A Legend Begins (Part 3) by Tropeifier
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I moved out of their house pretty fast after that. The old shack was falling apart. So Uncle and I moved my stuff onto his farm, and here I am.
Harvesting turnips.
Well, not at the moment. I was on my way back from the market where I'd made some excellent deals and managed to trade our meager crop for three watering cans, a bag of fertilizer, ninety gold coins, and some radish seeds. Hopefully I could persuade Uncle to let me plant them.
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28 Jan, 2014, 5:01 pm
ok, u might need to organize more. I'm at planning for chapter 5 of a projected 30, with 5-7 pages written of ideas. twenty pages of everything i've collected. If u aren't, start plan.ning, scribble down big events and read over them. The Mu-Onna Part i had in my gallery won't even appear until the last few chapters, and i am drastically changing it too. Also, i was looking through the Legend Begins three pics, are they in order or seperate parts, because they are very confusing the way they are written. Are they main topics of chapters? Also (lots of also), have u made an event map, showing what happens where and why. Last thing, find a reference book. May i suggest the First Percy Jackson book. It is first person of a character introduced to a way different world. I am using the book House of Hades to help me stay in third person. For more pictures, coild u post them to #BookWrite for further discussions