A Legend Begins (Part 5) by Tropeifier
(Cont.)
Oh no.
Despite the weariness in my legs, I run over as fast as I could. Ignoring the warning, I throw the door open. Over on the far side of the shed, two policemen look up at me. Between them, Uncle is lying face down and motionless. His shirt is stained dark red.
With a panicked gasp I run to his side, but I'm stopped by one of the policemen. He lets go when I say I'm family. I crouch next to Uncle. He's not breathing and the air has an oily smell.
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29 Jan, 2014, 10:36 pm
Yay, u used my idea :D. Ok, one thing, if this is wat is actually wat ur using, ur book will be very short. Lets try this (example)
29 Jan, 2014, 10:48 pm
Despite my weariness, I began running back to the building. The constables wagon stood empty next to it. I reached the door k.nob and stopped. Tape covered the door forbidding me to go in. I listened in but couldn't make out what was being said. I grabbed the door k.nob and take a deep breath. I push the door open. The constable didn't even move. He was crouched down next to my uncle, looking for a pulse. He was face down. I start to walk in when another officer grabs.
"Let go, i need to see him" I cry
"This areas off limits boy, go home."
"This is my home, let me go!" I shouted, fighting to escape his grasp. I was almost out the door when the constable stopped the officer.
"Let him in. He should know.? the constable said. Tears weld up in my eyes as i ran over to my uncle. The smell of oil filled the air. The constable reached over and put his arm on my shoulder.
"I sorry boy, but he's gone. Tell me, where you the only one with him today." I looked up.
"Yes sir, and my names Makeru" I answered. He looked down and thought for a second. He looked up again, looking straight into my eyes.
"Well, if thats true, Makeru, I must place you under arreset for the mur.der of"
Just comment on my most recent pic if u have any comments
30 Jan, 2014, 1:58 pm
no, i deleted the pic sorry, but i may have it written down. Nope. Let me think: Kosei's Prophecy
I'll give u mine if it helps
"Burn, burn, thou will never learn. Whisper, whisper, the flame kinder. Loss, loss, freedom has a special cost"
Translated
"Kosei must learn something 9r fail trying"
"Whisper refers to the stone of whispers, and it's holder Sora, that she and him must work together (they hate each other)
"The final line of prophecy for him doesn't occur in book one, but in two, but for him to acquire freedom, he must sacrifice something very important."
Does that help?