're trying to do!" the leader ravager declared

"But it ain't gunna work! We're smart enough to know when we's bein' tricked." he growled

"I wasn't tryng to--

"Silence" the leader said cutting off GaNLey's sentence

"You take us for fools?!" He barked
"Take him away to the top of that building over there behind all of you!" He ordered

"We're gunna use him as bait to lure the others."

"You know that my friends are here too?!" GaNLey gasped

"Well we do now" the leader laughed

"Ravagers prepare for battle, I'm sure these friends of his will put up a real fight to rescue this insect."

The Ravagers then grabbed GaNLey and climbed on the walls like spiders, taking him up the tallest building in Hatena.

"Blaze wake up! Come on! Guh I wish Pokeguy was here. I'll just go on ahead." Peekatchu then went on ahead.

Charmandah meanwhile tryed to reason with Pokeguy, "Pokeguy please, I know you're probably mad, but Peekatchu's never gone this long, something has to be wrong. Pleeease Pokeguy, I know peekatchu is still your friend *puppy eyes*

"Do ya see 'em yet Upchuck?" a ravager asked another

Yeah, Yeah I do, I see a yellow rodent thingy all by his lonesome. Think we should go slice 'im up now Ryder?" said the ravager called Upchuck
"No, lets wait a little while longer, maybe more will come." Ryder said with a grin

Meanwhile GaNLey was tied to a pole with chains wrapped around him. Ravagers guarding him from every angle. GaNLey could escape any time, he could easily cut thru those chains. But he's waiting for the right time to escape. And now is not the time.

I then wake up and sees Ganley being taken to the top of Hatena's highest building, i then fly over there as quickly as possible to stop them. i then reached to the top. seeing on how i am only one means i wont be able to stand a chance aganist all of them, i needed help for at least two other people, it struck me,Pokeguy and Peekatchu! it would be at least enough to help GaNLey. I yelled out "OVER HERE!!" so i can alert them to over here. just in case they didnt come over i decided to be reckless and stayed there and wait till those shadows came so i can risk my life and fight off at least 3 of them.... :p

(OoC: Hey Blaze, I'm too tired to continue today, how about tomorrow?)

@OoC k,ill be sure to be ready at 4:30(gotta do homework D:)

thats supposed to say"k" and ill, not kiII xD

"Hey what's that noise?" Ryder growled
"Look it's a bird, lets say we get ourselves a little snack"

A bird? GaNLey knew exactly what kind of bird they were talking about--

"Blaze." GaNLey said accidentally outloud

The ravagers that were gaurding him didn't take much notice to what he said. In fact they haven't paid any attention to him the entire time he was chained up.

GaNLey knew now was the time to escape, with his razor sharp claws, he shreded the chains from little to no effort. He pushed himself thru the guards, jumped and knocked over the two ravagers that were going to eat his friend.

"Oh hey Blaze! How are you?" GaNLey said with a laugh

Peekatchu was at a pretzel stand when he heard Blaze call him, "Oh, OOOHH, right! Gotta go save GaNLey!" Peekatchu then ran to the base of the building and went through the revolving doors to locate an elevator, escalotor, or sonething, but sadly, there were only stairs...

*indiana jones theme starts to play* i then try to make them come over just by standing there quiety looking back so they think i am not paying attention,as soon as they reached i frickin flew away like Chuck Norris on steriods xD :p

Charmandah then grabbed Pokeguy's hand and then they shook, "I'll try my best to help ya with that! I actually was the one to always have our key since Peekatchu was to, um, unreliable when it comes to keeping track of important objects."

Peekatchu meanwhile was walking up the staircase, but only made it up about three floors before nearly fainting. "Ugh, why did they have to invent stairs....or at least big bulidings."

Blaze while in the sky was waiting for PokeGuy and Peekatchu to hurry up :p

After a couple of minutes Blaze felt like he was carrying weight on his wings, he was extremely tired of flying still for so long waiting for PokeGuy and Peekatchu.He then landed on the floor,after resting his feet for a few seconds he tried to get fly back until he notcied he landed on gum. :p

lol,not his feet but his wings :p <xD

"Blaze no don't leave!" GaNLey said to the fleeing starly

GaNLey then turned around, knowing he has now attracted all of the ravagers attention. Everywhere he looked, he saw a hideous brown haired creature staring at him with a hungry face.
"Well boys, it looks like red insect is back on the menu!" the leader ravager barked

"Joy, I get to be lunch. Well you know what they say, you are what you eat." GaNLey said trying to make light of things

The creatures didn't wait a second, all of them at once attacked the lone scizor.

Blaze then flies back(somehow escaping the gum xD) and somehow carries the Scizir to the sky despite his weight xD

^bringing GaNLey to safety^ :p

(OoC: Ok it's now the end of chapter 2 of Return to Hatena, I'm now going to move the RP to one last painting. So no more RPing on this painting. That is all for now. Until then make a sandwich.)