Courage- Chapter 1- A normal day for Twirls by KylieRinsley

Twirls is a young filly with speed beyond compare. She was so fast, Rainbow Dash would have trouble keeping up. She lived in Canterlot where she lived a boring, parentless life. One special thing about Twirls is that she had no idea what to be afraid of! A bear could appear and she would make tea for it. Or beat it to the ground. Anyway, Twirls was walking in the Canterlot gardens when she was confronted by Fancypants, her foster parent! Fancypants was never home, so Twirls often takes walks.

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28 May, 2012, 5:35 pm
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KylieRinsley

28 May, 2012, 5:36 pm

Just ask and you'll be in my story!

Corona Plus

28 May, 2012, 5:54 pm

Can Sparklehooves be in it?

KylieRinsley

29 May, 2012, 1:17 am

"Twirls!" said Fancypants, "Why are you walking out here? And why are you bloody?" "Well, I was bored so I took a walk, but I ran into a squirrel's nest. He wasn't happy when I knocked over his ****. Anyway, how did it go with Rarity?" "She is a genius. A pony with expensive tastes. She knew Fleetfoot woukd win because she knows the pony who trained the Wonderbolts! She is- Hey," Fancypants paused, and said angrily, "You, young filly, need to go back to the Foster home! After all, my shift is done. Hoity Toity will take care of you now." Twirls gasped in shock. "NO! I hae Hoity Toity! He is SO mean!" "He is NOT mean! Now go 'home'. He will be waiting." Twirls turned around and stomped to the Foster home.

KylieRinsley

29 May, 2012, 1:17 am

the **** mean acorns.

KylieRinsley

29 May, 2012, 1:34 am

When Twirls got to the orphanage, Sparklehooves was sitting there. Sparklehooves was born with no ears. Twirls waved at her. "uh, h-hi." Sparklehooves said. Twirls gave her an encouraging smile, then walked her inside. "Oh, Twist, you are late. Hurry up and clean yourself up. I must hurry, I'm almost late for a garden party." Hoity Toity said. "Yes, 'Father'." said Twirls as she walked to the shower room. Hoity Toity had commanded Twirls to call him father. Twirls came out and they galloped to the party. Twirls had to stay inside. Twirls was just sitting around, sighing at the two parties when none other than PRINCESS CELESTIA came! She said, "Twirls. Many fillies and colts tell me of your unrivaled bravery. Could you help me?" Twirls gawked, and slowly nodded. "There is a creature disrupting Canterlot. It is supposed to stay in the everfree mountains, but it has been terrorizing Canterlot! Would you care to try?" Twirls continued gawking, and again nodded. "Thank you. I'm sure you can do it!" The princess walked away, leaving Twirls still gawking.

Corona Plus

29 May, 2012, 9:38 pm

Sparklehooves said: I have no ears, but I can hear you.(not creepy, she has a screen in her eyes that puts whatever you say in words.

KylieRinsley

30 May, 2012, 1:12 am

Twirls left the party immediatly after the order to get rid of the frost troll. She went to the orphanage to take some of her belongings with her. She was about to leave when somepony stopped her. It was Sparklehooves. "I'm sorry, Sparklehooves. I can't talk now. I have just gotten a VERY serious order from Princess Celestia. Hmmm... If you would like to come though, I would be happy to oblige."

KylieRinsley

27 Jun, 2012, 12:35 am

Sparklehooves hesitated. "Alright. What's this mission?" "Some giant creature in the Everfree mountains is loose. C'mon!" So the two galloped off to the Everfree Mountains.

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