LOVE... by Faith-In-Beauty

A Poem, called, "LOVE..." i hate my broken heart as it desperately attempts to maintain a crushed life within my body, beating to an off-beat inside my hollow chest. i have had it broken one too many times... it aches for something once framiliar, yet long lost... a simple emotion... its called LOVE... By: Faith-Turner (me) play on '>' or Slow...

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
30 May, 2012, 11:38 pm
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solidsnakex8

30 May, 2012, 11:42 pm

i like it :D

Kiki-saun

30 May, 2012, 11:53 pm

I so feel ya.

Faith-In-Beauty

30 May, 2012, 11:54 pm

thank you. love is a tricky emotion...

Kiki-saun

31 May, 2012, 12:00 am

I know! I hate it sometimes

ethan12123

31 May, 2012, 12:02 am

my girl friend moved away,that is why i am saying this to you

I love your poem
Ethan Spere

Faith-In-Beauty

31 May, 2012, 12:10 am

i understand your pain. my Ex-fiance simply said goodbye one day and cut off/changed his phone number. it just crushed me at the time. i understand.

Tsuki

31 May, 2012, 12:18 am

Thanks for your sweet comment! I'll take your request if you want, just let me know. ^^

Tsuki

31 May, 2012, 12:19 am

And excellent job with the poem

SkyofFireflies

31 May, 2012, 12:23 am

amazing :'3 ill get to your request soon btw

Faith-In-Beauty

31 May, 2012, 12:46 am

thank you all for your kind words.

Faith-In-Beauty

31 May, 2012, 12:52 am

why, thank you! i love it! im going to comment.

TKSpade

31 May, 2012, 7:58 pm

Its Called Love...
I am glad you reposted this poem, it is simply one that rises above other sappy love poems....
I still love it as much as when you 1st posted it...

Faith-In-Beauty

01 Jun, 2012, 1:48 am

got it! really, thank you!

lionwarrior

01 Jun, 2012, 3:40 am

that was so sad i :-[ then saw your heart broken hope you get love come back my best friend ....^-^

Faith-In-Beauty

01 Jun, 2012, 3:56 am

thank you lionwarrior. i appriciate it. im actually better-ish now. i have God. ^-^

Faith-In-Beauty

01 Jun, 2012, 4:00 am

at TKSpade - thank you. i worked hard on this, though, really, it just came to me. :]

akane

03 Jun, 2012, 10:34 pm

thanks for the comfort...it really helped to see people care...

Faith-In-Beauty

03 Jun, 2012, 10:49 pm

im gladyou are helped by this fact. just know, you have a friend here.

snivy202

04 Jun, 2012, 5:28 pm

aww,, feel better!!

Faith-In-Beauty

05 Jun, 2012, 1:12 am

I do, thank you hun.

Gaige596

05 Jun, 2012, 7:08 am

this is beautiful! plz check my gallery

little sky

05 Jun, 2012, 8:41 am

i LOVE this, its deep, it speaks from the inside out could i be a friend plz FC:1719- three three two three- two five four zero

Faith-In-Beauty

05 Jun, 2012, 4:21 pm

thank you both! much apriciated. this i my heard poured out on paper... :]

Rubber_Duckling

08 Jun, 2012, 1:52 am

this fits with my drawing :D

Faith-In-Beauty

08 Jun, 2012, 11:34 pm

IKR? thats what i was thinking! :]

declanhinshaw

15 Jun, 2012, 7:49 am

i im in need of love when i older (im 9)

Faith-In-Beauty

16 Jun, 2012, 1:42 am

te-he-he. one day you'll find it hun.

Faith-In-Beauty

28 Jun, 2012, 4:37 am

you shall find love. its enevattible from my point of view. i think we all find our love in some form. mine, is art! (untill i find Mr.-Mr.)

flora kitty....

07 Jul, 2012, 8:11 pm

lovely pome

Faith-In-Beauty

08 Jul, 2012, 1:44 am

why, thank you! :]

Faith-In-Beauty

14 Oct, 2012, 5:50 pm

im not sure what you got from this poem, but its about pain, and emptyness in my heart... not Finding love hun.

Faith-In-Beauty

18 Oct, 2012, 5:34 pm

NO! you have absolutly No rights to my poem. you may NOT make a song of it.im working on this already... sorry, just a little protective of my work...

Faith-In-Beauty

01 Jan, 2013, 10:03 pm

sorry to hear this bit of sad news, emroe123abc

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