A Poem, called, "LOVE..." i hate my broken heart as it desperately attempts to maintain a crushed life within my body, beating to an off-beat inside my hollow chest. i have had it broken one too many times... it aches for something once framiliar, yet long lost... a simple emotion... its called LOVE... By: Faith-Turner (me) play on '>' or Slow...
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Comments
30 May, 2012, 11:42 pm
i like it :D
30 May, 2012, 11:53 pm
I so feel ya.
30 May, 2012, 11:54 pm
thank you. love is a tricky emotion...
31 May, 2012, 12:00 am
I know! I hate it sometimes
31 May, 2012, 12:02 am
my girl friend moved away,that is why i am saying this to you
I love your poem
Ethan Spere
31 May, 2012, 12:10 am
i understand your pain. my Ex-fiance simply said goodbye one day and cut off/changed his phone number. it just crushed me at the time. i understand.
31 May, 2012, 12:18 am
Thanks for your sweet comment! I'll take your request if you want, just let me know. ^^
31 May, 2012, 12:19 am
And excellent job with the poem
31 May, 2012, 12:23 am
amazing :'3 ill get to your request soon btw
31 May, 2012, 12:46 am
thank you all for your kind words.
31 May, 2012, 12:52 am
why, thank you! i love it! im going to comment.
31 May, 2012, 7:58 pm
Its Called Love...
I am glad you reposted this poem, it is simply one that rises above other sappy love poems....
I still love it as much as when you 1st posted it...
01 Jun, 2012, 1:48 am
got it! really, thank you!
01 Jun, 2012, 3:40 am
that was so sad i :-[ then saw your heart broken hope you get love come back my best friend ....^-^
01 Jun, 2012, 3:56 am
thank you lionwarrior. i appriciate it. im actually better-ish now. i have God. ^-^
01 Jun, 2012, 4:00 am
at TKSpade - thank you. i worked hard on this, though, really, it just came to me. :]
03 Jun, 2012, 10:34 pm
thanks for the comfort...it really helped to see people care...
03 Jun, 2012, 10:49 pm
im gladyou are helped by this fact. just know, you have a friend here.
04 Jun, 2012, 5:28 pm
aww,, feel better!!
05 Jun, 2012, 1:12 am
I do, thank you hun.
05 Jun, 2012, 7:08 am
this is beautiful! plz check my gallery
05 Jun, 2012, 8:41 am
i LOVE this, its deep, it speaks from the inside out could i be a friend plz FC:1719- three three two three- two five four zero
05 Jun, 2012, 4:21 pm
thank you both! much apriciated. this i my heard poured out on paper... :]
08 Jun, 2012, 1:52 am
this fits with my drawing :D
08 Jun, 2012, 11:34 pm
IKR? thats what i was thinking! :]
15 Jun, 2012, 7:49 am
i im in need of love when i older (im 9)
16 Jun, 2012, 1:42 am
te-he-he. one day you'll find it hun.
28 Jun, 2012, 4:37 am
you shall find love. its enevattible from my point of view. i think we all find our love in some form. mine, is art! (untill i find Mr.-Mr.)
07 Jul, 2012, 8:11 pm
lovely pome
08 Jul, 2012, 1:44 am
why, thank you! :]
14 Oct, 2012, 5:50 pm
im not sure what you got from this poem, but its about pain, and emptyness in my heart... not Finding love hun.
18 Oct, 2012, 5:34 pm
NO! you have absolutly No rights to my poem. you may NOT make a song of it.im working on this already... sorry, just a little protective of my work...
01 Jan, 2013, 10:03 pm
sorry to hear this bit of sad news, emroe123abc