Thorn's Story Chapter 8 by Dragonologist
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So this will be the end of Thorn's story. A story that, from what I saw in the comments, you all enjoyed. I hope you'll enjoy reading the final chapter :) Oh, and this is Lisa.
Here is the chapter:
"Hello Lisa...too bad you got away...it would have been more fun if he had killed you too..." the voice said sounding a bit disappointed. "Wait what? Who are you? And how do you know my name?" Lisa said confused and scared while looking around, looking for the dragon who had spoken. "You don't have to look around...you were looking in the right direction...I am using telepathy to talk to you." The voice said amused. "Wait...you mean you are that white dragon? Lisa asked on a scared tone. Even though the voice was beautiful, there was something unsettling and creepy about it. "Yes...my name is Aurora...And I know your name...because I can read minds...I can also control dreams..." Aurora said. "Wait did you make my dad evil?" Lisa asked nervously, scared for Aurora’s answer. "Maybe..." Aurora said. "But why? Why did you do it? Why did you turn my father into a monster?" Lisa asked, while tears started to roll down her cheek again. Lisa tried to suppress the anger that she felt, afraid that Aurora would get angry and hurt her if she felt it. "Because I hate love...now...I have told you enough little one...farewell..." Aurora said. (tbc in comments please wait with commenting until I am done)
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14 Feb, 2014, 6:57 pm
Lisa looked at Aurora flying away but, when she blinked, Aurora had dissapeared. She then looked again at her father. Thorn was staring at her with a hungry look in his bleeding eyes. His muzzle was covered in blood from Lia and Lisa's brothers. "Farewell daddy...I promise I'll find a way to turn you normal again...I promise...I love you dad..." Lisa said softly on a sad but determined tone. She turned around, looked back one more time to her old home, and then ran away as fast as she could, dissapearing in the safety of the dark.
Epilogue: Lisa still lives on Thorn's island. Partly because she still loves her father, and hopes he'll become normal again one day. But the main reason is that she can't fly well, because her right wing is torn badly. She tries to warn other dragons that come to Thorn's island for the monster that once was her loving father. She tries to help them survive and escape, but her story will be told another time. Thorn has become gigantic, very evil, eats other dragons, and started hoarding treasure. Humans sometimes come to Thorn's island, hoping to get rich from Thorn's treasure. Blinded by greed, they ignore the big amount of bones in front of Thorn's cave...They never get back to their homes...Thorn is still looking for his daughter to kill her. "I will find her...I will stop her helping other dragons...I will tear her to little pieces...hehe...Lisa! Lisa where are you!? Come her daddy wants to play with you! Bwahahaha!..."
(End of story, you may comment now)
14 Feb, 2014, 7:02 pm
As always, that was amazing... I like how Lisa still loves Thorn despite what he's become. I hope to find out more about her. And Aurora is very creepy and mysterious, I never realised she was THAT evil, but she's a great character.
I enjoyed reading this whole story and this is a good way to end it. I hope you write more stories like this eventually. :)
14 Feb, 2014, 7:12 pm
I thought the dragon on the illustration was Thorn, but only for a second. Then I realised it has blue eyes and smaller spikes.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:12 pm
@phire Well...Let's say I am working on another chapter story. Not telling you anything else. And Lisa is Thorn's daughter, so it's not really that suprizing she looks a lot like him. Anyway I am glad you like it.
@Radiant Not telling anything about Lisa. I might use her in future RPs though. And yeah, Aurora is a creep xD When I read the chapter 8 again I was like: "Aurora you're a freaking creep" xD And I am already working on another story, but for now I'm stuck on it. I am glad you enjoyed reading the story.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:14 pm
HOLY SH.IT A GOLD STAR IN JUST A FEW MINUTES AFTER I FINISHED WRITING THE STORY! WTH!? Okay I totally didn't expect to get so many likes so fast .-.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:22 pm
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The story has came to an end... or has it? I can't wait when/if lisa's story is reveled! >D<
14 Feb, 2014, 7:27 pm
oh thorns the best dragon ever, hes so cute and the storys amazing! as usual. btw is thorn an o.c now? i hope he is.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:31 pm
@Birdsong Not saying anything
@Sideshowkrusty Thorn already was my OC. I only drew his head though. I don't know what he looks like fullbody. I am glad you like him and his story so much.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:32 pm
WOW! thats amazing! how did you do that? also that leaves me at a massive cliff hanger, well this sucks...
14 Feb, 2014, 7:34 pm
@phire Didn't you read my update about her? She isn't my sona anymore, and she isn't my OC anymore. Because 1 she is too hard to draw, 2 she doesn't really suit me and 3 I don't really like her design. Wienerdragon is my sona now.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:36 pm
@sideshow krusty Sorry for the massive cliffhanger, but I don't want to tell anything about Lisa. It's a secret.
14 Feb, 2014, 7:38 pm
thats ok!
15 Feb, 2014, 7:31 am
its a sad story but its amazing!! The pictures are drawn very well and your writing is just perfect!! I hope you get 100 liikes for this or more you deserve it!! This has to be the best story you have wrote!!!
15 Feb, 2014, 8:04 am
@spook Thanks a lot spook! :D I am glad you enjoyed the story. And yes in my opinion this is the best story I ever wrote.
15 Feb, 2014, 8:40 pm
Yay
13 Apr, 2014, 10:13 pm
NUUUUUUUU NOT A CLIFFHANGER ENDING!!
*cries*
21 Apr, 2014, 6:02 pm
may i animate this? i will give MAJOR Credit as to you wrote it.