Thorn's Story Chapter 6 by Dragonologist
#DragonologistStory #Thornstory
WARNING! This chapter contains a lot of violence! (As you may have concluded after seeing the illustration)Don't say I didn't warn you for it. Also sorry for the kinda crappy illustration, I couldn't think of a better one.
Anyway here is the story:
One day Thorn and his children were alone in their cave because Lia had gone hunting for food. Thorn’s children were playing with each other. Thorn was sleeping, growling softly every time he exhaled. After a while, his kids got bored of playing with each other. They missed the times when their father played with them. “Should I wake him up?” Lisa whispered. “No don’t do that. Didn’t you see how angry he got last time? Thesar hissed. “ Yeah, what if he’ll hurt us?” Ator whispered. “Oh come on, do you even hear yourself? Daddy would never hurt us, he loves us.” Lisa whispered as she walked to Thorn. “No Lisa don’t do it!” Thesar hissed scared. But Lisa wouldn’t listen. She gently pushed Thorn with her head. “Daddy! Daddy wake up! We wanna play with you!” Lisa yelled excited. Thorn let out a loud deep growl, and opened his red eyes. He looked furious “WHO DARES TO WAKE ME UP!?” Thorn roared enraged while letting out a small flame. “Me...But we just...we just wanted to play with you...” Lisa stammered while she trembled. “So you want to play!? Let’s play!” Thorn yelled and he let out a terrifying thundering roar. (tbc in comments please wait with commenting untill I am done)
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07 Feb, 2014, 2:20 pm
"Lisa run!" Thesar and Ator yelled as they ran deeper into the cave. But Lisa had frozen in fear, she couldn't move. Thorn slashed her right wing with his big sharp claws, leaving it useless and painful. Lisa screamed in pain and, just when Thorn wanted to b.ite her neck, Lia ran into the cave and bit off a piece of Thorn's left ear fin. Thorn screamed in pain. Lia evaded Thorn's powerful jaws as he tried to b.ite her, then slashed Thorn's right eye with her claws. Thorn roared in pain and anger and tried to scratch Lia in her face. Lia dodged the attack and slashed Thorn's left eye with her sharp claws. Her claws sunk deep into his flesh and eyeball, leaving his eye bleeding, scarred and blind. Thorn let out a deafening roar in pain and rage, then bit Lia's neck with all the force he had. There was a very loud crack, as the bones in Lia's neck broke. Lia let out a soft cry in pain and suprise. A last tear escaped her dull eye. She fell lifeless on the ground, her neck bleeding heavily...
(End of chapter 6. you may comment now)
07 Feb, 2014, 2:22 pm
XD I accidently missed like 2 chapters so I had to find them, but this is awesome! :D
07 Feb, 2014, 2:33 pm
@savannahcat Thanks, I am glad you like the story.
07 Feb, 2014, 2:49 pm
That fighting scene was great, I love this kind of violence! I can't wait for the next chapter. :) And the illustration isn't bad at all.
07 Feb, 2014, 4:13 pm
( before I let out my crazy emotional rant, let me say that this is an amazing story and very well done )
NOOOOO! Thorn, you monster!!!
( uhh... strangly enough that's what I was worried about turning into when I was depressed )
I was afraid this was going to happen! Oh my gosh... So sad...
07 Feb, 2014, 4:26 pm
This is the saddest story that I ever wrote. And there is more sadness to come.
07 Feb, 2014, 6:03 pm
You're ki.lling' me dude! Stop tugging on mah heart strings! You know I'm a sap! XD
07 Feb, 2014, 6:24 pm
No I won't stop xD This is a very sad story get used to it.
07 Feb, 2014, 6:34 pm
Goosebumbs are running down my spine now. I'm speecheless ,you never fail to amaze me with your stories ;n;
Re: I'm glad you like it so much, i also absolutally loved drawing it. And if that's the least thing i can do to light your day up, it's so worth it :)
07 Feb, 2014, 6:36 pm
Nooooo! Y u make so sad?! I don't wanna read more! But! I! Can't! Resist! Must know mooooore! xp
07 Feb, 2014, 6:40 pm
@whitemagicwolf I am glad you like the story so much. And I really loved the drawing you made for me.
@Garson because I love trolling you guys. Nah jk. It's just a very sad story, I don't really know why.
07 Feb, 2014, 8:48 pm
@zard if the illustration and chapter is so great, why did it only get 10 likes?...The other chapters all got a gold star...
08 Feb, 2014, 3:12 am
What is going to happen to the kids?(Find out next time on Thorn's Story!) I am really enjoying this.
08 Feb, 2014, 8:50 pm
Gore, woohoo! ^-^
Can't WAIT for next chapters. ;)
09 Feb, 2014, 11:09 pm
o-o... lia... NOO HOW DARE YOU THORN! YOU EVIL MONSTERRRR! ...
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merp. 83 i love your stories! i can wait for chapter 7! >D<