When I was Little (3D) by :ShardTheEevee:

Now it is expected
For me to be neglected
For you to run away..
Yet I want you to stay...

I don't think like most
I don't feel a need to boast
Because I am very lame
And I don't react the same

Some people call me crazy
Some call me rude or lazy
But it is not nice to profile
And leave others in denial

If only people gave me another chance
A chance, to advance
To prove in the end
That I could be a friend.

#lunine #wolf #poetry

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
14 Jan, 2014, 6:59 pm
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:ShardTheEevee:

14 Jan, 2014, 7:13 pm

The poem actually came out a lot better than the first version...

The first version was kinda sad.

Well, the first stanza was kept sad but meh. to-ot

DiceyM

14 Jan, 2014, 8:05 pm

:(

:ShardTheEevee:

14 Jan, 2014, 8:40 pm

:l

monkfishlover

14 Jan, 2014, 10:51 pm

I hope you feel better soon...

Pvt.Yukiki

14 Jan, 2014, 11:12 pm

Such a great poem... I feel the same too, but at least you have all of us... ovo

:ShardTheEevee:

15 Jan, 2014, 12:46 am

Yay. :3

gamewolf

15 Jan, 2014, 1:18 am

Its true . . . sad but true

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