Thorn's Story Chapter 7 by Dragonologist
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Yay I finally could draw an illustration for this chapter! WARNING! This chapter contains violence. Here is the story:
Thorn let out a terrifying evil laugh, while blood streamed down his cheek. His teeth were covered in blood. Lisa stared quietly at her dead mother. “That didn’t just happen…mommy didn’t die...that’s just impossible…” Lisa whispered softly, while her eyes got teary. Thesar and Ator slowly walked to Lia’s body. “Mommy…please don’t leave us mommy…” Ator said, while he gently pushed Lia’s body with his head. “I am afraid it’s too late…I think mommy…I think...I think she died…” Thesar stammered while crying softly. “Nooo! Mommy!” Ator and Lisa cried out loudly while they hugged their mother’s body. “Hush…dad is staring at us…and I don’t like the look he has in his eyes…” Thesar said while looking up at Thorn. Ator and Lisa slowly looked up at their dad. Saliva mixed with blood dripped out of his mouth, he licked his lips…he had a hungry look in his bleeding red eyes. “Daddy?...please don’t kill us…” Ator said terrified, as he saw the evil look in his father’s red eyes. Thorn just grinned slightly insane. He seemed to enjoy the fear of his kids. He suddenly made a quick move to the little dragons, and pinned down his sons to the ground. “Daddy no!” They screamed in fear. Thorn chuckled evilly, blood dripped from his jaws on Ator and Thesar. Lisa stood frozen to the ground, not knowing what to do. (tbc in comments)
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10 Feb, 2014, 8:48 pm
"LISA RUN! DON'T TRY TO SAVE US, JUST RUN AS FAST AS YOU CAN NOW YOU GOT THE CHANCE!" Thesar and Ator yelled at Lisa. "Shut up!" Thorn yelled and he ripped off the heads of his sons with a quick move from his jaws. He then turned his head to Lisa and tried to b.ite her with his bl.oody jaws, but Lisa managed to get away. Thorn roared in frustration and watched the little dragon running away. He considered following her. "I'll get her later...I have to recover from my injuries now..." He softly said to himself. He turned his head to the dead dragons, the dragons he used to love, and started eating them.He let out a soft growl of satisfaction, enjoying the taste of their blood. Lisa now far away from her old cave looked back
"What happened to my daddy?...He used to be so friendly...I can't believe he killed mommy and my brothers..." Lisa thought, while she cried softly. She then noticed a beautiful dragon standing next to the cave, grinning an ice cold grin as she watched Thorn eating his loved ones. "Is that the white dragon daddy was talking about that other night?" Lisa thought. The white dragon suddenly looked in her direction, like she had heard Lisa. "How did she know I was looking?" Lisa wondered. Lisa suddenly heard a beautiful voice.
(End of chapter 7 you may comment now)
10 Feb, 2014, 8:53 pm
i love this strory! your imagenation goes wild. :)
10 Feb, 2014, 8:55 pm
@sideshow krusty I am glad you love it. My imagination can be kinda creepy sometimes xD I can't believe I wrote this story, it's so dark xD
10 Feb, 2014, 8:56 pm
dark stories are cool! how did you think up of something like this? thorns so cute btw, the eviler they are the better!
10 Feb, 2014, 8:59 pm
That was so great! I loved the violence and the emotion of everything. It was really creepy when Thorn started eating them, though. I can't wait for the next chapter!
10 Feb, 2014, 8:59 pm
@techno Glad you love it. Yea Thorn's story is very sad. Saddest and darkest story I ever wrote.
@sideshow krusty I have no idea how I came up with this xD Thorn's story was very short at first, but it kept growing and growing and now it's 5 pages long on word xD
10 Feb, 2014, 9:01 pm
@Phire well I wouldn't say it's amazing. It's a great story but not amazing. But thanks for the compliments :D
@radiant yeah..I know it's creepy xD My imagination can be a dark and creepy place xD Glad you like it so much :)
10 Feb, 2014, 9:03 pm
OMG 19 LIKES IN JUST A FEW MINUTES! didn't expect that .-.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:04 pm
thorn has everything!
worlds cutest dragon,
evilest dragon,
coolest,
scariest
and exiting.......
10 Feb, 2014, 9:04 pm
Well not that few minutes, but it's getting likes faster than normally
10 Feb, 2014, 9:05 pm
@dragonoligist, you deserve the likes and more!
10 Feb, 2014, 9:06 pm
Why does everyone say everything I draw is cute? Thorn has freaking killed his mate and sons! And he is eating them! How is that cute!?
10 Feb, 2014, 9:06 pm
This inspired me to post the next chapter of Tigertail's story. But I might not have time to write it out, so I'll do it tomorrow morning.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:08 pm
@radiant Awesome! I can't wait to read it :D
So many likes and comments! totally didn't expect that.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:10 pm
A lot of people say my dragons are cute too. They even think that gift picture I drew of Grin and Loner was cute. XD
10 Feb, 2014, 9:11 pm
@Radiant I don't understand people sometimes xD
10 Feb, 2014, 9:12 pm
his squished up face! *spottus cattus comes and hugs it.
even though the cat couldnt reach his scrumpled up head.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:17 pm
@sideshow krusty Everything nothing is impossible on the Colors gallery!
10 Feb, 2014, 9:19 pm
*Nothing
I was going to say everything is possible but then I changed my mind xD
10 Feb, 2014, 9:22 pm
@Radiant It was Magic, right? She thinks everything's cute. xD
10 Feb, 2014, 9:24 pm
(PSTP) Yeah. XD But some other people have said my dragons are cute before.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:25 pm
( Once again, before I begin my emotional rant. Amazing story and the ilustrations are really great. Amazing job bud! Stay Awesome! )
OH MY BLEEPING GODS! NOOOOOOO! THORN WHY! CURSE YOU AND YOUR DASTARDLY WAYS! YOU MONSTER! Nooooooooo! Oh Arceus this is so freakin' sad...
( P.S. I really did almost start crying btw. Thanks for that... xp )
10 Feb, 2014, 9:26 pm
yeah, how big is thorn? becuase i remember you drew a pic of rechor and my cat o.c, im just wondering if thorns half the size of rechor or the same.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:28 pm
*Majik
10 Feb, 2014, 9:29 pm
@sideshow krusty Well...Idk exactly how big he is at this moment in the story, but he is about 18-24 meters tall when he finishes growing. So he is bigger than Rechor's evil form (which was the form I drew with your OC)
10 Feb, 2014, 9:30 pm
@Garson Told you there was more sadness to come. Don't worry the next chapter will be the last.
10 Feb, 2014, 9:32 pm
I always mess up the sizes when I draw my and other's OCs though xD
10 Feb, 2014, 9:33 pm
wow! my o.c be a dot on the screen then.
11 Feb, 2014, 2:06 am
o-o THAT DARN WHITE DRAGON.... WHYYYY >8[ (ik who it is i dont wanna spoil it XD)
11 Feb, 2014, 2:33 am
I don't find Thorn like this cute. I find him sadistic and terrifying.
11 Feb, 2014, 7:00 pm
right now i imagene thorn with black glasses and a hat on backwords...
11 Feb, 2014, 9:49 pm
Thorn: *wears sunglasses and a hat* I am so fabulous!
xD just had to say that
14 Feb, 2014, 6:08 am
so far i love the story :D
21 Apr, 2014, 5:57 pm
i stared at the part where he ripped their heads off and ate them.... then started to cry... WHY!? STUPID WHITE SNOW DRAGON! POO YOU! lol