glad i took another break from the story...this was worth the time...now back on that story! XD

not bad. :p

Nice job!

xD As in improvement,its not bad.You can only keep improving.xD

Wow really good! Mark should still be a bit wider and... where are his eyebrows? Oh and I don't really understand their necks, but you HAVE improved and I like it!
Okay maybe not on paper, but I was trying to help, I really want to write a script, but I need to do so many things this week TT_TT

Dude.... You have to do everything but making his head bigger -_-
His shoulders should be wider, just like his waste. Duna and Erisa are perfect btw :D

Now I see the eyebrows, I thought they were part of the hair.

Oh and sorry if I sounded mean, I'm just trying to help.
I almost sound like my art teacher, the last time he critisized me, it felt like I was being violated... those words... He said things like 'How is she even supposed to wear that with that kind of a giant head!?' or 'what kind of a sick arm is that!?'
So sorry if I sounded like that...

No really, it's not bad and Erisa is good too, you are improving every drawing, don't worry you can draw good enough when you finished writing/typing the story if you just keep drawing ;)
I like the belt they wear, it has the sign of their race on it, did they always have that? You also made Erisa's skin a bit lighter, this suits her more, because now the hair doesn't look lighter than her skin.

Sometimes it's better to just look at your old drawings and the drawings from now, that always makes me feel better too.

Hm... at least I'm studying....