D'awww, that face!! >u<
so adorable x3

She's so cute ^u^
And yes, those floating clouds... XD

I thought that said 'that grass looks so derpy.' I started laughing. Derpy grass. lololol XD
HNG IS THIS FILLY LALA? THOSE EYES ARE MAKING ME MELT LIKE A WIIIIIIIIITCHHHHHHHH*melts*

*solidifies*
Okey, I'll get to the buisness. (?)
As one would suspect, better color usage!
I love that sky and those clouds. Those clouds are better than what I do! (You saw birdy's cloud tutorial, didn't ya? :P)
The distant patch of grass (or trees) are/is blue-ish, which is good. I like that. You can tell they're/it's a somewhat far distance away from lala.

I've a tip: For shading in her eyes, try using a dark cyan. Looks better than a darker shade of green!
And it looks like she's floating on the grass, a common problem that people have.
Put some grass blades infront of her hooves and try to avoid shadows like that.

*Creepily sticks head around corner*

...I read that profile description. Oh God I'm a creep(er) X'D

My comments...are getting longer O_o

Thank you everybody for the nice comments! ^-^

KK: I don't mind the long comments! In fact, I love them. :3

I knew you would say that about the grass. ewe

Cyan blue? I really need to get to know my colors...

KK: I actually didn't watch the tutorial until after I read your comment. :p