SHE LOOKS TO HAPPY! you should of gave her a better face expresion she looks to...girly...its ok but she more like a anger face intimadating character! XD it still looks awesome though nice drawing! lol
oh i saw your comment...well heres a joke...xD wife asks her husband that you have never acted lovey dovey or said something sweet after our wedding... husband thinks...and says...abcd... wife asks abcd? hubby answers a=adorable b=beautiful c=caring d=dashing... wife smiles...then husband says iwj.. wife asks while smiling i w j? husband chuckles i=i w=was j=joking xDDD lol thats a joke that usually happens between my parents<3333... :)
im going to make a part later in the Seasons that Mark goes through puberty! its going to be so funny! his puberty gets deliad and he doesn't go threw it until he turns 16! XDDD
Duna and Erisa are both going to start to really like Mark. But he's not going to understand what there talking about until he hits Puberty! Koyo is going to teach Mark all the basics! After that Mark is going to start to think he's really a girl! Koyo is going to trick Mark into it! and then Mark makes his self look female and gets a wig and stuff. He will look just like his mom! lmao Duna and everyone else are going to be so mindblow when he starts to think this way. then Koyo starts to get Ko'd for it! XD
what know whats my fav part of a woman is? its there brain! i choose the mind over looks! im a hunter not the hunted! to bad i have to wait until im big and strong enough to find one of the best! the avrg guy uses there eyes more then there brains! for me its the other way around! the avrg girl would rather have looks then brains! the one vary thing i want from them! i blame the dushbags for how the woman see the men today! now its hard as hell to find a woman that can have the guts to walk up to you and say hi! XD
i would love to play chess with a girl just to see how they think. But i do find woman vary attractive in one other area other then her brain. this always gets me turned on im srs! if i told you what it was you would break down laughing or say eww but i like them. XD
ehhh....fine, but after i tell you....you have to promise not to tell ANYONE! no one can know about my likes in a girl. so after i tell you DELETE the comment IMMEDIATELY! because i have not told anyone in my family about this not even friends irl so nobody knows... > .>;
meh....nahhh, i changed my mind...its just a personal/private/sexual thing that i should not tell anyone. not family, not friends just the girl/woman i have trust in and strong relationship with. so me no wanna tell you! <3
i will after i finesh this story. ima be working on it all day today. i might get it done today or tomarrow if i focus on it enough. then i can work on drawing hardcore!
yea after i draw more then i'll get more. im pretty much half way to Mao's lvl and if she dont come back soon ima pass her up in a flash! lol But im just about fineshed with Marks fight with Duna. Now Koyo and Samsen are about to get into the story. xD
you just need to keep drawing to understand it. thats why ima about to push my self to a new level. psshh i can draw on paper to! but what im about to study is going to change my drawing by a lot. lol
idk anime i guess. some anime style i liked in a anime so ima try drawing in a simaler way. i also have a how to draw book so i got a lot of stuff to look at and THE INTERNET! XD
just fineshed Marks fight with Duna now its time to start with getting Koyo and Samsen in the story. xD
Mark and Koyo are just about to fight. The story is getting closer and closer to being done. Soon Samsen will be in the story then i'll have everyone! xD
nah i wanted mine to be like the main point of what basicly involse everyone like there emotions. i want it to be emotion something or Linked Emotions or Crosed Emotions,True Emotions Real Emotions,Original Emotions LifeCore Emotions, Core Emotions, Legendary Emotions, Beast Emotions, Alien Emotions. Desteny Emotions, Emotions Desteny...i just dont know what would fit the bill. xD
Mark just had a fight with his element wind teacher Newi now she's taking him back to Luminous for training. Koyo, Duna and Erisa are about to go get that Beast Crystal and the Alkasists are on there way to earth! Samsen will be in the story sooner or later! XD
im 85percent done with the story now! its so close to being done! now Mark has to fight Samsen in the ring for the Beast Crystal! XD then Mark is going to have to deal with Slasher again. after that its protecting Duna and everyone from a Poision Phantom! Marks weakness! then after that Mark fight Slasher 1 last time with all there powers and training being put to the test. then final boss! i said to my self i wanted to get this story done over the weekend! looks like ima make it happen! XD
