Thorn's story chapter 3 by Dragonologist
#dragonologiststory #Thornstory Yay it didn't get delayed! Thanks to music and your support. This is Lia (on the left) and Thorn (on the right). Anyway here is the story:
It was love at first sight, and after living together for some years, they started a family. Thorn became the loving father of his 3 children. He had two sons and one daughter. His sons were called Thesar and Ator and his daughter was called Lisa. They lived happily together for some years. But one night, when Thorn and his family were asleep, a beautiful white dragon came to their cave. She stared intensely at Thorn for a while, her beautiful blue eyes scanning his body. She grinned “He had a dark past…He wants to be a friendly dragon…but there is evilness in his heart…perfect…A beautiful night to destroy love…” She whispered softly to herself. Again she stared at Thorn, but this time she whispered spells constantly. Thorn moved nervously in his sleep, making soft growling noises. He let out a scream and woke up terrified. There was no sign of the white dragon when he looked at the entrance of the cave. Lia woke up “what’s wrong?” she asked worried. “Nothing …I just had a nightmare” Thorn said still staring at the entrance of the cave. Lia nuzzled with Thorn, “Well it was just a dream, and everything is all right now” she said on a calming tone. Thorn nuzzled back and smiled “I guess you’re right. Let’s go back to sleep”. (tbc in comments please wait with commenting until I am done)
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01 Feb, 2014, 4:24 pm
"Goodnight Thorn" Lia fell asleep. "Goodnight Lia..."Thorn said and, after a last look at the entrance of the cave, he fell asleep. The rest of the night was calm and peaceful. But the nightmares came back every night, and every night it was the same terrible nightmare.
(End of chapter 3)
01 Feb, 2014, 4:29 pm
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01 Feb, 2014, 4:49 pm
im so happy for thorn!who dat white dragon!ahhhh ill hurt da white dragon!
01 Feb, 2014, 4:49 pm
:D this is awesome! You could become famous because of this!
01 Feb, 2014, 4:51 pm
Uh oh... I've got a bad feeling about this... Well I'm glad you feel better! And the story's awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter!
01 Feb, 2014, 5:18 pm
Oh coool!
01 Feb, 2014, 5:20 pm
They look so happy together! The illustration is really nice. I'm going to make a prediction: The nightmares cause Thorn to snap and... k.ill his family... D: That would be awful, but that is the feeling I get.
01 Feb, 2014, 5:29 pm
@everyone thanks, I am glad you all like it
01 Feb, 2014, 5:30 pm
This story keeps getting better and better! It's very exciting now, I can't wait to see what happens with Thorn's family. And I think I know who the white dragon is. XD
01 Feb, 2014, 5:41 pm
@Radiant I actually find chapter 3 quite boring, I am suprised to see that you guys are all so excited. Don't say who the white dragon is, I want the others to figure it out by themselves.
01 Feb, 2014, 5:43 pm
The chapter is exciting because we don't know what's going to happen to Thorn's family. And I won't say who the white dragon is. :)
01 Feb, 2014, 5:46 pm
@Radiant Oh I see
01 Feb, 2014, 6:30 pm
Wow your story makes me wanna post one of my storys! Great job! ^-^
01 Feb, 2014, 11:35 pm
Reply: Oh thank you! I'll start working on it right away :3
Oooh cant wait for chapter 4! I read all 3 chapters and they are very suspence-ful. o3o
02 Feb, 2014, 8:03 am
wow thats so cool! i like the random white dragon there.
02 Feb, 2014, 8:28 am
@sideshow krusty She isn't that random. She is one of my characters...That's all i'll say, you'll have to look for her yourself.
02 Feb, 2014, 1:27 pm
The white dragon is $&!$#!.
I censored. xD
02 Feb, 2014, 1:35 pm
@pstp lol xD