Nightclaw and Blaze looked up surprised from their victim. A dark red dragon with fiery markings was standing in front of them. “Or else?” Blaze said unimpressed by the red dragon. The dark red dragon stared angrily at Blaze with his golden eyes. “Or else I will tear you two apart…now leave the dragon alone!” he said angrily and he let out a deep warning growl. Blaze and Nightclaw and Blaze looked nervous “Calm down dude…we will leave him alone. Please don’t hurt us.” they said scared. “Good…now go away…or I’ll rip you apart!” the red dragon said fiercely and he growled again showing his sharp teeth. “We are leaving, we are leaving! Don’t kill us!” Nightclaw and Blaze said, and they ran away leaving Rechor behind bleeding. The red dragon quickly walked to Rechor. “Are you okay?” He asked worried. “Yes I am okay…I guess…I have had worse…Thanks for saving me, you are the first one who stood up for me” Rechor said to the red dragon. The red dragon looked shocked. “Really? What about your friends, don’t they help you?” the red dragon asked. “What friends? I don’t have any friends…” Rechor said on a depressed tone, staring at the ground. “Oh...I feel sorry for you…but I could be your friend” the red dragon said friendly. Rechor looked surprised. “Really? You want to be my friend?” Rechor asked hopefully. “Yes of course. My name is Torcher. What is your name?” Torcher asked. “My name is Rechor, nice to meet you Torcher!” Rechor said joyfully, happy that he had finally found a friend. And so the friendship between Torcher and Rechor began. They were best friends, and never far away from each other. They helped and played with each other

They had a very strong bond. But sadly…this bond was broken on one day...It all started when they were playing at Torcher’s island that unfortunate day. “Hey Rechor, wanna see something cool?” Torcher asked. “Yeah, sure. What is it?” Rechor asked curiously. “It’s a surprise. Follow me!” Torcher said mysteriously and he ran to a cave not too far away from them. “Hey wait for me!” Rechor laughed, and he followed Torcher wondering what his best friend wanted to show him. They arrived at the cave. “Look.” Torcher said and he pointed at the many red-orange glowing crystals inside the cave. “Wow! They are beautiful! What kind of crystals are they?” Rechor asked not looking away from the crystals. “They are fire crystals. They are a magical.” Torcher answered. “How do you mean magical?” Rechor asked curiously, still staring at the crystals with his orange eyes. “If you eat them you become bigger and stronger.” Torcher said looking a bit concerned. “Torcher don’t you realize that with these crystals we can become the biggest and strongest dragons in the world? No one will bully us!” Rechor said excited and he picked up one of the crystals. “Don’t eat it! The crystals also make you more aggressive and mean!” Torcher yelled, scared for the look he saw in Rechor’s eyes. But his friend wouldn’t listen. It was like the crystal hypnotized him, he couldn’t look away. He looked fascinated at the crystal, his flaming orange eyes meeting its fiery glow. “Eat it...” a mysterious voice said. “You will become bigger and stronger if you do…” The mysterious voice spoke again. Rechor slowly brought the crystal to his mouth and swallowed it. He immediately grew as big as Torcher. Rechor smiled, but it wasn’t a friendly smile. “I am big…I finally am big! But not big enough…” Rechor said on a slightly evil tone and he ate another crystal, growing a bit bigger than Torcher. “Rechor stop it!” Torcher yelled looking worried at his friend. “You don’t have to be big…we have each other…Please...spit out those crystals and become your normal friendly self.” Torcher said, trying his best to convince his friend. Rechor stared at Torcher for a while…he seemed to consider spitting them out…but then he shook his head and an evil fiery glow came from his eyes. “No!” He yelled. “That dragon is gone! He was small and weak! Now I am big and powerful! If I get all the crystals, I will be the biggest and strongest dragon in the world! No one will make fun of me!” Rechor let out a terrifying thundering evil laugh, and ate a third crystal. He became much bigger than Torcher and got a sharp blade at the end of his tail.