well you know the goowy inky monsters? i wanted to make something like that...thats why i made up the Poison Phantom! its made mostly of poison and makes a big mess like in the game. And i've made it Marks weakness that he has to beat. in spongbob its the game with the Robot bosses and stuff. i wanted to do something like that for an ending. for spiderman i wanted to make a similer looking Race to that desine. Sword Art Online is when is season 2 Mark gets a sword Spiral created for him and uses it to beat Thoron. in season 3 Mark fights Slasher in there Race forms making it look like the a battle in bleach. XD
Pokemon well is basicly with the Legendary Beasts fighting with there Linker so Mark will be able to fight with Karma. Dragonball Z well There race forms are like Supersaihn level! but theres a higher level then that! its called Ace! where they go threw a mutation and get a different looking form from there original. XD
Surviving Light sounds lame! its called The Surviving Light! it sounds better! yea it is, got school in like 8/9 hours just been thinking about the story though dont feel like sleeping! xD
i didn't get the story done yesterday because of lost time! ima try and get it done today though but if i still cant get it done IT WILL BE DONE BY TOMORROW! -_-#
yea i think its going to take me a few more days because im RIGHT about to get to the final boss soon. right now i decided to let them all hang out at a swimming part planed by Marks wind Master. so this is another funny moment i wanted to get in here. to strangthen there bond with each other. Mark already battled Slasher again and Slasher died. so everyone is chearing him up with some fun. so after the swim party is over there going back to school and thats when it comes to the fanally! XD
everyone hates the Sukuloids. the only one who actually liked Slasher for a friend was Mark everyone else hated him. lol
But Mark didn't tell anyone but Samsen the others dont really know yet until he tells them but Samsen saw what happend. Newi wanted to make it up to them for going threw so much when she left so it was HER IDEA to have a swim party! Mark cant even swim so its more of a funny moment! XD
Dude ima be in drawing heII! ima have to work really hard if i want to make my comic good...ima work on how they look as kids and later as adults. Newi is Marks wind teacher so he needs her. But Newi is more of a tomboy young adult. Shes like 22 so its understandable why she is wired. ima improve the story though after its done later on. xD
yea but Lacarma sounds like a hero name as good as Naruto....i could change Karmas name to something else... and i know i told you i'll fix that when i get help editing it... XD
yea...but the others are just guardians he is the only one who actually has it inside him but others will soon have them inside them to...today is friday so ima get the story done over the weekend and FINALLY BE FREAKING DONE! i took a break from it and worked on my school work yesterday...But right after i finish this story ima work on my drawing skills and make my characters look better! its about time to get back to the drawing board and work on their young designs until adulthood. So right now ima Remake some of characters looks and stuff. Some will stay but a lot might be changed. Mark on the other hand might have most...ima change names to because i thought of better names for some of the characters. XD ima try and use S letter names less and use the other letters more to help make characters stand out better and it doesn't get wired. xD
wellp man i did it! thanks for reading it you really helped a lot! now its time to get back in drawing! ima get so good at anime its not even funny! XDDDD
i mean later in the story when he is 18 thats when he gets new clothes and stuff and the eyes go more flat like before. But for now when he is 14-17 i wanted him to slightly change in his eyes and more hair maybe? But before he is 14 he has brown flat hair.
Comments
25 Jan, 2014, 11:34 pm
SHE LOOKS TO HAPPY! you should of gave her a better face expresion she looks to...girly...its ok but she more like a anger face intimadating character! XD it still looks awesome though nice drawing! lol
26 Jan, 2014, 2:09 am
Glad to be following you!
26 Jan, 2014, 9:22 am
nahh you do it better then me anyway. its fine. xD
26 Jan, 2014, 9:46 am
i to lazy.... XD
26 Jan, 2014, 4:39 pm
congratulations! <33333 *a kawaii desu kiss* xDD
26 Jan, 2014, 4:52 pm
oh i saw your comment...well heres a joke...xD
wife asks her husband that you have never acted lovey dovey or said something sweet after our wedding...
husband thinks...and says...abcd...
wife asks abcd?
hubby answers
a=adorable
b=beautiful
c=caring
d=dashing...
wife smiles...then husband says iwj..
wife asks while smiling i w j?
husband chuckles i=i
w=was
j=joking
xDDD lol thats a joke that usually happens between my parents<3333... :)
27 Jan, 2014, 10:03 am
aha,my pleasure~ <:
27 Jan, 2014, 7:29 pm
Cool art!
