awesome :D

i love the shading used owo
he is adorable

Unfortunately, Altains are pretty much "extinct"
I'm glad you enjoy it! ^o^/)

hmmm..... not really.
Decendants aren't Altian after the second generation
ie:
Shruikan is fully Altian <--parental generation

Von'ra & Yumika: 1/2 Altian <---First generation

Von'ra & Yumika's children 1/4 Altian <---second generation

After that, the Altian DNA doesn't exist for some reason. Altians only breeded with other Altians on their homeworld mostly, but they noticed when they had families with other similar species, their DNA was lost.

Altians are a pure species, and beyond a fourth, they are not Altian period. And they don't have any Altian power.

however, if Von'ra's & Yumika's children breeded together, they would be 1/2 Altian.

But that would mean marrying cousins and in-breeding... : /

yeeeeeaaaah... e-e

yep.... they are a lost species. only 4 pure altians are around Gaki, Yaku, Renka, and Shruikan/Phobos <--- [they are technically the same being, along with all of the other soul fragments. The fragments cannot have children, unfortunately. Only Phobos & Shruikan can ever have children]

This means there shall NEVER be a reconstruction of the Altian race. Unless... Yumika marries Gaki, Renka, or Yaku... but they are MUCH older than her. But it's a long-shot. There would still kinda be inbreeding, too...

yeah, he did. :p

Altians rule so dey must live QnQ
dey are awesomeness like ur pic and dey must LIVE!!!!!!!! QnQ

^thank you! ^w^
They are "immortal"
They can't "die" unless someone tries to kiII them or something of that nature.
Old age will not kiII them.

Alrighty, so what I see here is a drawing of your OC and it looks like he’s standing in a storm or something. It also seems like he’s in some kind of conflict/dilemma with something or someone. Or he’s just fighting off a storm. XD He has one red eye and one purple eye and two different wings. This looks like an anime type of drawing.
The shading is pretty good on almost everything. The details look a bit scattered in some parts. It appears to be nighttime in this painting. I can see a big difference in proportion between his two wings…
On first looking, it was his different colored eyes that caught my attention first, then the rest of the painting. Nice positioning there. I don’t get any other feelings looking at this other than he’s going through some type of conflict.
Now over all… One of the things I noticed was the big different between his wings. One is much smaller than the other. The wing seems a little small, even if it is pointed away a bit. It doesn’t look that pointed away. I think it could be a bit longer and larger like the other wing. Now as for the other wing, the shading on it seems a bit off on some parts. Another big thing I noticed was his right arm holding the dark orb thing. It looks like its way off proportion even if it is supposed to be closer from the elbow to the hand. From elbow to shoulder it looks way too short. His right shoulder looks very off and uneven as well. On his torso the creases look a bit scattered and short. I also noticed his right leg looks a bit short. His body in general seems a little small for his head. Now for his head and face, the face looks pretty good. The eye shape could use a little work. The face looks a little off, as in its not as tilted like the head is. As for colors, the coloring is all good. Very good. The shading is also good, it could use a little more dark spots in certain places. The lighting is also good. The background is nice, I don’t see that much to say about it other than it could use some more blending in some places.
Sorry if some of this sounds a little harsh or too directed at the errors. That’s how I do critique. XD Over all you’re doing good and improving a lot. You still have some work to do in evening out proportions though. I had the same problem with that. XD

Yeeeeeaaahhh.... Looking back on my stuff, I see these errors... I do need to get better at clothes/proportions and faces... This was a proportion nightmare. I'm not very good with action poses. This was a bit of a test and I wanted your opinion on it.
It was not harsh. It was true & helpful, Lofty. Thank you! ^w^ :p I'll use these critques towards future artz! :D >w<