You must leave they said. I cant leave my friend is in there, I found this cloth. You must leave our master has just brought back a fainted girl and we are not accepting any visitors. Thats my friend im sure of it, you have to let me in! You must leave they said again. My friend is in there! You must leave our master has just brought back a fainted girl and we are not accepting any visitors. I know you just told me, whats the mater with you. I tried to push them aside but two other guards came out and grabbed me. Let me go I said. Then they dragged me away from the castle and tied me up to a tree. I kept on trying to get free but it was no use, after awhile i fell asleep. I woke up and it was almost dark, a white pegase was untieing me. Hi Im Dreamer he said. Im Xwing thank you for untieing me. No problem, what were you doing tied up in the first place? Well I was trying to get in that castle over there because my friend tulip has been kidnaped. Oh, thats to bad for your friend then she'll be stuck in there for ever he said. Why!?! Thats heroien castle nobody gets in there except the guards and there master. But I have to get her out I said, please help me? It's impossible your friends stuck. Please you have to help me, please xwing said in a voice that sounded like she was about to cry. OK he said, just please dont cry, it's to drak now we'll do it first thing tomorrow.

well I think the storys coming along quite nicely i'm really tired so i think i'll sleep now gn

amazing job! its so cute Pony ;D well done

Aww, xwing looks so cute in this! Also the story's getting exiting! Can't wait for the next part ^u^

It's great so far! Can't wait for more c:

ya i probably should >w>

Aww! Adorable pony :D

cute