30 Jan, 2014, 4:48 am
now im bored burak sempaiiiii :v;
30 Jan, 2014, 5:18 pm
ahaha thats one silly joke!thank you thank you!! <3333
04 Feb, 2014, 10:51 pm
NOOOOO I DONT WANT IT TO COME YET! NO! MY L botten still doesn't work! FK! THEY NEED TO MAKE THE BUTTONS STRONGER! XD
05 Feb, 2014, 8:23 pm
YES! NOW I GET MY FULL TEAM! WATCH ME WHEN I GET BACK!
06 Feb, 2014, 4:44 am
im training my pokemon now. lol
06 Feb, 2014, 7:53 pm
yea im at the part were Mark and Duna are about to have there fight. its going to be shocking. XD
07 Feb, 2014, 7:18 am
im going to make a part later in the Seasons that Mark goes through puberty! its going to be so funny! his puberty gets deliad and he doesn't go threw it until he turns 16! XDDD
07 Feb, 2014, 7:53 pm
Duna and Erisa are both going to start to really like Mark. But he's not going to understand what there talking about until he hits Puberty! Koyo is going to teach Mark all the basics! After that Mark is going to start to think he's really a girl! Koyo is going to trick Mark into it! and then Mark makes his self look female and gets a wig and stuff. He will look just like his mom! lmao Duna and everyone else are going to be so mindblow when he starts to think this way. then Koyo starts to get Ko'd for it! XD
08 Feb, 2014, 6:27 am
remember when you told me you loved girls feet? now i know what it is! its called a foot fetish! XD
09 Feb, 2014, 11:42 pm
what know whats my fav part of a woman is? its there brain! i choose the mind over looks! im a hunter not the hunted! to bad i have to wait until im big and strong enough to find one of the best! the avrg guy uses there eyes more then there brains! for me its the other way around! the avrg girl would rather have looks then brains! the one vary thing i want from them! i blame the dushbags for how the woman see the men today! now its hard as hell to find a woman that can have the guts to walk up to you and say hi! XD
10 Feb, 2014, 7:39 pm
i would love to play chess with a girl just to see how they think. But i do find woman vary attractive in one other area other then her brain. this always gets me turned on im srs! if i told you what it was you would break down laughing or say eww but i like them. XD
11 Feb, 2014, 3:47 pm
ehhh....fine, but after i tell you....you have to promise not to tell ANYONE! no one can know about my likes in a girl. so after i tell you DELETE the comment IMMEDIATELY! because i have not told anyone in my family about this not even friends irl so nobody knows... > .>;
12 Feb, 2014, 12:34 am
meh....nahhh, i changed my mind...its just a personal/private/sexual thing that i should not tell anyone. not family, not friends just the girl/woman i have trust in and strong relationship with. so me no wanna tell you! <3
12 Feb, 2014, 10:32 pm
the whole body of course! ^-^ lmao! XD
15 Feb, 2014, 8:23 am
what the heII are you talking about? i use this eye style all the time! no, i have a better one then the other eyes i did, i think... - .-
15 Feb, 2014, 7:30 pm
because i this was for valentines he has to make his nothing face he dont know what it is. i can make a better drawing with him in the new eyes.
15 Feb, 2014, 7:43 pm
i will after i finesh this story. ima be working on it all day today. i might get it done today or tomarrow if i focus on it enough. then i can work on drawing hardcore!
