Why did that man come to my house? He was so mean... I hate him. He kiIIed my parents.
The bell rang, I remember. A tall man walked into my house. My dad said he was a ''Zoroark''. ''Who are you?'' my dad asked. ''That is not important,'' the man said. ''But your son, he is very important.'' The man shot me a sinister look. I ducked behind Dad. ''What do you want with Lucas?'' ''Your son is very dangerous.'' ''Oh, really? I find that difficult to believe.'' ''You will if he lives.'' The man pulled a match from his fur, and struck it against his claws, igniting the match. ''What are you doing with that?'' The man said nothing. He turned around, and tossed the match into the wastebasket. ''Have fun burning to death.'' The man bolted out of the door. Dad frenzily ran after the man, but the door was somehow locked from outside. ''No... we're trapped.'' The fire spread across the room. It was not long until the whole room was in flames. Smoke filled the room. Dad continued pounded furiously at the door, attempting to force it open. ''It's no use... we're going to burn.'' The wall collapsed, revealing a small hole. ''Wait... Lucas! Quickly! Crawl through that opening!'' ''What about you, Dad?'' ''I'm too big. I won't be able to fit. Go, now!'' I ran over to the crevice, and crawled through. I came out of the side of the house, and ran as quickly as I could. As I turned around, looking at my burning house, the roof collapsed. Dad and Mom had been crushed. ''No...'' I fell on the ground, crying.
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25 Jan, 2014, 8:06 pm
great drawing ! ^w^
25 Jan, 2014, 8:24 pm
Why did that man come to my house? He was so mean... I hate him.
He kiIIed my parents.
The bell rang, I remember. A tall man walked into my house. My dad said he was a ''Zoroark''.
''Who are you?'' my dad asked.
''That is not important,'' the man said. ''But your son, he is very important.'' The man shot me a sinister look. I ducked behind Dad.
''What do you want with Lucas?''
''Your son is very dangerous.''
''Oh, really? I find that difficult to believe.''
''You will if he lives.'' The man pulled a match from his fur, and struck it against his claws, igniting the match.
''What are you doing with that?''
The man said nothing. He turned around, and tossed the match into the wastebasket.
''Have fun burning to death.'' The man bolted out of the door. Dad frenzily ran after the man, but the door was somehow locked from outside.
''No... we're trapped.'' The fire spread across the room. It was not long until the whole room was in flames. Smoke filled the room. Dad continued pounded furiously at the door, attempting to force it open.
''It's no use... we're going to burn.''
The wall collapsed, revealing a small hole.
''Wait... Lucas! Quickly! Crawl through that opening!''
''What about you, Dad?''
''I'm too big. I won't be able to fit. Go, now!''
I ran over to the crevice, and crawled through. I came out of the side of the house, and ran as quickly as I could. As I turned around, looking at my burning house, the roof collapsed. Dad and Mom had been crushed.
''No...''
I fell on the ground, crying.
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25 Jan, 2014, 8:28 pm
Probably. q:
25 Jan, 2014, 8:34 pm
The first one. xD
25 Jan, 2014, 8:40 pm
I read them occasionally. :v
25 Jan, 2014, 9:52 pm
D: nuu saddness
26 Jan, 2014, 2:58 am
The fish in my fish tank reek strongly of fish 'o'
26 Jan, 2014, 3:22 pm
How did I like my own picture
this is blasphemy