Torcher looked shocked at his friend, seeing his old friend transforming into an evil monster. “Rechor…leave my island...now” Torcher said while a tear ran down his cheek. “Leave!? I won’t leave until I ate every crystal on this island!” Rechor yelled, his friendly voice replaced by a deep mean one, and he swallowed a fourth crystal growing almost twice the size of Torcher. “I am sorry Rechor…but I have to stop you…and if that means I have to break our bond…I’ll do it.” Torcher spoke calmly with sorrow in his voice, and with pain in his heart he breathed his extremely hot fire at Rechor. Rechor roared in pain. “That wasn’t smart of you to do Torcher…Now I’ll have to kill you!” Rechor spoke angrily, his eyes glowing brighter than before, and he let out a dark purple flame. The flame missed its target. “I don’t want to do this Rechor…but you leave me no choice” Torcher concentrated and grew huge, setting himself on fire. Then he fiercely attacked Rechor biting and scratching him multiple times. Rechor let out a thundering roar in pain. “Stop that!” He yelled and he fought back, hitting Torcher with the blade at the end of his tail and scratching him. Torcher screamed in pain but kept biting and scratching Rechor, doing as much damage as possible.

They fought for a while until Rechor couldn’t take it anymore. “Stop! Please stop!” He begged Torcher. “If you want me to stop, you will have to leave my island” Torcher said while drops of blood and tears were running down his face. “Fine I’ll leave…but I’ll be back…and when I come back…I’ll kill you!” Rechor said, slowly walking backwards, not losing eye contact with Torcher. He then suddenly made a quick move towards the cave, grabbed a crystal, and quickly flew away. Torcher shrunk to his normal size, staring at the evil dragon that once was his friend. He kept staring at Rechor until he disappeared out of sight. “Goodbye Rechor…my old friend” and he burst into tears. Rechor found a big empty cave, and settled in there. He ate the last crystal he grabbed, and grew twice the size of Torcher, and got the power to grow bigger when angered. He now is an evil dragon. He is cruel, smart and easily angered. He kills dragons with his fire, lightning, or his deadly venom. “One day…I will kill Torcher…and I will eat all the fire crystals, and then no one can stop me.”
The end

@Zard You know that you can click the link below to go to the online comments and read them?

@Zard Oh, well sorry. But the story is 1383 words long. I first wrote it in my sketchbook and then in microsoft word. So I now copy pasted it in the online comments. It's too long for me to write by hand again. I might do it later, but I am not sure..

@Zard Well, if you scroll all the way down, there's a message saying "There's 4 more comments which aren't made using a 3DS Sysyem. Click here to read them." Or something like that. If you click it, it'll automatically take you to the Internet Browser where you can read all comments. Hope I helped.

dragonoligist. i read it.... WOW.... what a cool story! rechor and torcher mix well. my to fave charectors of yours! great job btw!

could you please try make a part 2 sorta thing??????

that's an interesting story

@Zard I read it, but I don't really get it. What has your PC got to do with the Internet Browser on your 3DS? If you aren't able to access the Internet Browser, then you'd technically not be able to access Colors! Gallery either.

Oh, now I get it. Parents are annoying sometimes. :/

And I thought no-one knew or cared about Parental Controls anyway. xD My parents don't care about what I do on my 3DS though. :P I feel sorry for you though.

Oh, thanks for following Zard!

Thanks!

So you were that hidden user? Why are you hidden?? I forst thought you were a ghost or something. xD

On Miiverse I mean.

Oh, I see.

So 11 likes but almost no one tells me what they think about the story?...thanks guys...Sorry I am just kinda depressed, and I worked really hard on this story. I am very proud of it..but you guys don't seem to like it..

I just finished reading. :) It's a great story and very well-written. I think I'll draw my contest picture based on a scene from this.

You should make more stories, you're a very good writer.

@Radiant Thanks. that means a lot to me.

You're welcome. :)

hang on dont forget me! read my first comment.... i love it i said tell meh more about the story.

@sideshow krusty Sorry for not thanking you. I really appreciate your comment. I recommend you to read my & pstp's 6th and 7th rp if you want to know more about Rechor.

Amazing story! :D

it ok! :)