15 Feb, 2014, 7:59 pm
yea after i draw more then i'll get more. im pretty much half way to Mao's lvl and if she dont come back soon ima pass her up in a flash! lol But im just about fineshed with Marks fight with Duna. Now Koyo and Samsen are about to get into the story. xD
15 Feb, 2014, 8:11 pm
you just need to keep drawing to understand it. thats why ima about to push my self to a new level. psshh i can draw on paper to! but what im about to study is going to change my drawing by a lot. lol
15 Feb, 2014, 9:24 pm
idk anime i guess. some anime style i liked in a anime so ima try drawing in a simaler way. i also have a how to draw book so i got a lot of stuff to look at and THE INTERNET! XD
just fineshed Marks fight with Duna now its time to start with getting Koyo and Samsen in the story. xD
15 Feb, 2014, 11:49 pm
Mark and Koyo are just about to fight. The story is getting closer and closer to being done. Soon Samsen will be in the story then i'll have everyone! xD
16 Feb, 2014, 8:12 am
im only fast if i focus on it. im actually VARY lazy but if i wanna get something i go get it. XD
16 Feb, 2014, 8:34 am
lacarma is getting excited <3
16 Feb, 2014, 9:10 am
nah i wanted mine to be like the main point of what basicly involse everyone like there emotions. i want it to be emotion something or Linked Emotions or Crosed Emotions,True Emotions Real Emotions,Original Emotions LifeCore Emotions, Core Emotions, Legendary Emotions, Beast Emotions, Alien Emotions. Desteny Emotions, Emotions Desteny...i just dont know what would fit the bill. xD
16 Feb, 2014, 10:13 am
i think i got one... Emotion Chain! or Emotion Race!
16 Feb, 2014, 4:41 pm
ok now i get what you mean...But is there anything else you could come up with? or is this really the best i got? XD
16 Feb, 2014, 7:58 pm
Mark just had a fight with his element wind teacher Newi now she's taking him back to Luminous for training. Koyo, Duna and Erisa are about to go get that Beast Crystal and the Alkasists are on there way to earth! Samsen will be in the story sooner or later! XD
16 Feb, 2014, 9:03 pm
Marks learning the original way to use the wind element! but your right...i think i'll make it The Surviving Light or The Last Light. xD
16 Feb, 2014, 9:06 pm
but still i wanna hear what else you got! but i like it when you leave comments gives me something to do! XD
17 Feb, 2014, 1:28 am
im at Samsen's part now! This story might get done today if not then tomarrow for sure! XD
17 Feb, 2014, 1:30 am
Mark leaned some wind skills and is about to learn a new Light element move from Spiral! xD
17 Feb, 2014, 9:04 am
im 85percent done with the story now! its so close to being done! now Mark has to fight Samsen in the ring for the Beast Crystal! XD then Mark is going to have to deal with Slasher again. after that its protecting Duna and everyone from a Poision Phantom! Marks weakness! then after that Mark fight Slasher 1 last time with all there powers and training being put to the test. then final boss! i said to my self i wanted to get this story done over the weekend! looks like ima make it happen! XD
17 Feb, 2014, 5:23 pm
no not Thoron and Jay i made them on my own. they play a big role for Mark in fear. xD
17 Feb, 2014, 8:34 pm
well you know the goowy inky monsters? i wanted to make something like that...thats why i made up the Poison Phantom! its made mostly of poison and makes a big mess like in the game. And i've made it Marks weakness that he has to beat. in spongbob its the game with the Robot bosses and stuff. i wanted to do something like that for an ending. for spiderman i wanted to make a similer looking Race to that desine. Sword Art Online is when is season 2 Mark gets a sword Spiral created for him and uses it to beat Thoron. in season 3 Mark fights Slasher in there Race forms making it look like the a battle in bleach. XD
Pokemon well is basicly with the Legendary Beasts fighting with there Linker so Mark will be able to fight with Karma. Dragonball Z well There race forms are like Supersaihn level! but theres a higher level then that! its called Ace! where they go threw a mutation and get a different looking form from there original. XD
17 Feb, 2014, 9:02 pm
i think ima get the story done today actually....if i dont goof off. XD
18 Feb, 2014, 8:10 am
Surviving Light sounds lame! its called The Surviving Light! it sounds better! yea it is, got school in like 8/9 hours just been thinking about the story though dont feel like sleeping! xD
18 Feb, 2014, 6:34 pm
hah,i dont see any difference int the name lacarma...xD
18 Feb, 2014, 10:43 pm
i didn't get the story done yesterday because of lost time! ima try and get it done today though but if i still cant get it done IT WILL BE DONE BY TOMORROW! -_-#
19 Feb, 2014, 3:26 am
it would be stupid if i worked on Season 2 right away after fineshing 1! i need to work on drawing skills and improv! xD
19 Feb, 2014, 5:15 am
yea i think its going to take me a few more days because im RIGHT about to get to the final boss soon. right now i decided to let them all hang out at a swimming part planed by Marks wind Master. so this is another funny moment i wanted to get in here. to strangthen there bond with each other. Mark already battled Slasher again and Slasher died. so everyone is chearing him up with some fun. so after the swim party is over there going back to school and thats when it comes to the fanally! XD
19 Feb, 2014, 8:52 am
everyone hates the Sukuloids. the only one who actually liked Slasher for a friend was Mark everyone else hated him. lol
But Mark didn't tell anyone but Samsen the others dont really know yet until he tells them but Samsen saw what happend. Newi wanted to make it up to them for going threw so much when she left so it was HER IDEA to have a swim party! Mark cant even swim so its more of a funny moment! XD
19 Feb, 2014, 11:44 am
a funny moment? wait a swim party?!wahhhhhhh
yea it is xD
19 Feb, 2014, 10:23 pm
Dude ima be in drawing heII! ima have to work really hard if i want to make my comic good...ima work on how they look as kids and later as adults. Newi is Marks wind teacher so he needs her. But Newi is more of a tomboy young adult. Shes like 22 so its understandable why she is wired. ima improve the story though after its done later on. xD
20 Feb, 2014, 5:19 am
ima send a lot to you this time, then the last of it later on after i finesh the ending because im RIGHT THERE! xD
20 Feb, 2014, 6:56 am
im thinking of changing Marks name to Lacarma... xD
20 Feb, 2014, 3:25 pm
yea but Lacarma sounds like a hero name as good as Naruto....i could change Karmas name to something else... and i know i told you i'll fix that when i get help editing it... XD
20 Feb, 2014, 7:53 pm
ugh fine! but i kinda wanted others who had the beast inside them it get it to! -_-
21 Feb, 2014, 10:19 pm
yea...but the others are just guardians he is the only one who actually has it inside him but others will soon have them inside them to...today is friday so ima get the story done over the weekend and FINALLY BE FREAKING DONE! i took a break from it and worked on my school work yesterday...But right after i finish this story ima work on my drawing skills and make my characters look better! its about time to get back to the drawing board and work on their young designs until adulthood. So right now ima Remake some of characters looks and stuff. Some will stay but a lot might be changed. Mark on the other hand might have most...ima change names to because i thought of better names for some of the characters. XD ima try and use S letter names less and use the other letters more to help make characters stand out better and it doesn't get wired. xD
22 Feb, 2014, 2:41 am
The detailing on the clothes look really good. You are a really good artist! c:
22 Feb, 2014, 6:33 am
wellp man i did it! thanks for reading it you really helped a lot! now its time to get back in drawing! ima get so good at anime its not even funny! XDDDD
22 Feb, 2014, 9:31 pm
- .-# IM WORKING ON IT! Karmas tails are linked to his body so he puts a scarf over the tails to make them look like they are apart of his scarf...
23 Feb, 2014, 2:28 am
Sure, I would be happy to take another request! 0v0
23 Feb, 2014, 9:32 am
im done drawing for today im tired...i'll draw more c,rap tomarrow... xD
24 Feb, 2014, 7:20 am
there i drew more c,rap today now lets draw something tomarrow! XD
I improved Mark again... -_-##
24 Feb, 2014, 12:54 pm
can i draw a o.c for you? .v. ..
24 Feb, 2014, 2:29 pm
i think im done changing him for now...he will look better as a young adult anyway. with a longer white jacet.
24 Feb, 2014, 10:35 pm
NO! he has to be 14... xD
24 Feb, 2014, 11:43 pm
i mean later in the story when he is 18 thats when he gets new clothes and stuff and the eyes go more flat like before. But for now when he is 14-17 i wanted him to slightly change in his eyes and more hair maybe? But before he is 14 he has brown flat hair.
25 Feb, 2014, 2:39 pm
purrple and blue actually...idk gods luck i guess... XD
25 Feb, 2014, 3:12 pm
you dont know the name of the wepon ether though. lol
26 Feb, 2014, 1:55 pm
i will draw one
youwill see cx
oh hey i cant stop asking requests from you xDD
can i ask one?
again xDD